Help your conlang fluency (2)

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You're correct.

waliya támalu
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I want a big (fully-flesh-out) language.

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masako wrote:I want a big (fully-flesh-out) language.
Ye, ova dis a ahcip!
Yes, but that is difficult!


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watsama
I agree.

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Ha kala i ze ne dyiwa?
Q kala COP NEG have word-2s
Isn't Kala like that?
Glossing Abbreviations: COMP = comparative, C = complementiser, ACS / ICS = accessible / inaccessible, GDV = gerundive, SPEC / NSPC = specific / non-specific
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Imralu wrote:Isn't Kala like that?
Nuc Masaco uf toyé Cala duchuwé ni flódis, al uf alié duchuwé.
PRTC Masako-NOM about ART-F.SG.LOC Kala tongue-SG.LOC NEG talk-PAST.NONACT.3SG, but about other-F.SG.LOC tongue-SG.LOC
Masako wasn't talking about Kala, but about another language.

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Nu nenge inggili u de i ngegyo i ze dwanwa.
thing language English ADV DEF COP write COP NEG unambiguous
What he wrote in English didn't make that clear.

De i nge dyiyu I want a big language (na i bo ya nenge ye da) mye ze dyiyu I want it to be a big language (na i bo zyu de i nenge ye da).
DEF COP communicate QUOT (1s COP want GEN language ATTR big) but NEG QUOT (1s COP want GEN.C DEF COP language ATTR big)
He said "I want a big language" not "I want it to be a big language."

Dyi a i go dyi nwa. De i mwe ne dyi nwade agwe nwanwa.
word [a] COP similar word one | DEF COP able have word one.specific or.INCL word one.nonspecific
The word "a" is like the word "nwa" (one/a). It can mean both "nwade" (a particular) or "nwanwa" (a non-specific, any old).

I said all of this mostly just for something to say, which is my usual behaviour here. Also, I'm not quite sure on the conventions for glossing sentences that include bits of the language being glossed into. I decided, spur of the moment, to use square brackets... anyone know of am actual convention?
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Imralu wrote:Isn't Kala like that?
nyatsa
be.mild-NPST
Mildly so.
hwhatting wrote:Masako wasn't talking about Kala, but about another language.
nimana
2sg-correct-NPST
You're correct.
Imralu wrote:What he wrote in English didn't make that clear.
wawamántúmyi
1sg-clear-more.so-SUG-PST
I should have been more clear.


If it isn't obvious, the language I'm using in this particular discussion is neither Ilya nor Kala. It's [tentatively] called Kámalu (many-speak-NOM) and is also in need of development. ;)

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Ha dwe dyi nenge ilya i dwanwa?
Q DEF.PL.E word language Ilya COP uniguous
Was the Ilya text unambiguous?
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Imralu wrote:Ha dwe dyi nenge ilya i dwanwa?
Q DEF.PL.E word language Ilya COP uniguous
Was the Ilya text unambiguous?
ula ka
Which?

na ke Iliya tlatsotle moya:
The last Ilya I wrote was:
masako wrote:edátan Ilya íla múshan údukwa
do-VOL-1sg Ilya CNTR lack-1sg motivation-ACC

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jal wrote:Mi a longga cenc Di Obit tu Sajiwan.
I'm still translating The Hobbit in Sajiwan.


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Philagwallah

rown de kona da mite weight
a nyew rode o sekret gait
an ebenef a done pass dem bye
a day gwine com wan a fine
an tek de kibadoba pat wa ron
wess fomde Mun an eess fomde Son

More: show
Round the corner there may wait
a new road or secret gate
and though oft I pass them by
a day shalll come when I find
and take the covered-over paths that run
West of the Moon and East of the Sun
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Chádóit élg-duimí. Mhuidhe méog amú lór úmóch fre áns. (Líochlúr nuégh cuam mib)
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hello all_person-PL | spend-PST 1S time much away from here | likely NEG remember 1S.ACC

Hello everyone. It's been a while since I was here last. (I doubt anyone remembers me though)

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masako wrote:
Imralu wrote:Ha dwe dyi nenge ilya i dwanwa?
Q DEF.PL.E word language Ilya COP uniguous
Was the Ilya text unambiguous?
ula ka
Which?

na ke Iliya tlatsotle moya:
The last Ilya I wrote was:
masako wrote:edátan Ilya íla múshan údukwa
do-VOL-1sg Ilya CNTR lack-1sg motivation-ACC
Hi.
DEM
This.
masako wrote:waliya támalu
1sg-want-NPST AUG-speak-NOM
I want a big (fully-flesh-out) language.
Na i dyodovwe zyu hi e ilya. Ha ze do i ma?
1s COP assume.AG GEN.C DEM.E COP Ilya | Q NEG.E then COP what
I assumed that was Ilya. If it's not, then what is it?
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uatla Kámalu
That's Kámalu.

uye na ke Kámalu kue tlamu muyahipua
Occasionally, I have worked a bit on Kámalu as a side project.

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Na i ze mwe mbomuva. U lu mi nga do i gava hu kala.
1s COP NEG.E able.E keep_up_with_knowledge | ADV LOC.E interior GEN.1s then 2s COP PROS.always man Kala
I can't keep up. To me, you'll always be Kala man.

This is a bit awkward. Voicing in Wena is a register thing but not phonemic. Kala world be pronounced as the word gala, which happens to mean "adolescent girl" (PROS+woman).
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Ultimate Ridley wrote:Hello everyone.
Oy Ultimate Ridley. Fo ray mi in memba yu :).
Hi UR. I indeed do not remember you :).


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Ultimate Ridley wrote:Chádóit élg-duimí. Mhuidhe méog amú lór úmóch fre áns. (Líochlúr nuégh cuam mib)
(Recording)
hello all_person-PL | spend-PST 1S time much away from here | likely NEG remember 1S.ACC

Hello everyone. It's been a while since I was here last. (I doubt anyone remembers me though)
Cəcyo, Ridli.
Hello Ridley.

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Imralu wrote:I can't keep up. To me, you'll always be Kala man.
gamanti shun úbuk
thank-1sg-2sg because compliment
Thank you for the compliment.

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Ultimate Ridley wrote: Hello everyone. It's been a while since I was here last. (I doubt anyone remembers me though)
Ləʕin sōl, Ultimate Ridley, kamə gen ləʕi cu.
Hello, Ultimate Ridley, and welcome back.
jal wrote: Oy Ultimate Ridley. Fo ray mi in memba yu :).
Nōʕsən de, inosħe daʔne fasinosi məs siman :).
That's strange, that language looks a lot like English :)

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Ars Lande wrote:That's strange, that language looks a lot like English
Dis in kweya - Sajiwan u Karibyan Inggles Kwiyol, an im af Inggles fo leksifaya.
That's not strange - Sajiwan is a Caribbean English Creole, and has English as lexifier.


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@jal

na ke kala tayo nomo
I enjoy your language.

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masako wrote:I enjoy your language.
Bles yu! Yu langwic dem swel swit mi olda taym!
Thanks! I always enjoy your languages too!


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Eeeeee, na i zu o vanggwa le zyi we nenga vyewa, hwo Mazago hwo Dyali.
awwwww | 1s COP same.E ADV always.E love.AG GEN.DEF.E PL.E language GEN.2p | VOC Masako VOC Jal
Awwwww, I also always like the languages of both of you, Masako and Jal.

Usually Wenafying names results in some funny things. Almost all possible syllables mean something so when put together, they end up with a meaning. Mazago means something like "What holder/wearer of something similar" so, not a whole lot of sense. Dyali comes out as "beginning device" ... I usually use i for extra vowels but sometimes I use an echo vowel, copying what ever's near it, and that would give Dyala ... which would mean "woman device" ... um ...

Na i nwinggwe Dyego.
1s COP miss.AG Jego.
I miss Jego.

Na i bo zyu i ho zyi.
1s COP want.AG GEN.C COP good.E GEN.DEF
I hope he's doing well.
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Ultimate Ridley wrote:Chádóit élg-duimí. Mhuidhe méog amú lór úmóch fre áns. (Líochlúr nuégh cuam mib)
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hello all_person-PL | spend-PST 1S time much away from here | likely NEG remember 1S.ACC

Hello everyone. It's been a while since I was here last. (I doubt anyone remembers me though)
do fënum möt thê, smâ dothot xanöngu xafömum thê.
2S.NEU know.persons.or.places-GNO not 1S.INM | but 2S.NEU-RECP greet-INSTR1 wield-GNO 1P.INM

I don't know you, but I greet you.
(literally "I don't know you, but I wield my greetings at you")
I am Thethat, ancient recordkeeper and etymologist of the Sajem Tan tribe, as well as the foremost satirical poet.

Duhden duhden duhdenfeh keh duhden duhden: Distracted pasta is unproductive and distracts pasta.

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Ultimate Ridley wrote:Chádóit élg-duimí. Mhuidhe méog amú lór úmóch fre áns. (Líochlúr nuégh cuam mib)
(Recording)
hello all_person-PL | spend-PST 1S time much away from here | likely NEG remember 1S.ACC
Na i mbomu zyi dyi wo.
1s COP remember.AG GEN.DEF.E name GEN.2s
I remember your name.
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Imralu wrote:Eeeeee, na i zu o vanggwa le zyi we nenga vyewa, hwo Mazago hwo Dyali.
awwwww | 1s COP same.E ADV always.E love.AG GEN.DEF.E PL.E language GEN.2p | VOC Masako VOC Jal
Awwwww, I also always like the languages of both of you, Masako and Jal.

Usually Wenafying names results in some funny things. Almost all possible syllables mean something so when put together, they end up with a meaning. Mazago means something like "What holder/wearer of something similar" so, not a whole lot of sense. Dyali comes out as "beginning device" ... I usually use i for extra vowels but sometimes I use an echo vowel, copying what ever's near it, and that would give Dyala ... which would mean "woman device" ... um ...
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/ɲaʃaːᵐpa/
thank.you-much
Thank you very much!

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