So Siřec Oligu

[justin]

So Pere Cazo soei Siřecei Oligui e: tu řo sfahe eta so Siřec Oligu.
So Ftore Cazo soei Siřecei Oligui e: tu řo sfahe eta so Siřec Oligu.
So Tvere Cazo soei Siřecei Oligui: esli nëcto ušice "dešenei," iy čupre, iy kumpule so pol, urë so siř urokeše.
So Četve Cazo: santélece po ďunî zevî so siř.
So Pane Cazo: an siř nenapiyece, drukulî.
So Suese Cazo: tu siře sam hendán er sam calseom.
So Hepe Cazo: siř dénumu sul dezike dy fayretü.
Er so Cazo Žoce er Dernë: esli eto e so perem nočim lë ne so Siřec Oligu, ure le devreteu siřan.

The first rule of Fight Club is: you do not talk about Fight Club. The second rule of Fight Club is: you do not talk about Fight Club. Third rule of Fight Club: someone yells stop, goes limp, taps out, the fight is over. Fourth rule: only two guys to a fight. Fifth rule: one fight at a time, fellas. Sixth rule: no shirts, no shoes. Seventh rule: fights will go on as long as they have to. And the eighth and final rule: if this is your first night at Fight Club, you have to fight.

[zompist]

An siř nenapiyece, drukulî.

Good job! There's a couple places where you're missing a dative (e.g. after ne). And a couple rules could be simplified:

3. ... urë so siř urokeše.
6. Tu siře sam hendán er sam calseom.

[justin]

Okay. Fixed those. What about "one fight at a time"? I couldn't find anything in the grammar for that.

[zompist]

That was the first line in my reply.

Also, the ne is in #8; should be ...e soán Siřecán Oligun.

[zompist]

I added this to Almeopedia, with a couple corrections.