Help your conlang fluency (2)

[ol bofosh]

Mmpleyin wiva Gnoami-shlanwij.
I'm playing with a Gnoamish language.

Tneedziqsoangrammuhr'm'voakab
It needs its own grammar and vocab.

Snoqree-uhleepolleesymfeqik-sjuspoakuhmvereefahst.
It's not really polysynthetic, it's just spoken really fast.

[KathTheDragon]

Zwá hyáeiltré ín orðrí í ánanar eðá?
So the words run into each other?

[Dē Graut Bʉr]

Dē lygt oss dē.
It seems so.

[Thry]

Dos gleict...
That's what it looks like xD.

[GrinningManiac]

itimu la m iby tipatipa iyombayoa la nga
ˈidɪmũ ɻə ibʲ ˈtibʲədɪbʲə ˈijoˌmbajoa ɻə ŋa
I wouldn't think that speaking quickly is put into writing.

[Nortaneous]

icdžastiñglišriqnwīrdeniwej, ěndwiťnōspejsz. lŭk, ajkndūiqtū

[Dē Graut Bʉr]

Osstalling?
Translation?

[Jipí]

Translation?

"It's just English written weird anyway, and with no space. Look, I can do it, too."

[Izambri]

Te ajo parmatz te agets gent auronts nams perts na calces anglises: Bermingam, Brèstol, Lois, Llèrbol, Londe, Mancestre è Syèfel.
Let be known that these are the official Hellesan names of some English cities: Birmingham, Bristol, Leeds, Liverpool, London, Manchester and Sheffield.

[abaddamn]

Amin narimbo 'ramanavairam... Igyapty-aramanavayom. Lunkvokivih kom.
Let us all remove spaces in favor of logograms... Like Egyptian Heiroglyphics. Or Chinese.

[clawgrip]

Amin narimbo 'ramanavairam... Igyapty-aramanavayom. Lunkvokivih kom.
Let us all remove spaces in favor of logograms... Like Egyptian Heiroglyphics. Or Chinese.

Hwai wgoysgung choakeuu ork seuk ut teuk sdoanfkeupsay teuk huoo pkooaypsay.
1 agree everyone here VOL write use logographic.script use NEG space
I agree. Let's all write in logographic scripts that don't have spaces.

Oh btw, what kind of writing implement can make both filled and 'hollow' rectangles? Is this supposed to be written with a stylus that has one flattened end that permits making scratches with the broad side and thin lines with the narrow side, and a hollowed-out part at the other end?

Hwai treuk huoo cheung wgoydiang uang lormay.
1 know NEG but idea there.MED be.deftly.performed
I don't know, but that's a pretty good idea.

[Dē Graut Bʉr]

Ditttallhepptgynworrtsgryfingmaraklanksgryfingenndēvortaugossworrtsgytingsgisgryft.
Thislanguagedoesnothavealogographicwritingbutanalphabetanditisalsowrittenwithspaces.

[rr]

Geldecielanguyaralekklosalazo, aliosaldaceakiecansalddazodelale.
Thislanguagehasmanysimilarwords, andthatiswhyspacesarenecessary.

[Dē Graut Bʉr]

Klagnikktossworrtsgytings, zessissgiwelltig.
Donotcomplainaboutspaces, theyareawesome.

[prettydragoon]

ñoa· kuho raya:
Typographical space. The final frontier.

to >ñoa< to >uva< yumatirepa >space< imekave:
Both 'blank space' and 'outer space' are called 'space' in English.

saki vahu rotuke yakavo:
I think that is very confusing.

[rr]

Sald acea kiecan sald gis.
That is why they are different in my language.

Sald dazo tu Ingidi "space" kadnyatide.
Dazo in English is typographical space.

Sald atsetuca tu Ingidi "space" iye atsetu.
Atsetuca in English is the space with stars.

[Lyhoko Leaci]

Mun tao daeqa cor Ancarona cor. Muncor un oc toc un corbim mun danas.
Ancaron logograms are sometimes written with spaces. They can be found between sentences and next to prepositions (postpostions) and conjunctions.

Or for only having spaces where Ancaron has spaces: Ancaronlogogramsaresometimeswritten with spaces. Theycanbefound between sentences and nextto prepositions(postpostions) and conjunctions.

(And with Ancaron using the same word for several parts of speech, they're kind of necessary.)

Mun = space/hole/between/dig
Bacpub = (outer) space

[Jipí]

Angmətahanasāynarāntiyānasnāeda-miraneri,
nārya ang vacay engyam eda-miraneri edauyi.

AT PST-write-HAB-1SG.T language.created-NMLZ-P 1SG.GEN this=way-INS,
but AT like-1SG.T be.more-PTCP this=way.INS now

Iusedtowritemyconlanginthisway,
but I like it better in this way now.

[Izambri]

Te ajo parmatz te agets gent auronts nams perts na calces neerlandanes: Amsterdam, s'Hag, Roterdam, Utric, Eindove, Breda è Gruns.
Let be known that these are the official Hellesan names of some Dutch cities: Amsterdam, The Hague, Rotterdam, Utrecht, Eindhoven, Breda and Groningen.

Ê agets eu gent n'aurondes iseres: Brabant Marbendonís, Drente, Flèvoland, Frísland, Frise, Ghèrland, Gherle, Grunes, Hoŀlanda Saurendonise, Hoŀlanda Marbendonise, Lèmburg, Overíssel, Sàŀlant, Tuente, Utric è Zelanda.
And these are the names of some regions: North Brabant, Drenthe, Flevoland, Friesland, Frisia, Gelderland, Guelders, Groningen, South Holland, North Holland, Limburg, Overijssel, Salland, Twente, Utrecht and Zeeland.

[Bristel]

Qanizi aparanidaqimizu Tarasoni imi Tekusasoni igidi, kidi pekesino.
[ʔaniⁿzi aparaniⁿdaʔimiⁿzu tarasoni imi tekusasoni iᵑgiⁿdi | kiⁿdi pekesino]
I was working on transliterated names for Dallas and other Texan names while I was on vacation there.

Taraso, Risadusona, Irubigu, Potu Waso, Qusutono, Asutono, Eru Paso, Iqiru Kurisiti, Sanadoniqo, Amariro imi nironi.
[taraso risaⁿdusona iruᵐbiᵑgu potu waso ʔusutono asutono eru paso iʔiru kurisiti sanaⁿdoniʔo amariro imi nironi]
Dallas, Richardson, Irving, Fort Worth, Houston, Austin, El Paso, Corpus Christi, San Antonio, Amarillo and others.

[Nortaneous]

Vʼëng xë zë zi e s ʼEvröp, zi veng... ʼAmsërdam, Hag, Roterdam, Ötrext, Eynhovë, Breda, Gronëngë. ʼA zi vo nöʼ.
[ʔβɪŋ xɪ dʒɪ dʒjes ʔɛβɾʊp, dʒi βɛŋ... ʔamtʃɪɾdam, hǎɣ, ɾɔtɛɾdam, ʊtɾ̥ɛxt, ɛjnɔ̌βɪ, βɾɛda, ɣɾɔnɪŋɪ. ʔa dʒi βɔ nʊʔ]
If Vʼëng were spoken in Europe, it would have... Amsterdam, etc. But it would also look very different.

[Dē Graut Bʉr]

Dē zyt worrtsgytings tʉssig oss worrts enn inn dē spass zyt dē styress.
There are worrtsgytings between words and in the spass there are stars.

[GrinningManiac]

Yavambimoa nga bumi m i bumi ibina ibingingi saingadoningi mungishimingi
javam͜bɪ̃mʲɔ̃ə ŋə bumʲ m i bumʲ ibʲɪnə ibʲɪŋɪ̃ŋʲ sæiŋʲədonɪ̃ŋʲ mũŋɪ̃ʃʲɪmɪ̃ŋʲ
I steal words, history and vocab derivation from the real world (earth) for my own world.

[Pazmivaniye]

La ki tiore dirio de sero la ritue lumaroso tisidi eú rotuadi taja deí paleto. Taika rama sibuadi: lumaroso muvoi iliaté, lumaroso muvoi roté, mi lumaroso muvoi niasu deí norotua a no poso luaposo.
I can't decide how I want to import names from real languages into Palethian. There are three options: import the written form, import the spoken form, or import the older form into the protolanguage and let it evolve.

Sesa la rote lo guidai o ki dui enai mi gi taja, ki nieko gui roi eú dije taja la pona.
When I am talking about something which is not a real place or person, I like not having any word from the real world.

[Izambri]

Te ajo parmatz te agets gent auronts nams perts na calces occitanes: Ais na Provença, Avinyó, Bordeu, Carcassona, Clarmont n'Arvernye, Llemotges, Massella, Mònec, Montpeller, Narbona, Niça, Nimes è Tolosa.
Let be known that these are the official Hellesan names of some Occitan cities: Aix-en-Provence, Avignon, Bordeaux, Carcassonne, Clermont-Ferrand, Limoges, Marseille, Monaco, Montpellier, Narbonne, Nice, Nîmes and Toulouse.

Ê agets eu gent n'aurondes iseres: Arvernye, Bearn, Borbonís, Dalfinat, Gascunya, Ghiana, Llemosí, Llengadoc, Mòneghe, Aisè na Foys, Aisè Niçard, Provença è Navades Occitanes.
And these are the names of some regions: Auvergne, Béarn, Bourbonnais, Dauphiné, Gascony, Guienne, Limousin, Languedoc, Monaco, Foix Country, Niçard Country, Provence and Occitan Valleys.