Help your conlang fluency (2)

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Thry wrote:rubin pls
Kvén lénisos Rubín?
['tɕɛ̃n 'lɛ̃,nisos 'ʀu:,bɪn]
who be.3.pres rubin
Who's Rubin?
If it's from batman, I wouldn't know
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!! Ol dis tok tok bo Batman (im ya af cupit nem, kos im a fay pon dem bat man)... Dis a olda ting bo im yu tink?
[tongue clack] All this talking about Batman (who has a stupid name, because he fights bad men)... Is this all you think about?


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YourFace wrote:
Thry wrote:rubin pls
Kvén lénisos Rubín?
['tɕɛ̃n 'lɛ̃,nisos 'ʀu:,bɪn]
who be.3.pres rubin
Who's Rubin?
If it's from batman, I wouldn't know
Néacspáilhe sai "Róban" áedh ao sreat Dólán.
He misspelled "Robin" in a manner like the Dolan series. (My guess, anyway.)

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redli pls

(yae, you're right)

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Thry wrote:redli pls
thry y u do dis
Thry, why do you do this?
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Batmyan wqtjqt? Bat chencyp ye m tup chvp tqx ji wqtjqt?
[bámm̩̄jāɴ wɒ́dʒɒ̌ | bá tʃēɴtsz̩̀ jē mm̩̄ tù tʃv̩̀ tɒ̂ dʒī wɒ́dʒɒ̌]
penis-at-nose Q? penis center at face POSS 2S exist=on Q?
Siöö jandeng raiglin zåbei tandiüłåd;
nää džunnfin kukuch vklaivei sivei tåd.
Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei.

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jal wrote:!! Ol dis tok tok bo Batman (im ya af cupit nem, kos im a fay pon dem bat man)... Dis a olda ting bo im yu tink?
[tongue clack] All this talking about Batman (who has a stupid name, because he fights bad men)... Is this all you think about?


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Rozwi

Yaza to guγagez flemūdū ʔa to čudūtœ yō ‽
CNJ DEF.NOM.SG Crusader cape-INST CNJ DEF.NOM.SG wonder-GEN boy-NOM.SG
Batman and Robin ‽
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**NB – In Rozwi, yaza… ʔa implies a close relationship, like salt ‘n’ pepper, biscuits ‘n’ gravy, etc.
Cf. Lat. Atque, Grk. τε … τε
Tirgæn to čudūtœ yō toa guγagezom flemūdū restek.
<Tyerrgæ>LOC DEF.NOM.SG wonder-GEN boy –NOM.SG fight-PRS.3SG DEF.ABL.SG crusader-ABL
On Tirga {my conworld}, Robin fights Batman.

Trie yek to yō čudūtœ.
ADV be-PRS.3SG DEF.NOM.SG boy-NOM.SG wonder-GEN
That’s why he is the Boy Wonder.


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Lambuzhao wrote:In Rozwi, yaza… ʔa implies a close relationship, like salt ‘n’ pepper, biscuits ‘n’ gravy, etc.
De Sajiwan, minu me tok se "sol i pepa" steda "sol an pepa" fo dis. Wen minu tok bo Batman* an Robin, minu swel me tok "Batman geda Robin", fi min dem a klos, ova mi tingk "Batman i Robin" a mo olde.

*It me ray "Batman" in fi nem, kos - sem mi esplen - dis min "bat man". Ova "flay mos man" swel in lisn gut, so mi in se a wo im kol.


In Sajiwan, we can say "salt and pepper" instead of "salt and pepper" [using Spanish derived "i" instead of English derived "an"] for this. When talking about Batman* and Robin, we can also say "Batman with Robin" to indicate they're close, but I think "Batman and Robin" is more usual.

*It's likely "Batman" isn't his name, because - like I explained - this means "bad man". But "fly mouse man" [fly mouse = bat] also doesn't sound good, so I don't know what he's called.


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way yunu fi se <<caped crusader>> de Sajiwan den?
How do you say "caped crusader" in Sajiwan then?


Dis wo minu tok se de Roziwi.
This is what we say in Rozwi.

"Batman" (flaymos man) im sem a massacoorulf fi dem Roziwi.
"Batman" (bat man) is like a werewolf to the Rozwis.
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Sorry about the neologism there. Your conlang reminds me of my ex-girlfriend's Guyanese patois. So it was either *massacooraman+*wolf or else *jumbee+*wolf.
Wo yunu kol "werewolf" de Sajiwan?

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thry y u do dis
Thry, why do you do this?
Daen te hyr delden-mir at.
cuz dei told me tu

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Thry wrote:Daen te hyr delden-mir at.
cuz dei told me tu
Eterjozar kvén var? Orgánizaszjón?
Who told you to? The Organisation*?

*A Steins;Gate reference
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anime rzx, gztkzt chi ye gatxix lol
[jānīɴmēɴ rə̂ gə́kə́ tʃī jē gáʃî]
anime is wrong, go to church lol
Siöö jandeng raiglin zåbei tandiüłåd;
nää džunnfin kukuch vklaivei sivei tåd.
Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei.

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Da circe is eyble, haed at da mescite.
Church is evil, go to the mosque.
YourFace wrote:Eterjozar kvén var? Orgánizaszjón?
Who told you to? The Organisation*?
Ny dynen pedrer.
not ur perants

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YourFace wrote:Eterjozar kvén var? Orgánizaszjón?
Who told you to? The Organisation*?

*A Steins;Gate reference
el. say. kankurū.
[ɛl | saj | kankʊru]
El. Psy. Congroo.
[bɹ̠ˤʷɪs.təɫ]
Nōn quālibet inīquā cupiditāte illectus hoc agō
Yo te pongo en tu lugar...
Taisc mach Daró

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Thry wrote:Da circe is eyble, haed at da mescite.
Church is evil, go to the mosque.
YourFace wrote:Eterjozar kvén var? Orgánizaszjón?
Who told you to? The Organisation*?
Ny dynen pedrer.
not ur perants
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Kai to myatmoan ʔōytzagu bōfepētæ zorhvonek ʔeiduo done~tmēhræ.
CNJ DEF.NOM.SG love-GEN man<PL>GEN assembly-NOM <CAUS>bless<INCHOAT>PRS.3SG <AUG>ADV INF=be.present<NMLZ>
But the church of man love is such a holy place to be.

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De bilte des Hoddes send ny haelaien, hye send syndevollen. Hod caen ny syn ewbiltt. Brinned de circen. Allen luven Alla.
Images of God are not holy, they are sinful. God cannot be represented. Burn the churches. All praise Allah.

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♫♪♪ Bærnaðe denne Geifïrdbittanhese, ent drövaðe yeße Nirfvete
Burn-IMPTV DEF.M.OBJ.PL prayer.house<PL>OBJ CNJ drop-IMPTV DEF.N.PL.OBJ dish<PL>OBJ

Orfer hit’s dåt ün viznë Mirabeau Magnum ♫♪♪
CNJ 3SG.N=be-PRS.3SG REL.INAN despise-PST.3SG <Bilbo Baggins>

♫♪♪ Burn the churches, crack the plates; that’s what Bilbo Baggins hates. ♫♪♪

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Lambuzhao wrote:♫♪♪ Bærnaðe denne Geifïrdbittanhese, ent drövaðe yeße Nirfvete
Burn-IMPTV DEF.M.OBJ.PL prayer.house<PL>OBJ CNJ drop-IMPTV DEF.N.PL.OBJ dish<PL>OBJ

Orfer hit’s dåt ün viznë Mirabeau Magnum ♫♪♪
CNJ 3SG.N=be-PRS.3SG REL.INAN despise-PST.3SG <Bilbo Baggins>

♫♪♪ Burn the churches, crack the plates; that’s what Bilbo Baggins hates. ♫♪♪
Xenjareg.
You monster.
Don't you dare make Bilbo angry. He'll rek your ass to Sauron.
Bristel wrote:
YourFace wrote:Eterjozar kvén var? Orgánizaszjón?
Who told you to? The Organisation*?

*A Steins;Gate reference
el. say. kankurū.
[ɛl | saj | kankʊru]
El. Psy. Congroo.
Génre alejo, ezenos etgénrejav bún veger. Bubelelenos gún lén la búnti. Buzelnarnos bún gún. Kvalenos gún.
Remembering something that no one else can is a painful thing. You can't talk to anyone about it. No one will understand you. You'll be alone.
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YourFace wrote: Xenjareg.[/b
You monster.

Rouwej dåcün wïrdej

regret--PRS=1SG.NOM REL become<PST>=1SG.NOM
I hate what I’ve become

‘S þe Nochtesmærggh namsght.
be-PRS.3SG DEF.F.NOM.SG nightmare take.hold<PFT.PTCP>
The nightmare’s just begun


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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u9NStVkSCuk

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Don't you dare make Bilbo angry. He'll rek your ass to Sauron.



♫♪♪ Orfer beæt’s, beæt’s Mirabeau Brünne♫♪♪
CNJ bad=be-PRS.3SG bad=be-PRS.3SG <Bilbo Brown>
‘cuz he’s bad, bad Mirabeau Brown

♫♪♪ der beætmöst Hælver ë yë fürddempfsghte Tœne♫♪♪
DEF.M.NOM.SG bad<SUPER> Halfling PRP DEF.N.OBJ.SG damn<PFT.PTCP>OBJ fortified.encolsure-OBJ
Baddest Halfling in the whole damned fortified enclosure

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Lambuzhao wrote:Kai to myatmoan ʔōytzagu bōfepētæ zorhvonek ʔeiduo done~tmēhræ.
CNJ DEF.NOM.SG love-GEN man<PL>GEN assembly-NOM <CAUS>bless<INCHOAT>PRS.3SG <AUG>ADV INF=be.present<NMLZ>
But the church of man love is such a holy place to be.
Mohĕhyedĕhráí rráí "mèg ĕpè có"? Nyagă mò nĕtrĕdrĕ! ;)

Did you just say "church of man love?" Please explain! ;)

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@ CatDoom

http://raredeadly.tumblr.com/

http://religiondispatches.org/the-churc ... er-part-7/


Cnaðe dene Bowie ðejnt!
know-IMPTV DEF.M.OBJ.SG <Bowie> 2SG.POSS
Know your Bowie!

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Lambuzhao wrote:How do you say "caped crusader" in Sajiwan then?
Gut as. Mi in se a wo "crusader" a de Sajiwan.
Good question. I don't know what "crusader" is in Sajiwan.
Sorry about the neologism there. Your conlang reminds me of my ex-girlfriend's Guyanese patois.
Ye, Gayana patwa swel u pahcl standa Karibyan Inggles kwiol. Mi tingk man im se Gayana patwa, swel go si Sajiwan.
Yeah, Guyanese patois is also a fairly standard Caribbean English creole. I think someone who knows Guyanese would also understand Sajiwan.
Wo yunu kol "werewolf" de Sajiwan?
It me "man wulf", ova mi in sahtn.
It may be "man wolf", but I'm not sure.


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Lambuzhao wrote:Know your Bowie!
Bles yu! Mi a lisn ray no!
Thanks! Listening right now!

It in isi... It in isi... It in isi fi ric evan wen y'a wok donsay.
It ain't easy... It ain't easy... It ain't easy to get to heaven when you're going down.

Di song a gwan olda taym...
The song went on forever...


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jal wrote:
Lambuzhao wrote:How do you say "caped crusader" in Sajiwan then?
Gut as. Mi in se a wo "crusader" a de Sajiwan.
Good question. I don't know what "crusader" is in Sajiwan.
Sorry about the neologism there. Your conlang reminds me of my ex-girlfriend's Guyanese patois.
Ye, Gayana patwa swel u pahcl standa Karibyan Inggles kwiol. Mi tingk man im se Gayana patwa, swel go si Sajiwan.
Yeah, Guyanese patois is also a fairly standard Caribbean English creole. I think someone who knows Guyanese would also understand Sajiwan.
Wo yunu kol "werewolf" de Sajiwan?
It me "man wulf", ova mi in sahtn.
It may be "man wolf", but I'm not sure.


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Masmímu ʾifsímbu ʾenák ʾeníb husmáb.
Your disorganized lifestyle is killing you slowly.
ʾAšol ḵavad pulqam ʾifbižen lav ʾifšimeḻ lit maseḡrad lav lit n͛ubad. ʾUpulasim ṗal sa-panžun lav sa-ḥadṇ lav ṗal šarmaḵeš lit ʾaẏṭ waẏyadanun wižqanam.
- Article 1 of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights.

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