Help your conlang fluency (2)

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(? I don't see the problem. I used the new gloss tags if it matters. What does it look like to you?)
Nūdhrēmnāva naraśva, dṛk śraṣrāsit nūdhrēmanīṣṣ iźdatīyyīm woḥīm madhēyyaṣṣi.
satisfaction-DEF.SG-LOC live.PERFECTIVE-1P.INCL but work-DEF.SG-PRIV satisfaction-DEF.PL.NOM weakeness-DEF.PL-DAT only lead-FUT-3P

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Siöö jandeng raiglin zåbei tandiüłåd;
nää džunnfin kukuch vklaivei sivei tåd.
Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei.

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That's...weird. It looks perfectly fine on my end and I checked on another computer.

EDIT: I realized the problem. I added both bold and gloss tags; gloss tags already bolden it, so they basically became "double-bolded". It should look fine now.
Nūdhrēmnāva naraśva, dṛk śraṣrāsit nūdhrēmanīṣṣ iźdatīyyīm woḥīm madhēyyaṣṣi.
satisfaction-DEF.SG-LOC live.PERFECTIVE-1P.INCL but work-DEF.SG-PRIV satisfaction-DEF.PL.NOM weakeness-DEF.PL-DAT only lead-FUT-3P

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Ruig te am casodatz ne Rhetorica.
Rungi Rhetoricatē kasguadatse agimami

I think we have startled Rhetorica.
Un llapis mai dibuixa sense una mà.

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Also, the gloss tags only work properly when a separate set is used for each word in the language being glossed.
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Halian wrote:Also, the gloss tags only work properly when a separate set is used for each word in the language being glossed.
mo kalamya tayo ka
place language.make 2SG.POSS Q
Where is your conlang?

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Reynuan hangg?
reyn=va=an hang-ng
thing-Q-TOP work-ACT.IPFV

How does this work?
Siöö jandeng raiglin zåbei tandiüłåd;
nää džunnfin kukuch vklaivei sivei tåd.
Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei.

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Bèr jan nuu è noll 2014, terrans.
Happy new year and prosperous 2014, Terrans.
Un llapis mai dibuixa sense una mà.

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Deheda bittu wiińa taklenase madamedi taśyde.
/ðɛxɛða βitːu wiːɲa taklɛnasɛ maðamɛði taɕyðɛ/
3rd.C-NEAR-NOM.SG 1.ORD recent construct-STAT.PASS language.ACC-POSS.1st.SG-ACC.SG copula-ACC.3rd.C.SG-NOM.3rd.A.SG
This is the first recent conlang by me.
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Siöö jandeng raiglin zåbei tandiüłåd;
nää džunnfin kukuch vklaivei sivei tåd.
Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei.

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ryssa on paska, suomi on paras eks de de de
wisdom can only be achieved through ES
Slava, čĭstŭ, hrabrostĭ!

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Nortaneous wrote:Reynuan hangg?
reyn=va=an hang-ng
thing-Q-TOP work-ACT.IPFV

How does this work?
Mí tshístenú idzhindré, mentí tsoiles ilú ole.
[g=one]Mí[/g] [g=word-ACC.SG.N]tshíst-enú[/g] [g=give-2SG.PRS.IMP]idzh-indré,[/g] [g=each]mentí[/g] [g=space-LOC]tsoil-es[/g] [g=like]ilú[/g] [g=this-N]ol-e.[/g]
Give one word per tag, like this.

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Izambri wrote:Bèr jan nuu è noll 2014, terrans.
Happy new year and prosperous 2014, Terrans.
Same for the Taurans!
Egal als taurans!
[ə.ˈgal əls tɔ.ˈɾans]

Whenever it is, of course.
Qualquand seia, clar.
[kwal.ˈkwand si klaɾ]

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Dinare, 15 na mavendres nas 3636.
Today is Dinare, Mavendres 15th, 3636.
Un llapis mai dibuixa sense una mà.

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Had y al mod com 'hois' y seia mais arbitrar?
Is there any way in which 'today' is not arbitrary there?

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Thry wrote:Had y al mod com 'hois' y seia mais arbitrar?
Is there any way in which 'today' is not arbitrary there?
Èvic qua sam nadam geraic domalís.
Nas Nolde na s'Addonamanzh nais Temarencis. Mense IV, 16.

It is objectively there just as tomorrow will be here too.
From the Book of the Advent of the Peoples of the Sea. Tale IV, 16.
Un llapis mai dibuixa sense una mà.

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Zensohukut valẽr lāklun aśruxeśa.
ocean-nation mind<ACC> net-ADJ-N-ACC after-flow-ANIM-3.PL.ABSENT
The sea people appear to be philosophical.

Õn fiźu hēmas marmkumē niva aumēna.
or all-N occasion decree-PASS-N=TEMP old<ANIM>-PL
Or simply late to every appointment.

(Maram ‘gloss’ xoŋuðitraŋan ā vekraŋan a’i nujaido mē, ikśontú?)
order 'gloss' into-towards-word<ACC.PL> and glue-word<ACC.PL> NEG like-INAN NEG, Q=correct-ADV
(The gloss tag doesn't like infixes and clitics, apparently?)
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Ζά θο μιανγ ῦατ φανγτλζαυ τυα ζά κεο φανγῦιοκ τυα ζά.
šā t'o mjang vat p'angtɬau twa šā kë p'angvük twa šā
/ɕaː tʕo mʲaŋ βat tʷa pʕaŋtɬaw tʷa ɕaː kø pʕaŋβyk tʷa ɕaː/
1 PST never to.write of conworld of me or conpeople of me
I've never wrote anything about my conworlds or conpeople...
I am nerd, hear me /ɹoʊɹ/!

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Astraios wrote:18 ndika gin hua, 18 ndika Imralutsil ghua. 18 ndika zame ihugia.
If you're 18, Imralu's 18 too. We are all 18.
Ca. Egiorava year yuwi une.
[g=be.not]ca(r)[/g] | [g=be.trio]engio(r)-[/g][g=be.group.of.ten]ava(n)[/g] [g=be.year]yea(r)[/g] [g=GEN.2s.ANIM]yuwi[/g] [g=GEN.1s.MASC]une(s)[/g]
No. We are thirty.

EDIT: Fucked up the grammar.
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Imralu wrote:Ca. Egiorava year uvu na.
[g=be.not]ca(r)[/g] | [g=be.trio]engio(r)-[/g][g=be.group.of.ten]ava(n)[/g] [g=be.year]yea(r)[/g] [g=NOM.2s.ANIM]uvu[/g] [g=NOM.1s.MASC]na(s)[/g]
No. We are thirty.
Tsxa. Gavndika ihugia!
Yuck. We're old!

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Imralu wrote:
Astraios wrote:18 ndika gin hua, 18 ndika Imralutsil ghua. 18 ndika zame ihugia.
If you're 18, Imralu's 18 too. We are all 18.
Ca. Egiorava year uvu na.
[g=be.not]ca(r)[/g] | [g=be.trio]engio(r)-[/g][g=be.group.of.ten]ava(n)[/g] [g=be.year]yea(r)[/g] [g=NOM.2s.ANIM]uvu[/g] [g=NOM.1s.MASC]na(s)[/g]
No. We are thirty.
Ris! Eu ei faruig sam "we are thirsty".
Lol, I read that as "we are thirsty".
Un llapis mai dibuixa sense una mà.

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Astraios wrote:
Imralu wrote:Ca. Egiorava year uvu na.
[g=be.not]ca(r)[/g] | [g=be.trio]engio(r)-[/g][g=be.group.of.ten]ava(n)[/g] [g=be.year]yea(r)[/g] [g=NOM.2s.ANIM]uvu[/g] [g=NOM.1s.MASC]na(s)[/g]
No. We are thirty.
Tsxa. Gavndika ihugia!
Yuck. We're old!
Kuya ju nini huwe.
[g=be.old.woman]kuya[/g] [g=NOM.3s.DEF.ANIM.REL]ju[/g] [g=be.mother]nini[/g] [g=VRB-]h-[/g][g=GEN.2s.MASC]uwe[/g]
Your mother's old.
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Imralu wrote:Kuya ju nini huwe.
[g=be.old.woman]kuya[/g] [g=NOM.3s.DEF.ANIM.REL]ju[/g] [g=be.mother]nini[/g] [g=VRB-]h-[/g][g=GEN.2s.MASC]uwe[/g]
Your mother's old.
22 ndika cih gavndika hugia.
Everyone over 22 is old.

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