Help your conlang fluency (2)

[Pazmivaniye]

Dira pi roi fa la, figa-figey tošaf roturiz jari na pela-peluteyö, dam fi-figey kop jari.
That's better than me, I'm always making new languages and throwing them out, then starting a new one.

EDIT:
Kaw lawpuey ya pi, rotureyz jari la daje lodi zuriyur makaysi ya kop rotur. Dam topa daje lodi kopa.
Though on further consideration, my new languages are really radical evolutions of one language. So they're all really the same one.

[Nortaneous]

Sgha nyaj. !e pho rvurvu. Hei ǂei wxe meid, Ngmwragh.

I'm tired. I hardly slept last night. Now I'm working on a new language, Ngmwragh.

[clawgrip]

Ngomunglakswa aajung swa ler lognak ayt? Ngchekfloukswa aajung deu? Tpiñkoohswa pgihjoot.
Ngmwragh be language belong what.kind Q | analytic.language be Q | isolating.language seem.like
What kind of language is Ngmwragh? Is it analytic? It looks like an isolating language.

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Now I'm working on a new language, Ngmwragh.

ʍ̀ʀ̥ ɑ̣́ xʍ̀ ʙ̀ѝ z̀.
Màrao ái xamà mònì tcà.
[mɐ̃̀.ɾāō̯ áí̯ ʔɐ̄.mã̀ mɔ̃̀.n̻ɪ̃̀.ⁿʣã̀]
màrao ái xamà mònì=tcà
ngmwragh be name good=INT
Ngmwragh is an awesome name.

[Izambri]

Sâbi sjûrea... Naisas łigôndhore sisc bûlvit yalim?
I have a question... How many languages have you created yet?

Ont notzarol, està tudó s'hel·leu èu gras pasteratz sam tir dar-de famaures. Ont ardri notzarol tudó escatzere i nam, è vin nostarderamany nigance i se trise n'irn mitrelamne.
A dozen, but only Hellesan is enough worked as to make complex sentences with it. Another dozen only exist in name, and their development depends on the creation of a common protolanguage.

[Jipí]

ʍ̀ʀ̥ ɑ̣́ xʍ̀ ʙ̀ѝ z̀.
Màrao ái xamà mònì tcà.

Woah, is that an abugida based on the Latin and Cyrillic alphabets?!

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ʍ̀ʀ̥ ɑ̣́ xʍ̀ ʙ̀ѝ z̀.
Màrao ái xamà mònì tcà.

Woah, is that an abugida based on the Latin and Cyrillic alphabets?!

It is a semi-syllabary.
Each onset+nucleus combination has its own symbol, but tone and glides are marked by diacritics.

[GrinningManiac]

Yr yndraffabrachaignn it turtæchstæ yz wbhangoftæ dvorrieathach. Cwi atlaignn do?
ɪr ɪn̪d̪rə'f:æbræxɛgŋ ĭt̪ 't̪ʊrtəxst̪ə ɪs 'u:vəngɔft̪ə 'd̪vɔr:ijaɪθəx. Kwi æt̪ɫɛgŋ d̪ɔ?
I have re-envisioned the Dwarfish orthography and grammar. What do you think?

[Pazmivaniye]

Oooh 'æ'.

Migoñojenaw parusedis ya noñeda vo jareda?
Could you provide examples of the original along with the new version?

[GrinningManiac]

Yr yndraffabrachaignn it turtæchstæ yz wbhangoftæ dvorrieathach. Cwi atlaignn do?
ɪr ɪn̪d̪rə'f:æbræxɛgŋ ĭt̪ 't̪ʊrtəxst̪ə ɪs 'u:vəngɔft̪ə 'd̪vɔr:ijaɪθəx. Kwi æt̪ɫɛgŋ d̪ɔ?

Ea bw fabrachaigh indr it twrtachsta is wbhangofta dvorrieathach. Hvat eor bit atlachainn?
ja bu fabraxɛj indr it turtaxstə is uvangoftə dvorijaɪθax. Hvɑt jor bit atɫaxɛŋ?

I have re-envisioned the Dwarfish orthography and grammar. What do you think?

/æ/ is <æ> in a stressed position but doesn't seem to turn up here.

[Skomakar'n]

Yr yndraffabrachaignn it turtæchstæ yz wbhangoftæ dvorrieathach. Cwi atlaignn do?
ɪr ɪn̪d̪rə'f:æbræxɛgŋ ĭt̪ 't̪ʊrtəxst̪ə ɪs 'u:vəngɔft̪ə 'd̪vɔr:ijaɪθəx. Kwi æt̪ɫɛgŋ d̪ɔ?
I have re-envisioned the Dwarfish orthography and grammar. What do you think?

Íllandduils.
ílla‹›ndd-wi‹›ld-ˤh-z
Irish.
be_Irish-to_speak-3P-INAN
[ˈiːl̥ːɑnd(ː)ʊɪ̯l̥t͡s̻]

Œyhmýljæiluwks œksæs kúkkúlus. ._.
œ́‹›m=hmý‹›l-jǽ-lú‹›wgg-ˤh-z œ‹›ks-ˤh-z kú~kú‹l›w-ˤh-z
The old orthography was better. ._.
to_say=to_carve-be_one/together-to_perform-3P-INAN be_old-3P-INAN be_good~great-3P-INAN
[ˈœ̃ʏ̯̃ɸpm̥yːljæɪ̯ɾʊwx͡s̻ ˈœx͡s̻æs̻ ˈkʊːkːʊːɾʊ̯s̻]

[Pazmivaniye]

Ku sita-sitirey lodi Dwarfish kaw pono la.
I'm not all that familar with Dwarfish, but I like it.

[Izambri]

Yr yndraffabrachaignn it turtæchstæ yz wbhangoftæ dvorrieathach. Cwi atlaignn do?
ɪr ɪn̪d̪rə'f:æbræxɛgŋ ĭt̪ 't̪ʊrtəxst̪ə ɪs 'u:vəngɔft̪ə 'd̪vɔr:ijaɪθəx. Kwi æt̪ɫɛgŋ d̪ɔ?

Ea bw fabrachaigh indr it twrtachsta is wbhangofta dvorrieathach. Hvat eor bit atlachainn?
ja bu fabraxɛj indr it turtaxstə is uvangoftə dvorijaɪθax. Hvɑt jor bit atɫaxɛŋ?

I have re-envisioned the Dwarfish orthography and grammar. What do you think?

Manoves sint do, està tartac se syede tendescarea.
Both are nice, but I prefer the old orthography.

[Thry]

Hode nast!
/'hau̯.de nast/
['hau̯.ɾa nas(t)]
Goodnight!

[GrinningManiac]

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[GrinningManiac]

The new sentence/grammar with the old orthography would look like this:
(also I did away with the very obvious affixing of the 're-' or 'again' word to the front of the verb.)

Ir affabrachaignn indr it twrtachsta iz wbhangofta dvorrieathach. Cwi atlaignn do?
ɪr ə'fæbræxɛgŋ ɪn̪d̪r ĭt̪ 't̪ʊrtəxst̪ə ɪs 'u:vəngɔft̪ə 'd̪vɔr:ijaɪθəx. Kwi æt̪ɫɛgŋ d̪ɔ?

[GrinningManiac]

Byth, druchodd tom er o byschan mabhaligh is hungigh sen dwzmoch. It thagarog garidach tom er o byschan az tacr morr o it drochacharach is az bithosyacr is az dhosyacr. Bimagy da it garidachydolg! Tognn dobh! Bibhal it baschacharach!
bɪθ drʉxət tɔm ɛr ɔ bɪʂən mɑvəɫij ɪs həngij sɛn duz̩mɔx. ɪt θɑgərɔk gɑrɪdəx tɔm ɛr ɔ bɪʂən æs tækr̩ mɔr ɔ ɪt drɔxæxəræx ɪs æs bɪθɔsjækr̩ ɪs æs ðɔsjækr̩. bimɑkʲ dɑ ɪt gɑrɪdəxɪdɔɫk! tɔgŋ dɔf! bivəɫ ɪt bɑʂəxəræx!

Lo, Your troops will be as weak and helpless as women. The gates of your land will be opened wide to the enemy and set on fire and burned. Get ready for the siege! Store up water! Strengthen the defenses!

[Pazmivaniye]

Kanaze numey „æ“, miru fikey fa noñeda dita zi roi.
Though I love "æ", now I think that the original looks better.

(If that's what's in the last post.)

[Thry]

I've added myself to the trend and I'm trying to create a Germanic lang, Iveriss (West Germanic, Iberic phonetic influence, English modern influence, conservative in other aspects), but the lang is still in a baby or fetus stage.

Vaeder onser fae beys in Hemen
/'baɛ.deɾ 'on.seɾ ɸaɛ bɛis in 'ei.men/
[baɛ̯.ɾa 'on.saɾ ɸaɛ̯ bɛi̯s in 'ei̯.men]
Our father who art in heaven.

Wat dencen yr uver?
/wat 'd̪en.ken ɛiɾ 'ɛu.beɾ/
[wat 'd̪eŋ.kan ɛi̯ɾ 'eu̯.βaɾ]
What do you think?

[clawgrip]

Plao'auk keech ley Gelman-nakswa pgihjoot. Aa diangwgoy swa bgeypgih aajung lok?
appearance be.nice and Germanic-language.group seem.like | be intend language be.modern be Q
It looks nice and seems like a Germanic language. It's supposed to be a modern language, right?

[Thry]

Plao'auk keech ley Gelman-nakswa pgihjoot. Aa diangwgoy swa bgeypgih aajung lok?
appearance be.nice and Germanic-language.group seem.like | be intend language be.modern be Q
It looks nice and seems like a Germanic language. It's supposed to be a modern language, right?

Dance!
['d̪aŋ.ka]
Thanks!

Haud de lyced wat it is.
[hau̯ɾ d̪a lɛi̯kt wat it̪ is]
Good that it seems what it is .

Yae, it is nulye.
[jaɛ̯ it̪ is 'neu̯.li]
Yes, it is modern.

Syntax is undecided as of yet, and many irregular/strong verbs are being worked out. I intend it to have more Germanic roots and less Latinate ones, i.e. "nowly" for "modern".

[clawgrip]

Syntax is undecided as of yet, and many irregular/strong verbs are being worked out. I intend it to have more Germanic roots and less Latinate ones, i.e. "nowly" for "modern".

That is forsooth a mindwheting plot.

[Thry]

That is forsooth a mindwheting plot.

Laen live Angliss!
[laɛ̯n 'li.βa 'aŋ.glis]
Long live Anglish!

(lol I read "mindwetting"...)

[Jipí]

It looks a little like something in between German and English that isn't Dutch.

Lessee conlang …

Silvreng-kay ku-arilinyās si luga ya Almang nay Inglis sas palung na Nerlan.
look-3S.ACT=little like=something=P REL between LOC German and English REL-P different GEN Dutch

[Thry]

It looks a little like something in between German and English that isn't Dutch.

Haud bebrytien!
[hau̯ɾ be.'βɾɛi̯.t̪in]
Good description!

Is that good? In theory it's equally close to all three of them.