Help your conlang fluency (2)

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Elenú swú mí trúl'enú vizé, tshí'bité.
That is one perspective, I suppose.

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Now you made me worry. >:|

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Matrix wrote:quʁʷ
back in my day we just said "kurwa"
Slava, čĭstŭ, hrabrostĭ!

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Hey, sorry to make everyone worry. I'm OK. I've been really sick this last week, been stuck at home, lost 5kg. I got really emotional the other day, wondering what I'm doing with my life and missing my ex like crazy. I don't want to burden my new friends here because I don't know them that well. My closest friends are on the other side of the world and I don't want to make them worry about me. My conlang doesn't have enough vocabulary for this, but I just wanted to let everyone know ... not coming here for a day was just because I didn't log on.
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Mí shemenú lúelevis tshí'beré. Efokera!
I assumed a situation like that. What a relief! (lit. "happy coincidence")

...Dzhelité—elú múrizé, elka kezotelméú ro z'etírité noh'éú.
...I mean—that hurts, but fortunately you still live.

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Ha azi maan i li lamua vuzuavana vahu u niá xan auas? I dze de
Has anyone else here ever lost a tenth of their body weight in one week? Not good.
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Kituukilu zuutagui nankiukanpi faluseki? Zangutu yalusezatuu lezekipete.
き五キロずう重なん十分数はろせき?程埃やろせざつうれ思ぺて。
5 kilos is 1/10 of your body weight? I thought you weren't so tiny.

Gaituikifen tuyetetuu fuguzile, sakanfeusuki (kineituikikiluke kipaukilu) sutuutuuzale nisikinsate. Nateine...
一五十歳持てつうふ時れ、さ頃三石(き四五十キロけき廿キロ)す五週れに減さて。甚〜
When I was 16, I lost about 3 stone (19 or 20 kilos) in five weeks. Terrible...

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finlay wrote:Kituukilu zuutagui nankiukanpi faluseki? Zangutu yalusezatuu lezekipete.
き五キロずう重なん十分数はろせき?程埃やろせざつうれ思ぺて。
5 kilos is 1/10 of your body weight? I thought you weren't so tiny.
Na i dze. Na i dze. Dei do azi lei kilo i se lamu.
I'm not. I wasn't. Since then another four kilos have gone.
finlay wrote:Gaituikifen tuyetetuu fuguzile, sakanfeusuki (kineituikikiluke kipaukilu) sutuutuuzale nisikinsate. Nateine...
一五十歳持てつうふ時れ、さ頃三石(き四五十キロけき廿キロ)す五週れに減さて。甚〜
When I was 16, I lost about 3 stone (19 or 20 kilos) in five weeks. Terrible...
Ha uá i li gali?
Were you sick?
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Swú ro réya setité kladis, vité otalú.
Now is when you should eat excessively.

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Imralu wrote:
finlay wrote:Gaituikifen tuyetetuu fuguzile, sakanfeusuki (kineituikikiluke kipaukilu) sutuutuuzale nisikinsate. Nateine...
一五十歳持てつうふ時れ、さ頃三石(き四五十キロけき廿キロ)す五週れに減さて。甚〜
When I was 16, I lost about 3 stone (19 or 20 kilos) in five weeks. Terrible...
Ha uá i li gali?
Were you sick?
Pen, pen, nateine lusepetuu fuguta lusekun.
Yes, yes, that's the reason why it was terrible.

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Mí yeñklatí atshovalta ilaltes, elka gí vitai. Olú ifez-aladí nosarhim!
One whole day later, and zero posts. This can't continue!

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Rhetorica wrote:Mí yeñklatí atshovalta ilaltes, elka gí vitai. Olú ifez-aladí nosarhim!
One whole day later, and zero posts. This can't continue!
Xåvo a. Vo luvók óþ sårm véf sñek.
It can. Silence can last for many days.

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Dē Graut Bʉr wrote:It can. Silence can last for many days.
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Verily...

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Sai rezaltsithim, shíu sa uvíau éthelí alzokawa dazil.
We must talk, or I will clothe myself in lonely terror. (I.e., go mad.)

Híéú, sa rebiris «ifez» tshentanéú, he alez «ossez», he alez egurobé íé sarobekhtu. Kedobí Añglika. Etê.
Also, I used "want" previously, and not "must" or something about capability. Bad English. Sorry.

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Igença tus tonc oidar is cesterant ISON. Doura màbols...
I still can't see Comet ISON. Too many clouds...
Un llapis mai dibuixa sense una mà.

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Koestšəd këaxt këwëje kficḷu, koestšəd këcëwno.
[qoˈeχc͡çəð qɤˈaχt qɤʁʷɤˈʝe qfiˈθɬu | qoˈeχc͡çəð qɤθɤʁʷˈno]
IF=be.3.NOM/4.ACC NOM=thing bright LOC=sky | THEN=be.3.NOM/4.ACC NOM=cloud-PL
If there's something interesting in the sky, then the clouds will be there.
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Adúljôžal ônal kol ví éža únah kex yaxlr gmlĥ hôga jô ônal kru ansu frú.
Ansu frú ônal savel zaš gmlĥ a vek Adúljôžal vé jaga čaþ kex.
Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh.

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Ήδα λο ιντερέστας ηλλω θέλω σείαν αι νύβες;
ída lo interéstas illo thélo seían ai nýbes;
What if the interesting thing in the sky are the clouds?

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Exǻþ mi ská óþ.
Then there aren't any clouds.

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Un Siaspat ISON nuzipuc sio?
And then you could see Comet ISON?
Zain pazitovcor, sio? Sio, tovcor.
You can't read that, right? Yes, it says that.
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Ις φάζε ναι σήνσο.
is pháze nai sínso
That doesn't make sense.

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Lyhoko Leaci wrote:Un Siaspat ISON nuzipuc sio?
And then you could see Comet ISON?
Oizhà, està netzervets parmar àn onyar. È ont perocet domlís.
Yes, but you need to know where to look at. That and good binoculars.
Un llapis mai dibuixa sense una mà.

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An atshisina asa shistoais il an atshina vis. Lai rezresis kai, híéú.
The clouds are the dreams of the stars. They need sleep, too.

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ke meyak
TOP poetry-NEG

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Mota ézelzígalenei paitizé!
Beauty enjoys unexpected solutions.

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Aḹjo, estcəct këpšësï koõdo ẽ, mëestəd?
[aɮˈʝo | ˈeχtθəθt qɤpçɤˈχɯ qoõˈðo ẽ | mɤˈeχtəð]
other | be.3.NOM/3.ACC NOM=poetry ACC=path same | NEG=be.3.ABS
But isn't poetry an expected solution?
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Adúljôžal ônal kol ví éža únah kex yaxlr gmlĥ hôga jô ônal kru ansu frú.
Ansu frú ônal savel zaš gmlĥ a vek Adúljôžal vé jaga čaþ kex.
Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh.

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