Help your conlang fluency (2)

[clawgrip]

Saydah thu-phahne truwa-kangu.
I'm making a new logographic script.

[Matrix]

Qa, ueidahct korns klaf tos kuu korns Samant.
Hm, that looks like Ancient Egyptian.

[Thry]

Mae! Mond gwen achen in evagh?
Nice! Where have you gotten the idea from?

[clawgrip]

Teaplor. Fkeuswa joot Chainaapsay ptiahpeak tpikliong poung tpi gaa ot-psay dang psay tgai kangmua jong. Psay ork tpikliong nek tpi beym ut teuk psay glio mdo mgerba. Aaley psay kteach sken leung Fkeuswa ach aadang plao'auk sgungjoot Eejapte-psay.
Thank you. Fkeuswa is like Chinese in that morphemes or words are each one character, so I wanted to make a different script. In this script many morphemes and words are written with multiple characters, including phonetic signs. The characters also look more like pictures than in Fkeuswa. That may be why it looks similar to Egyptian.

Edit: forgot to translate one sentence into English!

[finlay]

Saydane thu-phahne truwa-kangu.
I'm making a new logographic script.

Nasuu! Zetakenta yakii luseze! Seikuzungu kitakenta silfuzupiseutikite.
凄！其字やきいろせぜ！等其ぐき字しる建欲きて。
Wow, that script is sexy! I wanna make a script like that.

[hwhatting]

Ai wolar, yau dich!
If want-2SG.PRES.ACT, then do-PAST.NONACT.IPV.2SG
If you want it, do it!

[finlay]

Nautasiu lusete...
過眠ろせて...
I'm too lazy...

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Ixáké'ecí. Maysatsátee' sa nyíhé'exée nawí yaa.
That's okay. Just do it slowly over time.

[Rhetorica]

Ilú noví litshai il aporafebektíe, saraví títina tshentúekhíenú ílizé kai.
like other element-PL-S.N.NOM of alien_language-make-RESULT-S.N.Ø, refined letter-set-S.F.NOM postwork-ACTION_OF-S.N want-3S.PRES GNO.

Like other aspects of language creation, a good writing system requires refinement.

[Nortaneous]

Hann katwreha arungen.

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Not always.

Then again, if I had any work ethic I'd at least have a font for this damn thing so I wouldn't have to mspaint each sample...

[Matrix]

Egëct koopëslëkfec kutšu šo këjZarkosïn Wëte, kuw këklafto kojwën.
[ɛˈʁɤθt koːpɤχlɤqˈfeθ quˈc͡çu ço qɤʝãːʁqoˈχɯn ʁʷɤˈte | quʁʷ qɤqlafˈto qoʝˈʁʷɤn]
be.4.NOM/3.ACC the.ACC=experiment cautious great the.DAT=Zarcosian recent | with the.NOM=script the.GEN=order
This is a very tentative test run of Modern Zarcosian, complete with writing.

EDIT: whoops look like i forgot a couple of diacritics in the image but i'm too lazy so whatever

[hwhatting]

@matrix - your script is descended from Latin?

[WeepingElf]

@matrix - your script is descended from Latin?

It looks more like a descendant of Greek to me, but I am not sure.

[Matrix]

Yup, it's descended from the Greek alphabet.

[Pazmivaniye]

La kere figo pi lo ro e iliatua e paleto. No sá safe tí mai Hangur, rosie úno sagau sá uátomo, a okoni hasdu iese besuiti hasdu.
[la keˈɹe higo ˈpi lo ˈɹo‿ɪ̯ iʒaˈtu̯a‿ɪ̯ paˈleto || no ˈsa sahe ˈtʃi maɪ̯ haŋˈguə̯ | ɹoˈʃi̯‿uno saˈgaʊ̯ sa ˈwatomo | a‿ʊ̯koˈni haʒˈdu jeˈse besoɪ̯ˈtʃi haʒˈdu]
I should do more with Palethian's writing system. Currently it's a bit like Hangeul, because each character is a syllable, and different strokes show different phonemes.

[finlay]

Kangul keltal lusepeya, layakuntepe! Sunugui yalfuzupitisupenel tazufise lusepe.
かんぐる宜ろせぺや、ら紛てぺ！す分やる建ちすぺねる増良ろせぺ。
Hangul is alright, but it confuses me! If it's not made of parts/components/features, it's better.

[Pazmivaniye]

La mafiese pitie bósi li okiju lo ro rua soliako Hansi de sagali o hile hasdumai topamai.
[la maˈhi̯ese pitʃe ˈboʃi li̯‿okiˈʒu lo ɹo wa soʒaˈko hanˈʃi de sagaˈle‿ʊ̯ hiˈle haʒˈdumaɪ̯ toˈpamaɪ̯]
1S use-PV little today in work-PRT.PRS over way for change-INF Hanzi to character-PL REL.SUB different-ADV all-ADV
I spent some of today working on a system to turn Hanzi into completely different-looking characters.

La rise fisio sagali teumadilie afie, kua eú bovi.
[la ɹiˈse hiˈʃo sagaˈli teʊ̯madʒiʒe‿ə̯ˈhi̯e | ku̯a ju boˈβi]
1S want-IPV make-INF character-PL ideograph[ic] one's.own, one out.of day-PL
I would like to make my own logographic script one of these days.

[Dē Graut Bʉr]

Evo i léxak luléxak Efårk Nåmúþ. Exvo i léxak híteñ sluléxak Exešén.
I can't write in the Nåmúþ script. I can't write in any other Akana scripts either.

[clawgrip]

凄！其字やきいろせぜ！等其ぐき字しる建欲きて。
Wow, that script is sexy! I wanna make a script like that.

Thanks!

La rise fisio sagali teumadilie afie, kua eú bovi.
[la ɹiˈse hiˈʃo sagaˈli teʊ̯madʒiʒe‿ə̯ˈhi̯e | ku̯a ju boˈβi]
1S want-IPV make-INF character-PL ideograph[ic] one's.own, one out.of day-PL
I would like to make my own logographic script one of these days.

Thuphahne khidaih nheih yumu man truwa beyne-yumu.
A logographic script is a good thing, but it is difficult to make.

[Imralu]

Na i sehenu hu cem na zeua si ka olaz.
I'm really sad and I don't know who to tell.

[Rhetorica]

Na i sehenu hu cem na zeua si ka olaz.
I'm really sad and I don't know who to tell.

Trúhinzé, sei olíes viteia.
see-3.SG.PRES.IMP, 1-N.PL.NOM be-1.PL.PRES
Well, we're here.

[Dē Graut Bʉr]

Na i sehenu hu cem na zeua si ka olaz.
I'm really sad and I don't know who to tell.

Is lék ǻs lúk em.
You should tell us.

[Thry]

Mar ech drest?
Why are you sad?

[Rhetorica]

Apes saní veshekhíes, venes dútessos, mí atshovifa íé asitha alzessoníha vizé kai. Imralú... dí?
apes s-a-ní vesh-ekhí-es, venes dút-ess-os, mí atshov-if-a íé a-sith-a alzess-o-ní-ha v-izé kai. Imral-ú... dí?
within 1-SG.F.LOC-ADJ being-process-LOC.N.SG under sorrow-echo-LOC.M.SG a day-ARCHAIC_NOM-SG.F associated_with no-sound-1-SG.F.Ø troubled_thought-SG.M.Ø-POSS.ADJ.SUPERNOM be-PRES.3.SG GNO Imralu-SG.N.VOC
In my experience, in the wake of sorrow, a day of silence is troubling. Imralu... ?

[Thry]

Hui Havath; edent fors na dhythrached in (i nathant mae), hwe...
It's Saturday; maybe he was out distracting himself (which would be good), or...

Ae mi il mae, Imralu tha mae!
If all of us are fine, Imralu will be fine!