Help your conlang fluency (2)

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Re: Help your conlang fluency

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Jipí wrote:Image
Sinyareng talingtahānyeley cuna eda-deventahānena?
which-ACT.INAN tool.write.NMLZ-PL-P.INAN original this=system.write.NMLZ-GEN?
What are the original/initial writing implements of that script?
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Gĕĕt gāk trok roy woy hā.
truth this know be.exhaustive still NEG
Actually I'm not totally sure yet.
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Saibh-so yr throdaigh schortschog Doightschieathw bhw. I air wygh dwzm hyz yenn Doightschieath morw-morw. Hyz wygh it schortschog cytricw.
Today I went to my German class. There, there was a girl who had very good German. She was in the wrong class.

Zwecos sin am it Cwghr wygh. Had wre mighymingn. It Cwghr huttaigh az yecr dwmingr. Had bibhaigh ibhyagyachr: "Had-bod bairac, dwmingr bha!" It ibhyagyachr tofaigh Cwghr: "Bhibh bhagi had Wairwnoz." It Cwghr egh az bhibhr it bhagi had Wairwnoz am. "Wddh toftsch bha, bhodr alw Wairwnoz!" It bhagi had Wairwnoz egh nysr awy fall sin nas. "Wf huttagnn do?" "Yr huttagnn az yecr dwmingr." "is ec tricr." tofaigh it bhagi gyaltscha had Wairwnoz. It dwzm Cwghan mamaigh dwmingr."

Once there was a king. He was childless. The king wanted a son. He asked his priest: "May a son be born to me!" The priest said to the king: "Pray to the god Werunos". The king approached the god Werunos to pray now to the god. "Hear me, father Werunos!" The god Werunos came down from heaven to that place. "What do you want?" "I want a son." "With that it is so", said the bright god Werunos. The king's lady bore a son

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Ean wrote:Is de dyn west germanic au?
[is da dɛi̯n west heɾ.'ma.nik au̯]
Is yours West Germanic too?
Yes. I was thinking of making it Anglo-Frisian, but I don't like palatalization of /k/... on the other hand, I can't realistically do much else, since there's some Scottish Gaelic influence eventually.
Siöö jandeng raiglin zåbei tandiüłåd;
nää džunnfin kukuch vklaivei sivei tåd.
Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei.

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Re: Help your conlang fluency

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Bydhi, Phthwṛffŵn Dbhorrachthugg isim Dbhorrachthugg Baymugg.

Byth, falath Dvorrieath og is Dvorrieath Baighom og.


Behold, a sentence in Dwarfish and Ancient Dwarfish.

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Iŋiya! Kapmi Səŋčəw!
[ìˈŋíyà | kʰáb͡mì s̪ɨ́ŋt͡ʃɨ̀w]
Behold! A sentence in Seŋču!

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Pa jix om etheyt lo.
[pa dZix om et`ejt l`o]
DEF with 1s exist-PRS really
And I really exist.
It was about time I changed this.

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Sa i bodog. UN-ESTIG! MEDUR!
That's what you think. You don't exist! Liar!

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keew
nothing exists

(changing the default noun class from 1 to 6 so 'nothing exists' isn't the same as kee 'no')
Siöö jandeng raiglin zåbei tandiüłåd;
nää džunnfin kukuch vklaivei sivei tåd.
Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei.

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Igh cwmmyos dhosyagnn rycyn dwnygyn om had babi wf atlagnn
It's hard to hate someone whose grandmother you know.

I came up with this idiom in Dwarfish because I couldn't think for the life of me of an English phrase conveying the same thing.

Basically it means that you're admitting to hating someone or being openly hostile to someone in a situation where acting like that is inappropriate or awkward. The inference is that it's difficult to hate someone whose grandmother (or whole family) you know because the family will think less of you but despite this social pressure you're continuing to hate and be abrasive to the person anyway. It's highlighting how strong your dislike is that it can power through social protocol.

You'd use it in such a situation as this - you're at a party with some friends and that bastard Dave is there. You hate Dave. He did that thing a while ago, remember? What a bastard. But the party is of a mutual friend of your's and Dave's so you're both there. You end up in a conversation containing Dave. You're rude and abrasive and impolite to Dave in the conversation to the obvious discomfort of the rest of the group including the host. You leave the group and a friend comes up to you and says "Jesus, you were being a dick to Dave," and you scowl and down your drink and mutter "it's hard to hate someone whose grandmother you know,".

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Nortaneous wrote:keew
nothing exists
Naram. Nake amkam. Amke nakam asti ca.
Reject.NOM. Nothing.AT allthing.NOM exists. Allthing.AT nothing.NOM exists.3sg also.
False. Everything exists in nothing. And Nothing exists in Everything.

Aham enám mavasty ama
I/Ego.NOM way.ACC confuse.3sg only.
Only the I/ego confuses the issue here.

Kam asi vairya?
Who.NOM be.2sg really?
Really, who are you?
Talāṃ leya kalakena rāmah, saktalām peha leya bhūmena ca.
See a world in a grain of sand, and a heaven in a wild flower.
Omkāṃs tava sutvantayam pharo, 'naiṃ le' jeś ca.
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand, and eternity in an hour.

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Hwai aakaa.
1 exist
I exist.

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Duool aajung logeuu ayt?
2 be who Q
Who are you?

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Im y!
[im ɛi̯]
It's me!

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abaddamn wrote:Kam asi vairya?
Who.NOM be.2sg really?
Really, who are you?
nian fallcerre arucera
i am butts
Siöö jandeng raiglin zåbei tandiüłåd;
nää džunnfin kukuch vklaivei sivei tåd.
Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei.

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Om etheyt om kam.
[om "e.t`ejt om kam]
om ethey-t om kam
1s exist-PRS 1s as

I am myself (lit. I exist as me)

Omo zedoyt om kam.
["o.mo "ze.dojt om kam]
om-o zedoy-t om kam
1s.REFL identify-PRS 1s as

I am me (lit. I identify myself as me)
It was about time I changed this.

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Tarmantvelh, duc is bresso:
Finally, I got the motto:

Man se parcenye nais aurs
è se garce na se farde

With the wisdom of the skies
and the strength of the land
Un llapis mai dibuixa sense una mà.

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Chwur er it zwecoth, hyta am bytagnn,
Badhamonn Femanciachs it dwmingr Robh,
hyta bagaigh it dwmyndalor Ormillan.
Thorigan, ca, yr er az tafr ycher...

Long has been the time since when he lived,
Bavamon of the Clenched Fists the son of Robb,
who slayed the daemonspawn of Ormillr.
A tale, here, I shall now tell...


The first verse of the Dwarfish epic "Bavamon, son of Robb,", detailing his famed slaying of the monstrous offspring of the great evil dragon, Ormillr.

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Duool aajung logeuu ayt?
2 be who Q
Who are you?
Mam ati, vitayenah.
Me be-3sg, other-link-solver.NOM
It's me, a computer.
Talāṃ leya kalakena rāmah, saktalām peha leya bhūmena ca.
See a world in a grain of sand, and a heaven in a wild flower.
Omkāṃs tava sutvantayam pharo, 'naiṃ le' jeś ca.
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand, and eternity in an hour.

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clawgrip wrote: Duool aajung logeuu ayt?
2 be who Q
Who are you?
Mii-a fii-Imaralu
We are Imralu.

ɣanɣalilImraluwayilxatwidaf
(The) Imralu is us.
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Hajadoshujenatzi!
[hadʒ.a.do.ʃu.dʒɛ.nat.zi]

2P.ANIMATE.NEUTER.DESIDERATIVE.HYPOTHETICAL.PROSECUTIVE.OPTATIVE.ENERGETIC

You should be what you want to be!
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Adúljôžal ônal kol ví éža únah kex yaxlr gmlĥ hôga jô ônal kru ansu frú.
Ansu frú ônal savel zaš gmlĥ a vek Adúljôžal vé jaga čaþ kex.
Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh.

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Miiil wrote:
clawgrip wrote:Who are you?
We are Imralu.
ak
no

ta ke Milloniare a
You are Milloniare.


One of the Seralites that still surfaces on occasion.

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GrinningManiac wrote:Chwur er it zwecoth, hyta am bytagnn,
Badhamonn Femanciachs it dwmingr Robh,
hyta bagaigh it dwmyndalor Ormillan.
Thorigan, ca, yr er az tafr ycher...

Long has been the time since when he lived,
Bavamon of the Clenched Fists the son of Robb,
who slayed the daemonspawn of Ormillr.
A tale, here, I shall now tell...


The first verse of the Dwarfish epic "Bavamon, son of Robb,", detailing his famed slaying of the monstrous offspring of the great evil dragon, Ormillr.
Can you explain why Badhamonn > Bavamon?
Un llapis mai dibuixa sense una mà.

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sano wrote:Seralites
Müna kasiditha?
What do you mean?

If I've been annoying or something, tell me, so I can apologise...
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Aiwantąj.
á‹›jw-ˤntˤ-j
to_sleep-DES-1P
[ˈɑɪ̯wɑ̃n̥tɑ̃j] (formal standard)

Na zēidair aîwair.
n-ēad zēid-ā-ir aîw-ā-ir
PROG-RES to_want-EPNTH-1P to_sleep-EPNTH-1P
/ˈna ˈzɛː.ɪda.ɪr aˈiːwa.ɪr/ (classic),
/ˈna ˈzɛɪ̯daɪ̯r ˈaɪ̯waɪ̯r/ (modern)

*ājwejr tjehnejr
ājw-e-jr tjehn-e-jr
to_sleep-EPNTH-1P to_want-EPNTH-1P
*/ˈaːjwəjɽ ˈtʲəʕnəjɽ/

I want to sleep.
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Online dictionary for my conlang Vanga: http://royalrailway.com/tungumaalMiin/Vanga/

#undef FEMALE

I'd love for you to try my game out! Here's the forum thread about it:
http://zbb.spinnwebe.com/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=36688

Of an Ernst'ian one.

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Pñuang aajung swagwaat sam tgai ler swa ot lok?
that be dialect three be.different belong language one Q
Are those three dialects of one language?
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clawgrip wrote:Pñuang aajung swagwaat sam tgai ler swa ot lok?
that be dialect three be.different belong language one Q
Are those three dialects of one language?
Two very distantly related languages and their common ancestor.
Online dictionary for my conlang Vanga: http://royalrailway.com/tungumaalMiin/Vanga/

#undef FEMALE

I'd love for you to try my game out! Here's the forum thread about it:
http://zbb.spinnwebe.com/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=36688

Of an Ernst'ian one.

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