Help your conlang fluency (2)

[vampireshark]

S'amo di mièin maitra și me, glanime delle yagode l'è delle zile. Revinrãt èo casu mit 4,5 kg yagodilae. Anziè fime une jielu yagodilar și portocailir ci è zeru delic̦io. Seziè fanom une tarte utila yagodilar și rubarblor.
My mother's friend and I went out to pick strawberries a few days ago and came home with about 10 pounds/4.5 kg of them. Yesterday, we made a sorbet from the strawberries and from some oranges that's really delicious. Today, we'll be making a pie using both strawberries and rhubarb.

[abaddamn]

na ma tahi nayo ke kuya telayehi
My son and I just cut the grass.

Kas tvau tava ṣanghuś ca klityavit kāllutyavit ko kaladvāh?
Q: 2sg.SBJ son.SBJ sickle(cut-tool.fem).INSTR mower(cut-mover.fem).INSTR-or do you both?
Do you both you and your son cut with a sickle or with a lawn mower?

[masako]

Kas tvau tava ṣanghuś ca klityavit kāllutyavit ko kaladvāh?
Q: 2sg.SBJ son.SBJ sickle(cut-tool.fem).INSTR mower(cut-mover.fem).INSTR-or do you both?
Do you both you and your son cut with a sickle or with a lawn mower?

na'am ke telanyo siyoye
1PL.EXCL P cut.tool use.PST
We used a lawn mower.

[KathTheDragon]

Zmiðdam zkiptrí zum til ín málr ov ín Alakárí. Kanið nei mátr zyá ðau.
I've made some changes to Alakari (the name of the con-lang). You probably can't see them.

[abaddamn]

Kas tvau tava ṣanghuś ca klityavit kāllutyavit ko kaladvāh?
Q: 2sg.SBJ son.SBJ sickle(cut-tool.fem).INSTR mower(cut-mover.fem).INSTR-or do you both?
Do you both you and your son cut with a sickle or with a lawn mower?

na'am ke telanyo siyoye
1PL.EXCL P cut.tool use.PST
We used a lawn mower.

Cíkanga. Cíkavam aaruuraɳaɭ vaa!
Nice. Makes it alot easier!

Zmiðdam zkiptrí zum til ín málr ov ín Alakárí. Kanið nei mátr zyá ðau.
I've made some changes to Alakari (the name of the con-lang). You probably can't see them.

Kaanir-ubhaanih sataah?
What changes are they?

[KathTheDragon]

Zmiðdam zkiptrí zum til ín málr ov ín Alakárí. Kanið nei mátr zyá ðau.
I've made some changes to Alakari (the name of the con-lang). You probably can't see them.

Kaanir-ubhaanih sataah?
What changes are they?

Ílzidam ín <v> norzk, zem <v> alaká, werzú wet vírklei <w> alaká.
I misinterpreted Old Norse <v> as Alakari <v>, instead of Alakari <w>.

[Jipí]

Kas tvau tava ṣanghuś ca klityavit kāllutyavit ko kaladvāh?

Looks like Indo-Iranian.

Cíkanga. Cíkavam aaruuraɳaɭ vaa! […] Kaanir-ubhaanih sataah?

Looks like Dravidian.

Zmiðdam zkiptrí zum til ín málr ov ín Alakárí. Kanið nei mátr zyá ðau.

Looks like Icelandic.

[Click]

Kaipó nió pa?
[kěpᵝ ɲʉ́ pa]
What does Kaipó look like?

Pa o soái: Toi siò làni, mo siòtosó.
[po sᵝé ty ɕʉ̀ làɲ mu ɕᵝtǔs]
Here's a sample: The man sees the woman using the telescope.

[KathTheDragon]

Zmiðdam zkiptrí zum til ín málr ov ín Alakárí. Kanið nei mátr zyá ðau.

Looks like Icelandic.

Nei Málízlandikr. Ín orðrí éré al náliga takádré vrá Málnorzkr, oxk ín orðzmiðretr wet ávtzmaiðdá al náliga.
Not Icelandic. Vocab largely derived from Old Norse, grammar largely reinvented.

[abaddamn]

Zmiðdam zkiptrí zum til ín málr ov ín Alakárí. Kanið nei mátr zyá ðau.
I've made some changes to Alakari (the name of the con-lang). You probably can't see them.

Kaanir-ubhaanih sataah?
What changes are they?

Ílzidam ín <v> norzk, zem <v> alaká, werzú wet vírklei <w> alaká.
I misinterpreted Old Norse <v> as Alakari <v>, instead of Alakari <w>.

Aa, ya, tanga karaanal vaageh' aasthanas.
Ah, yep, that-SBJ little-dislike.SBJ fuck.ADV be.can-3sg
Oh yep, that can be annoying as.

Kaipó nió pa?
[kěpᵝ ɲʉ́ pa]
What does Kaipó look like?

Pa o soái: Toi siò làni, mo siòtosó.
[po sᵝé ty ɕʉ̀ làɲ mu ɕᵝtǔs]
Here's a sample: The man sees the woman using the telescope.

Na jhethusma. Ahau Guugal-Laabhamaahvil lathusma tedha Italyamahum ladhusma ca haha
Neg ideate.able-1sg.PST 1sg.SBJ Google-Transspeak.INSTR send-1sg.PST so, Italia-speak.ACC get-1sg.PST and laugh
No idea (couldn't figure it out), so I put it into Google Translate, and got Italian, LOL.

[Qwynegold]

Í como visie non proreàli Liuz admèdio chrón fair. Cu an enes a repeti ócersat.
1SG.M PST see not intentionally Liu-ACC approximately-in.middle time long. but now 3SG.N be.PRED again interesting
I haven't had a look at Liu in a long time. But now it's interesting again.

[finlay]

Zmiðdam zkiptrí zum til ín málr ov ín Alakárí. Kanið nei mátr zyá ðau.

Looks like Icelandic.

Nei Málízlandikr. Ín orðrí éré al náliga takádré vrá Málnorzkr, oxk ín orðzmiðretr wet ávtzmaiðdá al náliga.
Not Icelandic. Vocab largely derived from Old Norse, grammar largely reinvented.

That is Icelandic. You just described Icelandic.

[KathTheDragon]

It's not Icelandic!

In Alakari: there are no cases in nouns or adjectives; adjectives follow the noun; the articles come before the noun; there are no subject pronouns; the verb must come first; there is no single reflexive pronoun; only verbs and personal pronouns have any sort of inflection; the numbers are base-12; the verb conjugations are characterised by what their stem ends in (which can be any consonant), and all conjugate in a near-identical way, apart from how they generate their past tense; questions are formed by a verb ending instead of changing word order; there are no phonemic unvoiced fricatives; the velar nasal is phonemic; technically there is a glottal stop; there is a /w/; the vowels are /i e a o u/ and diphthongs /ai au ei eu oi ou/, plus long monophthongs.

Quite a list.

[Chagen]

Ahh...bin Azenti dhav?
ahh...what Azenti look.like
Ah...what does Azenti look like?

Bertonradh ara: "Ome Aueg muta mur nesjuprovumjotjo zen fit Aueg tol ratrasor stir vav zonip ara."
through-talk-INSTR.NMLZ be: now 1PL be.FUT-PTCPL pray survive-MIDD-PTCPL.PERF.COND-REL-DU DESTINATION if 1PL GEN soldier-PL fast more be.PST-PTCPL.PERF.COND be
An example: "We will now pray for the two who would have survived if our soldiers had been faster"

[Qwynegold]

Ahh...bin Azenti dhav?
ahh...what Azenti look.like
Ah...what does Azenti look like?

Bertonradh ara: "Ome Aueg muta mur nesjuprovumjotjo zen fit Aueg tol ratrasor stir vav zonip ara."
through-talk-INSTR.NMLZ be: now 1PL be.FUT-PTCPL pray survive-MIDD-PTCPL.PERF.COND-REL-DU DESTINATION if 1PL GEN soldier-PL fast more be.PST-PTCPL.PERF.COND be
An example: "We will now pray for the two who would have survived if our soldiers had been faster"

Pseu Indí.
Indic.

[Chagen]

(Amazing that Azenti started out as a rip-off of Latin. But given that I added voiced aspirates because I love Sanskrit too much, I'm not surprised you answered Indic)

[Rodlox]

Peronyralo Mhidhialo -

Google bha: rhemamhoMalaymhidhi:
Google bʰa rʰema-mʰo-Malay-mʰidʰi
Google say: LOC.at,here,place-nonself-Malay-language,converse
Google says this is Malay:

Ghatarl Mandarinmha peronyrove wa.
gʰat-ɑrl Mandarin-mʰa pero-nyro-(o)ve wa.
1.i-experiencer/TOP Mandarin-SBJ.TOP ongoing-1.deliberate-bright,light,shining DECL.
I say: Mandarin is cool!

[Matrix]

Ke. Cal domar varo jonolion endosge.
[ke ‖ t͡ʃal ˈdom.aːɹɾ ˈvaːɹɾ.o d͡ʒon.olˈi.on ˈɛn.dos.ge]
now || more insane this look-CONT be-PAST.PFV
Well, that was quite confusing to read.

Kilo hojak thelai ker scaru, galacuini ker fankorado hoj irekan kanta thecak gasc.
[ˈki.lo ˈhoʒ.ak ˈθɛ.la.i kɛːɹɾ ˈʃaːɹɾ.u | ga.laˈt͡ʃʷin.i kɛːɹɾ fan.koːɹɾˈa.do hoʒ ˈiɹɾ.ɛ.kan ˈkan.ta ˈθɛ.t͡ʃak gaʃ]
with 2SG.POSS line-PL of script | technique-PL of distinct-NOUN 2SG medium OPT use ATT
You should try to use techniques of clarification in your lines of text.

Tilar varo kemu das ta'ra ar demol deruzi.
[ˈtil.aːɹɾ ˈvaːɹɾ.o ˈkɛm.u das ˈtaːɹɾ.a aːɹɾ ˈdɛm.ol dɛːɹɾ.uz.i]
alike this thing hold-ADJ on 1SG and other person-PL
Like what I've got, and others as well.

Falu kilo, kuda ki kalaz ker ki komai endos? Fijankon varoi endos.
[ˈfa.lu ˈki.lo | ˈku.da ki ˈkal.az kɛːɹɾ ˈko.ma.i ˈɛn.dos ‖ ˈfiʒ.an.kon ˈvaːɹɾ.o.i ˈɛn.dos]
but with | what DEF.ART matter of DEF.ART comma-PL be || foreign this-PL be
Also, what's with the commas? They're weird.

[Rodlox]

Kilo hojak thelai ker scaru, galacuini ker fankorado hoj irekan kanta thecak gasc.
[ˈki.lo ˈhoʒ.ak ˈθɛ.la.i kɛːɹɾ ˈʃaːɹɾ.u | ga.laˈt͡ʃʷin.i kɛːɹɾ fan.koːɹɾˈa.do hoʒ ˈiɹɾ.ɛ.kan ˈkan.ta ˈθɛ.t͡ʃak gaʃ]
with 2SG.POSS line-PL of script | technique-PL of distinct-NOUN 2SG medium OPT use ATT
You should try to use techniques of clarification in your lines of text.

{beyond the - and .s? I can't use <>s as I have no infixes}

Falu kilo, kuda ki kalaz ker ki komai endos? Fijankon varoi endos.
[ˈfa.lu ˈki.lo | ˈku.da ki ˈkal.az kɛːɹɾ ˈko.ma.i ˈɛn.dos ‖ ˈfiʒ.an.kon ˈvaːɹɾ.o.i ˈɛn.dos]
but with | what DEF.ART matter of DEF.ART comma-PL be || foreign this-PL be
Also, what's with the commas? They're weird.

{commas are my way of holding true to the advice to avoid one-to-one correspondences with English words}

[Nortaneous]

Kaipó nió pa?
[kěpᵝ ɲʉ́ pa]
What does Kaipó look like?.

Piraha on steroids, as I'm sure you were going for.

Ahh...bin Azenti dhav?
ahh...what Azenti look.like
Ah...what does Azenti look like?

A conlang.

Linzgzonqïs Myär? Malqhdumas:
[tɬʼĩzˠɣzˠɔ̃qʼɜtsʼ mjɛr mɑlχdˠumɑtsʼ]
What does Miar look like? Here's a short example:

C̣ahhishiphunchö inptïoy ñüsoy. Cëʔëdgyagwënṟt länphus cëʔëdgyas sharos.
[ʈʂʼɑhhisifũcʰy ĩpʼt̪ʼɜɔj ɲɵtsʼɔj. cʼɪʔɪzˠɣjɑgwɪ̃r̪t̪ʼ dɮɛ̃pʰutsʼ cʼɪʔɪzˠɣjɑtsʼ tsʰɑrotsʼ.]

[Click]

Linzgzonqïs Myär? Malqhdumas:
What does Miar look like? Here's a short example:

C̣ahhishiphunchö inptïoy ñüsoy. Cëʔëdgyagwënṟt länphus cëʔëdgyas sharos.

Ka no siró. Haiki máipo Arikasia, hòi?
I'm not sure. A weird Afroasiatic language, maybe?

[Matrix]

{beyond the - and .s? I can't use <>s as I have no infixes}

Tar ki andrast hurgajamado ki kalaz nil endos.
on DEF.ART tough translate-NOUN DEF.ART matter not be
I don't mean in the gloss.

Van nurakith cuini, vas jar thela ar vas thela ker ki pile scaru ar vas nalwain thela ra da.
in all pattern-PL | one thick line and one line of DEF.ART small script and one jagged line 1SG hold
I have one bold line, one small-text, and one in italics, in each set.

Ki thelai zu demoli varo fankor kaverza.
DEF.ART line-PL from other-PL this distinct convert
This distinguishes the lines from eachother.

{commas are my way of holding true to the advice to avoid one-to-one correspondences with English words}

Opal vas zu nurakith hoj seluf kanta kemor.
ready one from all 2SG easy OPT decide
Just choose whichever one is appropriate.

Zu kilo demol, cal nelcuona ka kahrot.
from with other | more chaotic 3SG.N become
Otherwise, it becomes quite muddied.

Linzgzonqïs Myär? Malqhdumas:
[tɬʼĩzˠɣzˠɔ̃qʼɜtsʼ mjɛr mɑlχdˠumɑtsʼ]
What does Miar look like? Here's a short example:

C̣ahhishiphunchö inptïoy ñüsoy. Cëʔëdgyagwënṟt länphus cëʔëdgyas sharos.
[ʈʂʼɑhhisifũcʰy ĩpʼt̪ʼɜɔj ɲɵtsʼɔj. cʼɪʔɪzˠɣjɑgwɪ̃r̪t̪ʼ dɮɛ̃pʰutsʼ cʼɪʔɪzˠɣjɑtsʼ tsʰɑrotsʼ.]

Ki Hurga ker Turki ra hadaj, zu kan, ki "C"i ar ki dinas kami.
DEF.ART language of Turk-PL 1SG think | from for | DEF.ART C-PL and DEF.ART two-ADJ dot-PL
I say Turkish, because of the C's and double-dots.

[GrinningManiac]

Niṁalak ija tu awaīwaī Aṁrīka chauja
Chiþ ír is sen resg skán America
Ma fagt Al-Amerig chánan mir

It looks like a higgledy-piggledy Native American language to me

[Pazmivaniye]

Nos saf zobe se niequé soliacis e cujrad uloitede ro nos vé rotradis tar noquivure extérede de lan rotrad dimój có cu ro ja rotrad dimój (palétul) bel? La quelmogué, la sité pistir soliacis lu lan móscof.
[nɔs saf zɔb sɛ njeˈke soljaˈsis e kyˈʒra ylɥaˈtɛd rɔ nɔs ve rotraˈdis tar nokiˈvyr eʃteˈrɛd de lɑ̃ roˈtra diˈmoʒ ko ky rɔ ʒa roˈtra paleˈtyl bɛl || la kelmoˈge | la siˈte pisˈtir soljaˈsis ly lɑ̃ mosˈkɔf]

Nos saf zob s'la nek solkes kijjer nilätted ro'n veh rötres nökivir exterd de rötret la dimmej baz ki ro'n rotter dimmej (päletän) bel? La kelmog, la sit pister solkes li moskeft la.
/nɔs sɑf zɔb s‿lɑ nɛk ˈsɔlkəs ˈkɪʒəɾ ˈnilætɛd ʁo‿n ve ˈʁœtʁəs ˈnøkiviɾ ˈɛʃtɛʁd də ˈʁœtʁət lɑ ˈdɪməʒ bɑz ki ʁo‿n ʁɔtəɾ ˈdɪməʒ ˈpæletæn bɛl || lɑ ˈkɛlmɔg | lɑ sɪt ˈpɪstəɾ ˈsɔlkəs li ˈmɔskəft lɑ/

Is it bad that I have written sound changes for the two most important languages related to my main language but not for the main language (Palethian) yet? I mean, I know most of the changes in my head.

(The first above is the proto-lang and the second is the descendent I came up with history for today. It looks Germanic but has more inflected verbs, no indefinite article, and a construct state. Also just about every final syllable has a schwa nucleus. Not anymore.)

[ná'oolkiłí]

Xay teata jgechéig cqés. Im eat eg epainórde desendént — xó camb choneydigq abigqaig mi causén poig, peig etxiules eg ma dichis.
[ˈʃɛæ̯ ˈtɪɛ̯tə zɛˈʔɛz ˈkɛs || ˈɵ̃ ˈɛt ˈɪɛ̯ ɨpɐˈnɔrdɨ dɨsɛ̃ˈdɪ̃ŋ | ˈʃuː ˈkɐ̃b ʔɔˈneɪ̯dɨg əbɪgˈaz mɪˈkɔɒ̯səpəz | ˈpɛz ɛˈtʃaɪ̯lɨs ˈɪɛ̯ ˈma: dɪˈʔis]
1SG=know:PRES.1SG 2SG=3SG=OBL mean:INF what=DEF=PV language this is spanish=DEF=GEN descendent 1SG=can:PRES.1SG change phonetic=PL apply:INF 1SG.POSS head=DEF=in=PV but write:INF=FOC is COMP hard
I know what you mean. This language is a Spanish descendent — I can do the sound changes in my head, but writing them down is harder.