On the resources, perhaps I didn't state it right - the issue for me is not whether who gets what, but rather if the what is "magically" found on everyone's island. i.e., what if everybody says they have silk or pepper or gold? That'd sort of ruin the trade since nobody would bother to trade those things as much, since everyone already has everything they need.
Also, Torco, can you show me the results for the referendums? I want to record them on a wiki page for future reference.
Rorschach wrote:Torco wrote:@Ror: Sounds about right. I'm thinking of this.
The main group from which Torco's and my groups descended came up from the south and settled in [ancient]. A monarchy of some sorts was established over the two islands by the northerners (my dudes) [-1300]. Some migratory nomads came in from the north and made the northern areas of my big island their more-or-less home [-1100] and started getting acquainted with the locals. During this time, Ollock's culture had taken over the two islands which will later be disputed [-800]. The kingdom sent out some expeditions off to the west and colonized the nearby islands and eventually got to fighting with Ollock over control of the two disputed territories, which lasted for a long time [-780 to -600].
(stuff happens, more stuff happens)
A rebellion in the southern island was instigated [-130], and the Ciqui got involved. The island broke from the kingdom as war progressed in the north, reaching a high point with the assassination of the king and the entire royal family [-105]; in the wake of this, a number of regional councils sprung up with an overarching national council. Perhaps there could be more fighting if the Ciqui got greedy and decided that the islands needed the status of "proctectorate" [-95], complete with airquotes.
does the timeline sound about right?
Yes, for the most part. I'm thinking that the dates of the migrants' arrival and the establishment of the monarchy should be switched, though; had the settlers come in afterwards, they probably would've been all murdered out of pique and xenophobia.
I think this might be the springing board for the first true non-local intervention by the Qicui. I have an idea for how this will resolve itself. My proposals for modifying adds religion as a minor - but important - factor to give some justification for initial Qicui intervention.
Let's say that the Qicui religion has been introduced to the southern islands around [-300] (give or take a century) by way of merchants. Eventually, by the time of the rebellion, there are enough followers of this religion that a number of the more religious Qicui leaders feel it is their duty to protect their spiritual brothers/sisters, even though the region is somewhat far away, comparatively. Up to the point when the southern islands are sufficiently independent, the only Qicui that have been intervening were those of religious leanings, or at least those who have commercial dealings with those of religious dealings. However, after the rebellion is sufficiently independent [-100], then the other Qicui states realize the lucrative-ness of intervening in the region because of [insert random good resources] and because of the fear that the Qicui states that have already intervened could get too powerful. Thereafter, the various Qicui states support different factions within the rebellion. Eventually, the Viraayon - or at least one of the more powerful factions within them - attempt to drive out the meddling Qicui, despite the objections of the other Viraayon who support them [-85], perhaps because they want to seize some of the power themselves and the trade with the resources away from the Qicui, who are increasingly becoming like colonizers as they send more and more immigrants to take control of the resources. Maybe Rorschach's group, realizing it's impossible to control the Viraayon, decide to ally themselves with an opposing faction in the rebellion, one that's pro-Rorschach (sort of like how after the American Revolution there were pro-British and pro-French camps). Eventually the Qicui city-states and kingdoms, the Viraayon, and Rorschach's group sign a treaty [-70 ish] agreeing to recognize Viraayon's independence, to respect and not attack followers of the Qicui's religion, and some other commercial stuff, and some other things that will inadvertently encourage the Viraayon to piracy.
This is just an idea on how the Qicui get involved. Thoughts?
Rorschach wrote:
Aside: How is "Qicui" pronounced?
From an earlier post:
Ollock wrote:Bacause of dang pinyin on the brain, I want to pronounce Qicui as [tçʰi.tsʰwej]. How do you, in fact, pronounce it?
I usually pronounce it in an Anglicized way as [kʰi.kwi] (so sort of like kiwis... except not really). It seems that the real pronounciation would be something like either [qi.cu̯i] or [qi.ɕu̯i].
So you can just call it [kʰi.kwi], even if it isn't "correct" because I do it too. *shrugs*