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ha ke ueso na’eha yetayetle tanyaye
3s O bone 1s-P.3s give-PST-REL break-PST
He broke the bone which I gave him.

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Agrred boneoogrrr?
eat-PST bone-thing
Did he eat it?

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Panoq te ne wurku ku, kai naik kilai man. Ku ne peste ku. Ku ti panuq ten nok peste.
I broke the bone he gave me. I didn't eat it. I don't eat bones.

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masako wrote:He broke the bone which I gave him.
Im bwok bon a im mi gi im.
Dē Graut Bʉr wrote:I broke the bone he gave me. I didn't eat it. I don't eat bones.
Mi bwok bon a im im gi mi. Mi in it im. Mi in it dem bon.

Mi swel in it dem bon. Dem u bwok yu tis.
I don't eat bones either. They break your teeth.


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Xhee xrrap oogrrr boneoogrrr meow krrek dant. Wowgrrr Grrmph hamexha agrrr boneoogrrr.
rain blood deer bone-thing NEG die/kill tooth/teeth adult.male.mountain.lion adult.female.mountain.lion always eat bone-thing
Fish bones don't break your teeth. My mom always eats bones.

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Dē Graut Bʉr wrote:Pas ama namai heh.
2SG.SUBJ that think only.if
Only if you think it is.
B'õuk ĩ blẽ kâ lae anyẽu mà ciub'õuk yú anyẽu mà «tshyak» râ «hèen».
human should remember DED COMP AGT-speak INST LANG-human name AGT-speak INST LANG-"tshyak" as "enemy"
/ɓo̰k ʔḭ blɛ̰ kɑ̤ lǣ ʔɐɲɘ̰ mɑ̀ cɨɓo̰k jú ʔɐɲɘ̰ mɑ̀ tsʰjak ɾɑ̤ hɛ̀ɛn/
One should remember that Proto-rəgyam-speakers call Tshyak-speakers "enemy".
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Vijay wrote:Fish bones don't break your teeth. My mom always eats bones.
Dem fis bon stok imsef de yu swot.
Fish bones lodge themselves in your throat.


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jal wrote:
Vijay wrote:Fish bones don't break your teeth. My mom always eats bones.
Dem fis bon stok imsef de yu swot.
Fish bones lodge themselves in your throat.
Meow xarrgrrine xhee xrrap oogrrr boneoogrrr!
NEG sardine rain blood deer bone-thing
Not sardine bones!

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Vijay wrote:NEG sardine rain blood deer bone-thing
Ék yí sí nã som kâ gõuk la'ikhõm ga màe.
1S NEG know REL.NMLZ CLASS think about RESULT-explain PROX.S EGO
[ʔɛ́k jí sí nɑ̰ sɔ̄m kɑ̤ go̰k laʔɪkʰɔ̰m gɑ̄ mæ̀]
I don't know what to think about this gloss.
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Mebbe aixe grrowrrierrr:
maybe like.this/thus happy-COMP
Maybe this is better:

NEG sardine rain liquid food bone-thing

Xhee = rain (onomatopeic)
Xrrap = liquid (from slurp), but blood by default
Xhee xrrap = water
Oogrrr = basically 'thing', but typically 'food' and, by default, 'deer'/'venison'
Xhee xrrap oogrrr = fish

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Asto nitote.
fall rain
That makes perfect sense.

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Rom an koko
Rum and coconut

Exactly.


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Hehe, hehe, hehe!
:D

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La'ikhõm nyóu cha kamikâ ék la'ikhõm ũ Nuta.
RESULT-explain POSS.2S PAST.PFV CAUS-AP-think 1S RESULT-explain POSS.3S Nort
[laʔɪkʰɔ̰m ɲó cʰɑ̄ kamɪkɑ̤ ʔɛ́k laʔɪkʰɔ̰m hí ʔṵ nʊtɑ̄]
Your gloss made me think of Nort's glosses.
Last edited by Travis B. on Mon Apr 09, 2018 9:03 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Ñ E M K Ä LY W E
Siöö jandeng raiglin zåbei tandiüłåd;
nää džunnfin kukuch vklaivei sivei tåd.
Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei.

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Travis B. wrote:La'ikhõm nyó cha kamikâ ék la'ikhõm ũ Nuta.
RESULT-explain POSS.2S PAST.PFV CAUS-AP-think 1S RESULT-explain POSS.3S Nort
[laʔɪkʰɔ̰m ɲó cʰɑ̄ kamɪkɑ̤ ʔɛ́k laʔɪkʰɔ̰m hí ʔṵ nʊtɑ̄]
Your gloss made me think of Nort's glosses.
Grrowrrr!
Good!

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Nortaneous wrote:Ñ E M K Ä LY W E
Ga mẽi thà líu bã sí!
PROX.S CLASS in DIST.S CLASS DIR
[gɑ̄ mḛ tʰɑ̀ lɨ́ bɑ̰ sí]
Speak of the devil!
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Ék yí thâ mòo awàeng biud'ot hou líu gêe màe.
1S NEG can create phrase COMP-good than DIST.S CLASS EGO
[ʔɛ́k jí tʰɑ̤ mɔ̀ɔ ʔɐwæ̀ŋ bɨɗɔ̄t hō lɨ́ gɛ̤ɛ mæ̀]
I could not come up with a better phrase than that.
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Vijay wrote:Mebbe aixe grrowrrierrr:
maybe like.this/thus happy-COMP
Maybe this is better:

NEG sardine rain liquid food bone-thing

Xhee = rain (onomatopeic)
Xrrap = liquid (from slurp), but blood by default
Xhee xrrap = water
Oogrrr = basically 'thing', but typically 'food' and, by default, 'deer'/'venison'
Xhee xrrap oogrrr = fish
Ék mi'ikâ màe.
1S AP-understand EGO
[ʔɛ́k miʔɪkɑ̤ mæ̀]
I understand.

Ék nẽu yí néin màe capâ hí ẽe lae mòo awàeng suhâe.
1S CONT NEG feel EGO mood REL DAT COMP create phrase cute
[ʔɛ́k nɘ̰ jí nén mæ̀ cɐpɑ̤ hí ʔɛ̰ɛ lǣ mɔ̀ɔ ʔɐwæ̀ŋ sʊhæ̤]
I still am not in the mood to make cute phrases.
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Ri ed kilai era, naito at ku silin e me?
Can you make non-cute phrases?

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Way yu ray tu taym sem ting?
Why do you write the same thing twice?


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jal wrote:Way yu ray tu taym sem ting?
Why do you write the same thing twice?


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Grrowrrr?
Huh?

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Vijay wrote:Huh?
Mi sahtm Bik Fahma pos tu taym, oba no nesfa pos ya sim banis.
I'm sure Graut Bʉr double-posted, but now the second post seems to have disappeared.


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jal wrote:I'm sure Graut Bʉr double-posted, but now the second post seems to have disappeared.
Oram isep nhi tegai nanap moê, mahai te tegai at pugot ne airaf ku keonot alâi. Ama rêai pas akai nuli lûno.
I accidentally double-posted, but I immediately deleted the second post. You seem to have seen it anyway.
jal wrote:Bik Fahma
"Bʉr" te Berulan "beru" tiste nerep, ki "búr" ed kilai "hoai ap". Lino Biris at "búr" te "beru" nerep, ki "akrerrē" ed kilai "hoai ap".
"Bʉr" means "bear" in Bearlandic and "búr" means "farmer". In Birisian, "búr" means "bear and "akrerrē" means "farmer".

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jal wrote:"Bʉr" means "bear" in Bearlandic and "búr" means "farmer".
Poloji! Mi wil sta dis taym kol yu Bik Beya (sapos "graut" min "bik") :).
Appologies! I'll from now on call you Big Bear (assuming "graut" means "big") :).


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