Help your conlang fluency (2)

[Thry]

Es presumptement melyor de la música clássica nais-balyable, des que des un punct de veure evoluteu plena el propósit de la música meil (mover i la synchronizatión de las anmas).
It is arguably better than non-danceable classical music, since from an evolutive point of view it fulfills the purpose of music better (movement and synchronization of souls).

Trolleis.
I'm trolling.

Mas s'es divers.
But it's fun.

[Nate]

FeFengapuise lafanfepetuu suyul "naifutai yatekinaisu" (naisatulle)! "Yuulautelasi" (Yuulaupa nuutaifutai) lusefe.
へヘンガプイセら好へぺつうす人「ない曲ヤ興ないす」（ない常れ）！「ユウラウテラシ」（ユウラウパぬう悪曲）ろせへ。
People who like the Vengaboys aren't "interested in music" (usually)! It's Eurotrash (bad music of Europe).

'Pun pun pun pun' fisiufutai keisesinusule kafi:
「プンプンプンプン」ひ前曲けい結紙れ有ひ：
The above song 'Boom boom boom boom' is at this link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=llyiQ4I-mcQ

Eǵ tene á curiósitas as ke mode á conştrolengve vað. Eş á gramatik simile as í Japonike?
I'm interested in how your conlang works. Is the grammar similar to Japanese?

Eş difissil as şkriver en Japonike par lo? Sonpos as imajinar kaðer é kanjis molte.
Is it difficult to write in Japanese for it? I can imagine messing up the kanji a lot.

[finlay]

FeFengapuise lafanfepetuu suyul "naifutai yatekinaisu" (naisatulle)! "Yuulautelasi" (Yuulaupa nuutaifutai) lusefe.
へヘンガプイセら好へぺつうす人「ない曲ヤ興ないす」（ない常れ）！「ユウラウテラシ」（ユウラウパぬう悪曲）ろせへ。
People who like the Vengaboys aren't "interested in music" (usually)! It's Eurotrash (bad music of Europe).

'Pun pun pun pun' fisiufutai keisesinusule kafi:
「プンプンプンプン」ひ前曲けい結紙れ有ひ：
The above song 'Boom boom boom boom' is at this link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=llyiQ4I-mcQ

Eǵ tene á curiósitas as ke mode á conştrolengve vað. Eş á gramatik simile as í Japonike?
I'm interested in how your conlang works. Is the grammar similar to Japanese?

Eş difissil as şkriver en Japonike par lo? Sonpos as imajinar kaðer é kanjis molte.
Is it difficult to write in Japanese for it? I can imagine messing up the kanji a lot.

The syntax is similar, but the rest of the grammar isn't really (it uses prefixes a lot, has a pervasive grammaticalized count/mass distinction and distinguishes indefinite and definite nouns among other things). However, the phonological structure is similar enough that it's quite easy to write it in hiragana with a couple of modifications (る is -l, ろ is lu (as there's no /o/), え is ye, い is yi but also -i for the only ambiguity in the system, f- is written with h-), which is part of the reason I wanted to try it, and the other reason is that the words compound freely, a bit like building blocks, which lends itself to kanji quite well – the morphology is perhaps too simple in fact, as for instance Japanese has elements of this building-block thing but has various different ways of accomplishing it and changes the sound of many of the resulting compounds. Like, Yaufulti never changes the form of the root basically. I'm thinking I might revamp the language a little bit and introduce some way of chaoticizing the words or something.

Writing it in Japanese is just a side amusement, anyway, and a way for me to get extra practice at Japanese, actually, as I have to sometimes try and remember how to write a corresponding word in Japanese, and possibly learn some extra kanji while I'm at it. I haven't actually recorded any of the correspondences in my dictionary. I also thought for those of you that can understand kanji (so you, clawgrip and maybe one other person) you can draw up some of the correspondences yourself. For instance 曲 is futai, which means song as a count noun (ie with su- or fu-) and music as a mass noun (ie with ki- or nai-).

[masako]

mo kalamya tayo ka
place language.make 2SG.POSS Q
Where is your conlang?

[----]

Kaláaw sa kíí'ka'a kínyahni'né'e xú yíindéren!
I'd like to see you write all that in Kala!

[finlay]

sinkusaza
stop

[Imralu]

Tu na.
I have stopped.

[Izambri]

"Yuulautelasi" (Yuulaupa nuutaifutai) lusefe.
It's Eurotrash (bad music of Europe).

Es presumptement melyor de la música clássica nais-balyable, des que des un punct de veure evoluteu plena el propósit de la música meil (mover i la synchronizatión de las anmas).
It is arguably better than non-danceable classical music, since from an evolutive point of view it fulfills the purpose of music better (movement and synchronization of souls).

Manzà èu se laie dou anamedatze na Vengaboys; tir datz te èu se míncie gras armaganç.
Funnily enough it's Vengaboy's best song; the only one, in fact, that is enough catching.

[Thry]

Manzà èu se laie dou anamedatze na Vengaboys; tir datz te èu se míncie gras armaganç.
Funnily enough it's Vengaboy's best song; the only one, in fact, that is catching enough.

Ben, y pensand, sais nais qual altra d'ils.
Wel, er dencand, e cneie ny ae antere ew hens.
Well, thinking about it, I don't know any other from them.

[Izambri]

Mà, tra mi, na batget: enough catching.
No, the other way for me: enough catching.

*catching enough has a slightly different meaning.

[Thry]

Mas s'es agrammatical.
But it's ungrammatical.

[Izambri]

Mas s'es agrammatical.
But it's ungrammatical.

Tus ī mine nealamne, nin.
Not in my dialect, baby.

[Thry]

Hy es se maldict macron altreç!
There's that damn macron again!

A COSSSS
WHYYYY

[Izambri]

Senyont-tis as darind na s'àfon!
You, yield to the charm of macrons!

[Thry]

Ivas amer a locás un avatar d'un macron, ivas nais?
You'd love I uploaded a macron avatar, wouldn't you?

Hais resíster.

[Izambri]

Atzà agemie... cotetire RS
A macron avatar would be... poor. xD

[Rhetorica]

Makrenei saritē kin. Trūindeia sakan, mītevīkan il makrete il nolī melīne!
I could do macrons. Look at me, queen of macrons everywhere!

[masako]

sinkusaza
stop

ak ta
no u

[Lyhoko Leaci]

Gebba gamhau mzxhïnvüymaukauwn?
Geb̄a gamā̄ mzxï̄nvüymākāwn?
Does the student want to learn more about them/it? ((the) macron(s))?

...Zukish does not work with macrons...

..Though "Lyōko" would be more likely to be pronounced correctly than "Lyhoko"...

[finlay]

Mà, tra mi, na batget: enough catching.
No, the other way for me: enough catching.

*catching enough has a slightly different meaning.

Tai luseza.
wrong

Ya nansiufutai, (ku sungelunpe), Fefengakiune lalaife feneuzisu tuyefenan.
But their last song (what was it) The Vengabus is coming had the same tune (as Boom Boom Boom Boom).

[Imralu]

Tu hu nas ixi mala huji nini humes ali hune kuaxay kaw uxu kirisimasw.
I went to the house of the mother of a friend of mine to eat for Christmas.

Vikany xu tiaw mie ba te!
The food was vegan but it was really good!

Ngolu ba te ju nini.
The mother is a really nice person.

Ilar inu xi jamany xi taakixy.
We spoke German and Turkish.

ak ta
no u

car ewa
no u

aher ena
yes me

tebi eiju
maybe them.VOC

[Imralu]

Mas s'es agrammatical.
But it's ungrammatical.

Tus ī mine nealamne, nin.
Not in my dialect, baby.

Ha ca keralony wa?
Aren't you Catalonian?

In my dialect it's catchy enough. The word "catching" doesn't really exist as an adjective for me but sounds like it would mean 'contageous'. BTW: enough precedes nouns (enough water) and follows adjectives (wet enough).

[Thry]

Tant que? El catalán es un dialect d'ambs ils aspanyol id inglés.
So what? Catalonian is a dialect of both Spanish and English.

[Imralu]

Tant que? El catalán es un dialect d'ambs ils aspanyol id inglés.
So what? Catalonian is a dialect of both Spanish and English.

Har ahe?
Yeah?

[Thry]

aher eiju