Help your conlang fluency (2)

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Selviss. Ew den Hellenicen autos, "selb". Als "automatic".
Autistic*. From Greek autos, "self". Like "automatic".

[In Iveriss, "selfish" is ytistic, a calque of "egotistic", from ytism or "egotism", so the similarity is a coincidence].

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Thry wrote:Autistic*. From Greek autos, "self". Like "automatic".
Dahm, mi se dis!
Damn, I knew that!


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jal wrote:
k1234567890y wrote:We need more Creoles and mixed languages!
Mi tingk yu ray ray, ova mi u ray de Kweol afta long taym no.
I think you are very right, but I've been writing in Creole for quite some time now.


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ok :)

Toku Musume

te kureoru kuta-kuta, i kuta, ana kuna te epeka ena toku te o maka, mi uku yu maka ena kureoru.
your Creole is very good, it is good that you speak a tongue you made, I also want to make a Creole.
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I want to make it as a creole evolved from Basa Pasaa, Basa Pasaa is a pidgin form of Urban Basanawa, the name of Toku Musume is originally (Epeka) Toka na Musume, but I am thinking to change the name.

The evolution is listed below(In X-SAMPA):

(Urban Basanawa dialect) > (Early Basa Pasaa) > (Modern Basa Pasaa/Toku Musume)
/tONk/ "tongue" > /toN/~/tog/ > /toku/
/mI/ "me(acusative)" > /mi/ > /mi/ "I/me"
/daI/ "you(accusative, emphatic)" > /de/ > /te/ "you"
/wi5/ "I/he/she/it want(s)" > /iw/ > /ju/
/gu:d@/ "good" > /gud@/ > /kuta/
/spre:k@n/ "to speak" > /espek@/ > /epeka/
/i:n/ "him/her(accusative)", /hi/ "he/she(nominative)" > /i/ > /i/
/dat/ "that" > /dat/ > /tato/
/u:k/ "also" > /uk/ > /uku/
/mA:k@n/ "to make" > /mak@/ > /maka/
/hA:f/ "I have" > /aw/ > /o/ "past tense marker"
/En/ "one, a, an" > /en/ > /e/n
/grUnt/ "ground, basis" > /grun/ > /kuna/
/an d@/ "at the, on the" > /and@/~/an@/ > /ana/ "(a preposition)"
It seems that before the language finally become a creole, it had undergone many evolutions that highly distorted the original pronunciation, probably because the pidgin form was spoken by a variety of people, and some of them don't have voicing distinction and/or closed syllables in their native tongues.
See here for a short introduction of some of my conlangs: http://cals.conlang.org/people/472

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na ke kua matsetla niha omyo
I think all creoles are nice.

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Dahm, mi se dis!
Damn, I knew that!
Faerew cymd it word se?
What's the etymology of se?

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Thry wrote:
Dahm, mi se dis!
Damn, I knew that!
Faerew cymd it word se?
What's the etymology of se?
Portuguese saber? I have heard that the word for "know" of many Creoles in our world are from this verb.
masako wrote:na ke kua matsetla niha omyo
I think all creoles are nice.
Toku Musume

arikato! mi taka ana te!
thanks! thank you!

ana wa kuna te liwa kureoru? te awa kuna?
why do you like Creoles? do you have any reasons?

yuara teka mi kureoru ana wa e?
how do you(plural) think about my Creole?
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Toku Musume is still under development, many features may still be unstable.
See here for a short introduction of some of my conlangs: http://cals.conlang.org/people/472

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Joyeux la naissie d'Ifi du Papa-Due.
/s:uiu la nais:i tipsi tu papatu:/
Merry Christmas!

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valiums wrote:Joyeux la naissie d'Ifi du Papa-Due.
/s:uiu la nais:i tipsi tu papatu:/
Merry Christmas!
Urban Basanawa

ありがとう、Valiums!おわ゚りがんす、いすた汝等持だん一ん楽うり゚っく聖り゚っぐ夜す?
/arɪgato: vɑ:ljʊms ɔvərɪgəns, ɪsta yɪ hadən ɛn fru:lɪk hi:lɪç naxts/
Arigatow, Valiums! overigens, is-it-dat yi hadden en froolik Heelig Nachtes?(romanization)
thanks Valimus by.the.way Q 2.PL.NOM have.PST.PL one merry Christmas?(interlinear)
Thank you, Valimus! by the way, did you all have a merry Christmas?(translation)
See here for a short introduction of some of my conlangs: http://cals.conlang.org/people/472

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Jecic.
/ʑɛa̯ɕɪɕ/
do.that-PST-1s
Yes, I did.
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About my conlangs: No. 1 is my proto-language, and No. 4, my main conlang, is one of its descendants. I’m currently revising 4, calling it 4a.

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schyrsivochter wrote:Jecic.
/ʑɛa̯ɕɪɕ/
do.that-PST-1s
Yes, I did.
Urban Basanawa

せぃいる良ど :) 何と汝でっどすと在んだ聖り゚っぐ夜す?
/si:r gu:t wat dʊ dɛtst an də hi:lɪç naxts/
Seer good :) wat du dedst an de Heelig Nachtes?(Romanization)
so good :) what did you do on Christmas?
See here for a short introduction of some of my conlangs: http://cals.conlang.org/people/472

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k1234567890y wrote:せぃいる良ど :) 何と汝でっどすと在んだ聖り゚っぐ夜す?
/si:r gu:t wat dʊ dɛtst an də hi:lɪç naxts/
Seer good :) wat du dedst an de Heelig Nachtes?(Romanization)
so good :) what did you do on Christmas?
No. 4a

Gvudnoucblac, vir ilblas rouqaiq bvo cin.
/ˈgvʊtⁿnɔʊ̯ɕbləɕ vɪχ ˈɪlbləs ˈʁɔʊ̯ŋe̞ŋ b͡vɒ ɕin/
say-POT-NEG-1SG because be-NEG-4PA word-DEF.PAU.NOM at PN.1SG.LOC
I can’t say it, because I don’t have the words [yet].
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About my conlangs: No. 1 is my proto-language, and No. 4, my main conlang, is one of its descendants. I’m currently revising 4, calling it 4a.

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k1234567890y wrote:
schyrsivochter wrote:Jecic.
/ʑɛa̯ɕɪɕ/
do.that-PST-1s
Yes, I did.
Urban Basanawa

せぃいる良ど :) 何と汝でっどすと在んだ聖り゚っぐ夜す?
/si:r gu:t wat dʊ dɛtst an də hi:lɪç naxts/
Seer good :) wat du dedst an de Heelig Nachtes?(Romanization)
so good :) what did you do on Christmas?
Yasintusapezate, sinzenkite. Tanfanten keizele katan.
I can't tell you, I'll get in trouble. My boyfriend was here.

Saya... Tesenpa nanneipa tantanekiina nantuifii nalaitei, lututui, lasazetu. Fatayusenki nankanki nutuituikatu.
Well, ok, I went to my friend's on the 24th, and we had food and chatted. We (I and my bf) went home after midnight.

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k1234567890y wrote:so good, what did you do on Christmas?
na ma'a tlika nayo kulaye
I spent time with my family.

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masako wrote:na ma'a tlika nayo kulaye
I spent time with my family.
Egun attu.
Me as well.

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Thry wrote:What's the etymology of se?
It tingk Spanyol "sé" (1SG.PRS fi saber).
Probably Spanish "sé" (1SG.PRS of saber).


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Sew' y.
I see.

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Urban Basanawa

彼としゃいんとだと爾等持ふと一ん良ど時中んだ聖り゚っぐ夜す
/ɪt ʃaɪnt dat yɪ haft ɛn gu:t taɪt ɪn də hi:lɪç naxts/
It shinet dat yi haft en good tide in de Heelig Nachtes.(Romanization)
It seems that you(plural) have a good time in Christmas

楽う新う年!
/fru: nɪʊ jɑ:r/
Froo Niu Jaar!(Romanization)
Happy New Year!
See here for a short introduction of some of my conlangs: http://cals.conlang.org/people/472

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Mad Nhectumeni lhirî. Tholad dönnema thîsin du.

It was a good Christmas. I ate a lot of potatoes.

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Čəlnəlyallinətvannak yəvi tʼāk tånurra tåvāya ʔiKristə ʔunurra natinə nacʼâšša.
[tʃəlnəljælːinədˈʋænːæk yəˈʋi tʼæːk tɒˈnurːæ tɒˈʋæːjæ ʔikˈristə ʔuˈnurːæ ˈnædinə næˈtsʼɒːʃːæ]
I had (lit. have) a good time with my daughter from Christmas Day to yesterday.
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Travis B. wrote:Čəlnəlyallinətvannak yəvi tʼāk tånurra tåvāya ʔiKristə ʔunurra natinə nacʼâšša.
[tʃəlnəljælːinədˈʋænːæk yəˈʋi tʼæːk tɒˈnurːæ tɒˈʋæːjæ ʔikˈristə ʔuˈnurːæ ˈnædinə næˈtsʼɒːʃːæ]
I had (lit. have) a good time with my daughter from Christmas Day to yesterday.
nanku itlo!
We're the same!

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Qəviqnə rīllə təʔammərə tåtvannak čʼəxā?
[qɐˈʋeqnə ˈriːlːə təˈʔæmːərə ˈtɒdʋænːæk tʃʼɐˈχɑː]
Who else here has kids?
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Ils djonons ounjavlor z zvond ec. ^^ … blac, iltc khoniconc ec.
/ɪls ˈd͡ʑɔɑ̯nɒns ɔʊ̯nʑəvlɒχ z zvɔɑ̯nd æɕ. || bləɕ ɪlt͡ɕ xɔɑ̯nɪɕɒnɕ æɕ/
be-4pau year-NDEF.PAU.NOM sixteen-NDEF in life-DEF.LOC PN.1s.GEN NEG-1s be-NEG.4pau child-NDEF.PL.NOM PN.1s.GEN
I’m sixteen years old. ^^ … [so] no, I don’t have kids.
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About my conlangs: No. 1 is my proto-language, and No. 4, my main conlang, is one of its descendants. I’m currently revising 4, calling it 4a.

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uetsa'o anyo nya ntahim pakopyek
16 y/o isn't too young for kids.

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Nam cin jesaf.
/nəm ɕɪn ʑɛa̯səf/
concerning PN.1s.LOC do.that-4s
It is to me.
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About my conlangs: No. 1 is my proto-language, and No. 4, my main conlang, is one of its descendants. I’m currently revising 4, calling it 4a.

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Nəlithāyallənači məsâkū kayalnəynū sətåmvənnuvūk yav čʼāyāt.
[nəlithæːjælːəˈnædʒi məˈsɒːɡuː kæˈjælnəjnuː sədɒmʋənːuˈʋuːk jæʋ tʃʼæːˈjæːt]
masako speaks of whether you could have a child.
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Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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