Help your conlang fluency (2)

[Dē Graut Bʉr]

Dē bʉr iss dē stirgissē!
The bear is the strongest!

[masako]

Dē bʉr iss dē stirgissē!
The bear is the strongest!

tlo'o kue kuma manaha
The elephant is stronger than the bear.

[WeepingElf]

Asa gretil grecis gramad.
AOR-SER-3SG:P pen strong-CMP sword-ABL
The pen is stronger than the sword.

[masako]

Asa gretil grecis gramad.

yema punya itlon
They both stab equally.

[Dewrad]

'atā barūq wi-'atki
My dad's stronger than your dad.

[Bristel]

'atā barūq wi-'atki
My dad's stronger than your dad.

Es balces mó avontír ol tó athír.
[es balkes moː avontʲiːr ol toː aθʲiːr]
My uncle's stronger than your father.

Is that a Semitic conlang?

[Hallow XIII]

Owiowim ayusahampoy ntewaisempiwehkam uwauwapwaŋ ntewainup ho ŋkitenwib.
Even though your various relatives may be strong, they are not stronger than my grandmother.

[äreo]

Áillica é torrosse mixístimme thímirmasco.
sacramental.wine COP.PRES.3S strong.COMP potent.SUP think.INF-way-COMP

Bristel, ta cdět tác mea dmecsa Msěrsca. Ctá co li tácn prělmire?
Bristel 2S.GEN build.PP language 1S.DAT recall.PRES Msěrsca what C/COP 3S.GEN language-GEN influence.PL
Bristel, your conlang reminds me of Msěrsca. What are its natlang (or other) influences?

[احمکي ارش-ھجن]

Owiowim ayusahampoy ntewaisempiwehkam uwauwapwaŋ ntewainup ho ŋkitenwib.
Even though your various relatives may be strong, they are not stronger than my grandmother.

ʾAhtal šadiki ṉaḥrad ya!
My goat is stronger!

[kusuri]

Mäma, tájjio, akkigusu sàji nrízlomà rákkarihü?
But does your goat prefer egg whites or egg middles??

[احمکي ارش-ھجن]

Mäma, tájjio, akkigusu sàji nrízlomà rákkarihü?
But does your goat prefer egg whites or egg middles??

Šemt! ʾAhtal šadiki šamřiř qudar!
None! My goat devours knowledge!

[hwhatting]

Bristel, your conlang reminds me of Msěrsca. What are its natlang (or other) influences?

It clearly seems to be inspired by Old Irish.

Šemt! ʾAhtal šadiki šamřiř qudar!
None! My goat devours knowledge!

Fa yau sa capra tai's sídi?
INT then ART-F.SG.NOM (she-)goat-SG.NOM 2SG-DAT be-PRES.ACT.CLIT.3SG wise-F.SG.NOM
So your goat is wise?

[masako]

na poti yohak
I do not have a goat.

ehe na ke unya nikya nomo
However, I do enjoy devouring knowledge.

[احمکي ارش-ھجن]

Šemt! ʾAhtal šadiki šamřiř qudar!
None! My goat devours knowledge!

Fa yau sa capra tai's sídi?
INT then ART-F.SG.NOM (she-)goat-SG.NOM 2SG-DAT be-PRES.ACT.CLIT.3SG wise-F.SG.NOM
So your goat is wise?

Tʾam, ʾahtal šadiki saḥǧad ya!
Ẕaẏ ʾišib qudar ʾitim.
Yes, my goat is most wise/more wise
I do not eat him.

(The superlative is the same as comparitve, there is no distinguishment between more and most)

[Lambuzhao]

Dē bʉr iss dē stirgissē!
The bear is the strongest!

tlo'o kue kuma manaha
The elephant is stronger than the bear.

Færghljossirür ist þe Schölduängereköbvj dån Langschnæze, ob smïccolirür tuo den Dengsnappiningeres.
Brave-COMPAR be<PRS>3SG DEF.F.NOM.SG beetle.cow-NOM ADV elephant-OBJ, CNJ tasty-COMPAR PRP DEF.N.GEN <Dringsnappininger>GEN
The cape-buffalo is braver than the elephant, but tastier to the bear.

*Technically, the Dringsnappininger is a bear-like future descendant of a skunk, but close enough.

[Lambuzhao]

Asa gretil grecis gramad.

yema punya itlon
They both stab equally.

Rozwi

ʔol ʔeigdlan yaza čoazyau zurχtaχek mauʕauθ, kai sorbum kēk čoazyauθ.
PRP truth-GEN CNJ dense.tallow-NOM CAUS-difficulty-VBLZ.PRS.3SG quill-ACC CNJ sword-NOM cut<DEP>PRS.3SG dense.tallow-ACC
Truly, but wax clots a pen; the sword slices wax.

[masako]

ama ete nayo tsekua na yala kimyon
When my pen is clotted I walk strangely.

[Bristel]

Bristel, ta cdět tác mea dmecsa Msěrsca. Ctá co li tácn prělmire?
Bristel 2S.GEN build.PP language 1S.DAT recall.PRES Msěrsca what C/COP 3S.GEN language-GEN influence.PL
Bristel, your conlang reminds me of Msěrsca. What are its natlang (or other) influences?

Hercuníí nya dasimin Gaaidelegõõ imin (sa hwatting-anaa nago), pasu amarazingin déléén t'ala-K'eletikegõõ.
Ercunic is inspired by Old Irish a bit (as hwatting said), but it is a daughterlang of Proto-Celtic.

It might look a lot like Old Irish, but it has a sort of odd mixture of features from all Celtic languages, and I think Gaulish in particular.

[Chagen]

Jma kansṛt allu ya? Ṣoṣūrau urnātṛ guqāya strāvyaṣṣi ya?
why die-PTCPL-PST-ACT=INTENS=EMPH class-DEF.SG.PL everyone-DEF.SG-GEN time-DEF.SG-ACC grab-PERF-3P=EMPH
Why so dead? Have classes taken everyone's time up or something?

[masako]

nul taye malek rudumla
no-one 2sg-DAT talk-INF want-3pl-NEG
No one wants to talk to you

[Chagen]

Jift allu mētvūyīm
rude-ATHEM-INDEF.SG=INTENS speak-INFIN-DAT
That's a very rude thing to say.

[Thry]

Hir tryde at syn lolly (y lae mir). Ac yae, de classer eten manae dyd.
He was trying to be funny (I laughed). But yeah, classes are time-consuming.

[Dewrad]

Hir tryde at syn lolly(y lae mir). Ac yae, de classer eten manae dyd.
He was trying to be funny (I laughed). But yeah, classes are time-consuming.

Igân is-sa azzâr kî ino.

i-

1SG-

gân

see.IMP

iN-

ACC-

sa

REL

a-

REL-

zzâr

do.STA

kî

2SG

iN

ACC

-o

-3SG

I see what you did there.

[masako]

That's a very rude thing to say.

ke tloka ketsuha
To lie is ruder.

na haki tohyoye
I chose the truth.

[hwhatting]

Pis waidai po is ta wéra?
INT.PRON-ANIM.NOM know-PRES.ACT.3SG REL.PRON-N.SG.NOM be-PRES.ACT.3SG ART-N.PL.NOM true-N.PL.NOM
Who knows what is the truth?