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Izambri wrote:
Imralu wrote:
Astraios wrote:18 ndika gin hua, 18 ndika Imralutsil ghua. 18 ndika zame ihugia.
If you're 18, Imralu's 18 too. We are all 18.
Ca. Egiorava year uvu na.
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No. We are thirty.
Ris! Eu ei faruig sam "we are thirsty".
Lol, I read that as "we are thirsty".
Ŋe, suralihē? Ðaria fiźia rimú tārniþa.
The thirst, eh? Y'all must be parched.
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Τζορ μέ σιοτ γα πεο δά κιεομ, ξίμ ιεφανί γα μιο δά τλζοιμυκ κεο πεοκέοτ.
Tšor mē syt ga pø dā kiøm, qīm iep'anī ga my dā tɬoimuk kø pøkø̄t.
/tɕoɾ meː syt ga pø daː kʲøm||qiːm jepʕaniː ga my daː tɬoɪmuk kø pøkøːt/
old more man AOR POT to.be handsome || however general-in AOR NEG to.be sexy or able.to-date
Older men can be handsome, but usually not sexy or datable.
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Nate wrote:Τζορ μέ σιοτ γα πεο δά κιεομ, ξίμ ιεφανί γα μιο δά τλζοιμυκ κεο πεοκέοτ.
Tšor mē syt ga pø dā kiøm, qīm iep'anī ga my dā tɬoimuk kø pøkø̄t.
/tɕoɾ meː syt ga pø daː kʲøm||qiːm jepʕaniː ga my daː tɬoɪmuk kø pøkøːt/
old more man AOR POT to.be handsome || however general-in AOR NEG to.be sexy or able.to-date
Older men can be handsome, but usually not sexy or datable.
Zua! Babat gehengia.
Not so! Daddies are great.

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Astraios wrote:22 ndika cih gavndika hugia.
Everyone over 22 is old.
Per casual, s'es issa t'edad?
Περ άλω κάσω, ης ίσσα ετάς συ;
By any chance, is that your age?

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tuíl hútli! tlé-tuíl nguó uet sau namit
year\I.SG happy || DEM.I.SG-year\1.SG be DES good 2.PL.INC-OBJ
Happy New Year! I hope this year is good to us!
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Nate wrote:Τζορ μέ σιοτ γα πεο δά κιεομ, ξίμ ιεφανί γα μιο δά τλζοιμυκ κεο πεοκέοτ.
Tšor mē syt ga pø dā kiøm, qīm iep'anī ga my dā tɬoimuk kø pøkø̄t.
/tɕoɾ meː syt ga pø daː kʲøm||qiːm jepʕaniː ga my daː tɬoɪmuk kø pøkøːt/
old more man AOR POT to.be handsome || however general-in AOR NEG to.be sexy or able.to-date
Older men can be handsome, but usually not sexy or datable.
Kuemas uwi.
be.incorrect GEN.2s.ANIM
You're wrong.

I have also insulted you here by using an animate pronoun instead of a masculine pronoun, refusing to acknowledge you as a man. :-P
Glossing Abbreviations: COMP = comparative, C = complementiser, ACS / ICS = accessible / inaccessible, GDV = gerundive, SPEC / NSPC = specific / non-specific
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Thry wrote:Per casual, s'es issa t'edad?
Περ άλω κάσω, ης ίσσα ετάς συ;
By any chance, is that your age?
Gavndika ihumi! Varhega ji 22 ndika ihua, varhega jisil 23 cih gavndika hugia.
I'm not old! I'll be 22 in two months, after which time everyone over 23 will be old.

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Grype-te e.
I get it.

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Imralu wrote:
Nate wrote:Τζορ μέ σιοτ γα πεο δά κιεομ, ξίμ ιεφανί γα μιο δά τλζοιμυκ κεο πεοκέοτ.
Tšor mē syt ga pø dā kiøm, qīm iep'anī ga my dā tɬoimuk kø pøkø̄t.
/tɕoɾ meː syt ga pø daː kʲøm||qiːm jepʕaniː ga my daː tɬoɪmuk kø pøkøːt/
old more man AOR POT to.be handsome || however general-in AOR NEG to.be sexy or able.to-date
Older men can be handsome, but usually not sexy or datable.
Kuemas uwi.
be.incorrect GEN.2s.ANIM
You're wrong.

I have also insulted you here by using an animate pronoun instead of a masculine pronoun, refusing to acknowledge you as a man. :-P
Nn va gosia. Ba janjan yekmasil hua.
He's so wrong. You're both sexy and datable.

Thry wrote:Grype-te e.
I get it.
Ba gunak gunak gavndika humi gia. Ihsemk nindika hua.
It means you'll never ever be old. You're younger than me.

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Σι!
Yay!

Σευ ήραμι μαι προβλήμα. Σύκω σάγγε, μεμώρας;
But that was not a problem to me. I suck blood, remember?

An naer.
And more.

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Thry wrote:Σι!
Yay!

Σευ ήραμι μαι προβλήμα. Σύκω σάγγε, μεμώρας;
But that was not a problem to me. I suck blood, remember?

An naer.
And more.
Cnum ihsem gavndikasil gin hua, gavndika sa hua.
Even if you're a vampire that's older than me, then you're still old.

Icnumdua mani.
Suck mine, darling.

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jebqushiri
go to church, lol
Siöö jandeng raiglin zåbei tandiüłåd;
nää džunnfin kukuch vklaivei sivei tåd.
Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei.

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Αν, ιβί ύνα η φου ναι ηντερτήντο.
Do not, I did once and it wasn't fun.
Icnumdua mani.
Suck mine, darling.
...φαστα σείας αζύρος.
...until you're blue.

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ol bofosh wrote:Anod erefiwt shoku ol alahith. Witey shan thefiv!
You should all learn Alahithian. Purify your minds!
Kua minues ivu xi teinixy.
[g=JUSS]kua(s)[/g] [g=be.familiar+INCEP]mue(s)+in[/g] [g=NOM.2s.ANIM]ivu[/g] [g=ACC.3s.DEF.INAN.REL]xi[/g] [g=be.Danish]teinixy[/g]
You should all learn Danish.
Nortaneous wrote:jebqushiri
go to church, lol
Ca. E hu ixi malanuwo.
[g=be.not]ca(r)[/g] | [g=IMP]e(r)[/g] [g=move]hu[/g] [g=DAT.3s.DEF.INAN.REL]ixi[/g] [g=be.house]mala(n)-[/g][g=be.Uwo]uwo(s)[/g]
No. Go to Malanuwo.

E miena xu jiza xu kotw evu kili huji nigaa.
[g=IMP]e[/g] [g=be.forgotten]miena[/g] [g=NOM.3s.DEF.INAN.REL]xu[/g] [g=be.Jesus]jiza[/g] [g=NOM.3s.DEF.INAN.REL]xu[/g] [g=be.God]kotw[/g] [g=VOC.2s.ANIM.REL]evu[/g] [g=be.child]kili[/g] [g=VRB-]h-[/g][g=GEN.3s.DEF.ANIM.REL]uji[/g] [g=be.Ningaa]nigaa[/g]
And forget this 'Jesus' and this 'God', child of Ningaa.

Malanuwo is the Ngolu equivalent of church for men. It means 'house of Uwo'. Uwo is the god of masculinity, death and destruction. Women and children go to malanigaa. Ningaa is the goddess of femininity, life and creation. Nortaneous has been addressed in the animate gender as all non-Ngolu heathen men are (not the masculine). The loanwords jiza '(be) Jesus' and kotw '(be) the Judeo-Christian god' are referred to in the inanimate - in the case of Jesus, because he is dead and dead people are always either indicated in the inanimate or in the animate with the perfect marker, and in the case of God, basically just because it's a heathen concept.
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My nigaa
Slava, čĭstŭ, hrabrostĭ!

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Imralu wrote:
Nate wrote:Τζορ μέ σιοτ γα πεο δά κιεομ, ξίμ ιεφανί γα μιο δά τλζοιμυκ κεο πεοκέοτ.
Tšor mē syt ga pø dā kiøm, qīm iep'anī ga my dā tɬoimuk kø pøkø̄t.
/tɕoɾ meː syt ga pø daː kʲøm||qiːm jepʕaniː ga my daː tɬoɪmuk kø pøkøːt/
old more man AOR POT to.be handsome || however general-in AOR NEG to.be sexy or able.to-date
Older men can be handsome, but usually not sexy or datable.
Kuemas uwi.
be.incorrect GEN.2s.ANIM
You're wrong.

I have also insulted you here by using an animate pronoun instead of a masculine pronoun, refusing to acknowledge you as a man. :-P
[Μάμά, ζά θο νύτ ιεφανί. Δάμα ραπτόνγ τα φαι.
also-also, me PST to.say general-in. to.exist exception of plenty.
Well, I said usually. There are plenty of exceptions.

Μά, σίν χιτ μέτ. Ίμ ζά νόζ σά γα αλ κόιτ καρζί τυο νάκ... ;Δ;
also, that cruel most. now me to.wish me AOR to.have shoulder of boyfriend for to.cry
Also, that is so mean. I wish I had a boyfriend's shoulder to cry on now. ;_;

(... I like this one so far. Sentences are a lot shorter than the other one.)
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Tondem emerçar te an Thry èu inceretatz ī ont bergi sarglisazzirarn.
So we can state that Thry is involved in some gay-vampysexual thing.
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Thry wrote:...φαστα σείας αζύρος.
...until you're blue.
Nnnn.
Hell yeah.

Imralu wrote:Kua minues ivu xi teinixy.
[g=JUSS]kua(s)[/g] [g=be.familiar+INCEP]mue(s)+in[/g] [g=NOM.2s.ANIM]ivu[/g] [g=ACC.3s.DEF.INAN.REL]xi[/g] [g=be.Danish]teinixy[/g]
You should all learn Danish.
Ey vaa cedia.
Omg what have you done.

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Imralu wrote:Malanuwo is the Ngolu equivalent of church for men. It means 'house of Uwo'. Uwo is the god of masculinity, death and destruction.
iskode taxelshri! drdzahe psixshiri!
fuck school! burn shit!
Siöö jandeng raiglin zåbei tandiüłåd;
nää džunnfin kukuch vklaivei sivei tåd.
Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei.

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Astraios wrote:
Imralu wrote:Kua minues ivu xi teinixy.
[g=JUSS]kua(s)[/g] [g=be.familiar+INCEP]mue(s)+in[/g] [g=NOM.2s.ANIM]ivu[/g] [g=ACC.3s.DEF.INAN.REL]xi[/g] [g=be.Danish]teinixy[/g]
You should all learn Danish.
Ey vaa cedia.
Omg what have you done.
Tessics. Tente fenye.
Drugs. That plague.
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Taŋúluu héniníime kte’íwenáa’i yaa? Kí’iŋaw hébisé’edáa kiw’úun!
How can the Ngolu speak about heathens? They are all heretics themselves!

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Imralu wrote:[...] Uwo is the god of masculinity, death and destruction.
Es dou sarlaig te perènent sis sardens deu Dares (ar Dars), is mans na se serdanie è is sagà serdà nais danys è se genade. Tarmaule nas ferc Warmaz ar Dwarmaz, Dares dallat vin sagà genadur è tursat a ger is mans na se sazzirarnessant è se daŀle esmente è se darlaridne ī is massald ghisomant sardè.
The closest thing Sardens had was Dares (or Dars), the god of wild places and, by extension, of the wild side of nature and the human being. Evolved from the older Warmaz or Dwarmaz, Dares lost his 'nature side' and became the divinity of masculinity, wild sex and erotism, and free dance and flute music during the Early Imperial period.
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Ēmandīr Aneitailtvu Baranxin valos þinin ēþ ha’ini has anar alētvi ā aleisīrtu, marxitu, sanātu ā lunlīrtu, rāŋhutu ā śātrīrtu.
worship=NMLZ defend-region=GEN.PL-INAN Baranxi•M-ACC knows-INAN-ABSENT PROX-M-ACC that REL-M be.3.ANIM.SG deity man<GEN.PL> male=NMLZ=GEN, FIRE•M=GEN, sex=GEN and grow=NMLZ=GEN, disease•INAN=GEN and healthy-NMLZ=GEN
The religion of the Marches knows Baranxi, the god of masculinity, fire, sex and growth, diseases and health.

Haunu raftiho ēþ þini ha ġaizanar Baranxtvu xõ.
name•INAN show-INAN that PROX-M be.3.INAN.SG great-deity Baranxtu-ADPOS.DUAL in
As the name shows, he is the main deity in Baranxtu.

Āmur Ranhuf anaur rāŋhutu, Marxif anaur ā naŋaun anaur Ŋukśintvī ruxis.
away Ranhu•INAN-ADPOS deity<ADPOS> disease•INAN=GEN, Marxi•m deity<ADPOS> and spirit<ADPOS> deity<ADPOS> Kzin=GEN flow-M-ABSENT
He descends from Ranu, a deity of disease, the god [of fire] Marxi and deities of the Kzin*.

Hīrēputanar has Maña (õn Maŋa) anar īntva ā īnasīrtu, mantu, sanātu ā balīrtu, haþīrtu.
against-weight-deity be.3.ANIM.SG Maña•F (or Maŋa•F) deity woman<GEN.PL> and female=NMLZ=GEN, water=GEN, sex=GEN and fertile=NMLZ=GEN, clean=NMLZ=GEN
His counterpart is Maña (or Maŋa), goddess of women and feminity, water, sex and fertility, and cleanness**.

* The Kzin are the Aukkaŋtin-speaking people inhabiting much of modern-day Baranxtu prior to Ilatemian settlement, and an important contributor to linguistic and cultural development.
** Referring to spiritual cleanness as related to ritual ablutions prior to prayer, sacrifice, marriages, childbirth etc; Baranxi as the god of fire is also the deity of purification of polluted places via burning, especially during funerals.
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R.Rusanov wrote:My nigaa
/nìŋáà/ [nìŋâː]
Nate wrote:Μά, σίν χιτ μέτ. Ίμ ζά νόζ σά γα αλ κόιτ καρζί τυο νάκ... ;Δ;
also, that cruel most. now me to.wish me AOR to.have shoulder of boyfriend for to.cry
Also, that is so mean. I wish I had a boyfriend's shoulder to cry on now. ;_;
Kuas ali uje.
[g=JUSS]kua(s)[/g] [g=be.same.sex.friend]ali[/g] [g=GEN.2s.MASC]uwe[/g]
May you have a boyfriend.

Ce menia xaw ca hawa ya xel ahe mola lama yere.
[g=NEG.IMP]ce[/g] [g=be.forgotten]menia[/g] [g=NOM.C]xaw[/g] [g=be.not]ca[/g] [g=cry.noisily]hawa[/g] [g=and]xe(l)[/g] [g=][/g] [g=][/g] [g=][/g] [g=][/g] [g=][/g] [g=][/g]
Don't forget that men weep (silently) and women cry (aloud).
* Gloss to be finished later. Sleep setting in.

I used the masculine to describe you now. A real Ngolu would not do this. As none of us are initiated into Ngolu manhood, we'd all be animate. And ali means 'friend' when used with the dative case and 'boyfriend' when used with genitive.
Nortaneous wrote:
Imralu wrote:Malanuwo is the Ngolu equivalent of church for men. It means 'house of Uwo'. Uwo is the god of masculinity, death and destruction.
iskode taxelshri! drdzahe psixshiri!
fuck school! burn shit!
E wo buja!
[g=IMP]e(r)[/g] [g=deliberately.kill]wo(s)[/g] [g=be.boot]buja(r)[/g]
Crush, kill, destroy!
Theta wrote:Taŋúluu héniníime kte’íwenáa’i yaa? Kí’iŋaw hébisé’edáa kiw’úun!
How can the Ngolu speak about heathens? They are all heretics themselves!
Mas iju huwe xe du xu ma kuema?
[g=be.what]ma(s)[/g] [g=NOM.3p.DEF.ANIM.REL]iju[/g] [g=VRB-]h-[/g] [g=GEN.2s.MASC]uwe[/g] [g=and]xe[/g] [g=be.believed]du[/g] [g=NOM.3s.DEF.INAN.REL]xu[/g] [g=be.what]ma[/g] [g=be.incorrect]kuema[/g]
Who are your people and what falsehood do they believe?
Glossing Abbreviations: COMP = comparative, C = complementiser, ACS / ICS = accessible / inaccessible, GDV = gerundive, SPEC / NSPC = specific / non-specific
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MisterBernie wrote:Hīrēputanar has Maña
His counterpart is Maña.
È atzui etz d'idoni ont aidaró:
And here I present, people, a photo of her:

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