Help your conlang fluency (2)

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Thry wrote:Hit war ene verwysien at En Saen Yses an Vyres.
It was a A Song of Ice and Fire reference.
Nn... Kahve gindi dirdia, amdelia.
Oh yeah... If I'd drunk coffee I'd have got it.

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Veź Complít: Róm Dvó iś mýt meź c cetti popli poriś dicer.
/veʑ komˈpliːt roːm dvoː iɕ myːt meʑ kə ˈtɕetːi ˈpopli poˈriɕ diˈtɕer/
Total War: Rome II is much better than some people may say.

Dicer cid źá. Eź rasó c er patsat ven.
/diˈtɕer tɕid ʑaː||eʑ raˈsoː ker paˈtsat ven/
At least now. I think it was well patched.
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Nn... Kahve gindi dirdia, amdelia.
Oh yeah... If I'd drunk coffee I'd have got it.
Hals du hetten so naer faen de nast valle.
You'll get a lot more when the night falls.

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Rgaa.
Rawr.

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lol, qoltbe germandme zu bords tse qollux, "faen"?
lol, you have a word "faen" in a germanic language?
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nää džunnfin kukuch vklaivei sivei tåd.
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Is that against a new universal or something? It's still a temptative word, tho.

*whann > whan: > wha:n > ɸaen

As it's mostly unstressed, it could as well be ɸan or ɸen (or wan or wen)... still wip.

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Thry wrote:Is that against a new universal or something? It's still a temptative word, tho.

*whann > whan: > wha:n > ɸaen

As it's mostly unstressed, it could as well be ɸan or ɸen (or wan or wen)... still wip.
'*Faen' duiotsoeknan jasulnan taorgoun păxoan jat.
'*Faen' duitsůknan jasulnan targůn pëchån jat.
[ɸʷan duɥtʷʰsʷekʰnan jasulnan tʰaʁʷɡ̊ʷun pʰəxʷan jatʰ]
Faen is a bad word in one of the Germanic languages.

*might be written hoan or hån alternatively, but it's not a possible word according to Teskwan phonotactics, /h/ cannot be labialized unless it's in a cluster, then it becomes [ɸʷ] instead.

I'm thinking that I like the second orthography better than my original orthography. All those <o>s were getting annoying.
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Fanful Nulgetisale kaise lalatunpe.
It means devil (or like "fuck!") in Norwegian.

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finlay wrote:Fanful Nulgetisale kaise lalatunpe.
It means devil (or like "fuck!") in Norwegian.
Κήνι κωτετό ναζλανγάντε νε μη οκάτου.
weird.ADJ thing.A.PL.TOP natlang.D.PL in also happen.3P.PRS
Weird things happen in natlangs as well.

Ich bin dick..
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Nate wrote:Weird things happen in natlangs as well.

Ich bin dick..
Die war dick.
Glossing Abbreviations: COMP = comparative, C = complementiser, ACS / ICS = accessible / inaccessible, GDV = gerundive, SPEC / NSPC = specific / non-specific
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Bristel wrote:'*Faen' duiotsoeknan jasulnan taorgoun păxån jat.
'*Faen' duitsůknan jasulnan targůn pëchån jat.
[ɸʷan duɥtʷʰsʷekʰnan jasulnan tʰaʁʷɡ̊ʷun pʰəxʷan jatʰ]
Faen is a bad word in one of the Germanic languages.
duütsöknan? or are you not marking ɥ-rounding
Siöö jandeng raiglin zåbei tandiüłåd;
nää džunnfin kukuch vklaivei sivei tåd.
Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei.

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Nortaneous wrote:
Bristel wrote:'*Faen' duiotsoeknan jasulnan taorgoun păxån jat.
'*Faen' duitsůknan jasulnan targůn pëchån jat.
[ɸʷan duɥtʷʰsʷekʰnan jasulnan tʰaʁʷɡ̊ʷun pʰəxʷan jatʰ]
Faen is a bad word in one of the Germanic languages.
duütsöknan? or are you not marking ɥ-rounding
/j/ [ɥ] always confuses me, that might have just been overlooked.
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Δαλό νο μανγαβὶεστι δάχαμ ις νάκα μουζαλάτου.
who.TOP also trench-coat.ABL town.D 1S.GEN around NEG.sell.3S.PRS
No one sells trench coats around my town.

Κοσπλειαμό φε ει ίζι.
cosplay.DAT.TOP for 1S.ABL need.1S.PRS
I need one for a cosplay.

Ιό άντι.
1S.ABL be_annoyed.1S.PRS
I am annoyed.
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Κη βόλες ημπερσωνά;
Ci voles impersoná?
What do you want to dress like?

Ους σην ηγκαρρεγάλλα ον λαϊν.
Us sin inkarregalla on lain.
You can always order it online.

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Tentiŀlar èu mendre artevelh.
To calculate is to measure rightly.
Un llapis mai dibuixa sense una mà.

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Kangee Fictionpress yuku honnaida sugī ne chūbo te yōmunsu...bichveriji.
1S.POSS.SLANG Fictionpress be.amongst boy-love story TOP review LAT recieve-PST-3S...give.up.on-PST-1S
My boy's love story on Fictionpress got a review...I had given up on it.
Nūdhrēmnāva naraśva, dṛk śraṣrāsit nūdhrēmanīṣṣ iźdatīyyīm woḥīm madhēyyaṣṣi.
satisfaction-DEF.SG-LOC live.PERFECTIVE-1P.INCL but work-DEF.SG-PRIV satisfaction-DEF.PL.NOM weakeness-DEF.PL-DAT only lead-FUT-3P

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O? Te práet shcriton?
Oh? You like to write?

Aneri, fi regresos di un convensiún stimanfini-long d animé.
Yesterday, I got back from a weekend-long anime convention.

Covini unos fiscos gei caritos!
I met a cute gay guy!

Traeváos unpácos, con, póesi, snusnu sa in los moros. (lit. 'on the wall')
We hung out a bit, with perhaps sexytimes on the cards.

Ci ton, vini a scire c ava stedéin annus, ci ne serava deliátos con sáton unon fiscon máis véos.
And then, I found out he was seventeen, and wouldn't be confortable dating an older guy.

Este cáse ocuren.
These things happen.

Set, son cotentos ce ácem me víe atrativos!
But, glad that someone finds me attractive!
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ye, kirku ma muji. Bukken kir te zuji.
Yeah, I like to write. I'm trying to write a novel.
Nūdhrēmnāva naraśva, dṛk śraṣrāsit nūdhrēmanīṣṣ iźdatīyyīm woḥīm madhēyyaṣṣi.
satisfaction-DEF.SG-LOC live.PERFECTIVE-1P.INCL but work-DEF.SG-PRIV satisfaction-DEF.PL.NOM weakeness-DEF.PL-DAT only lead-FUT-3P

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Oss wass pratt dē?
What is it about?

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Néspekoʔ xúpčame ħevnanék. Muhe!
I'm writing in the Nespek language. Cool!

Yušé ʔéjnek. Zonárre hítsanek. :(
Now I will sleep. Tomorrow I will work.

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Dē Graut Bʉr wrote:Oss wass pratt dē?
What is it about?
Genminzarī cha hyūiyuku
reward-killing and great-turning
Assassination and revolution
Nūdhrēmnāva naraśva, dṛk śraṣrāsit nūdhrēmanīṣṣ iźdatīyyīm woḥīm madhēyyaṣṣi.
satisfaction-DEF.SG-LOC live.PERFECTIVE-1P.INCL but work-DEF.SG-PRIV satisfaction-DEF.PL.NOM weakeness-DEF.PL-DAT only lead-FUT-3P

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Thaha gratanthal gratar dindisith.
ESTAR-1SG:P write-VN-LOC book music-PRL
I am writing a book about music.

Sa gratar progressivrocoth.
SER-3SG:P book progressive.rock-PRL
It is a book about progressive rock.

Gratama am gratar ham Mannalendirinil.
write-1SG:A the book this-OBJ German-LOC
I am writing this book in German.
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ESTAR-3SG:P human-OBJ only human-OBJ true-OBJ REL-LOC play-3SG:A

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Jeţ charajeni belving rotvenç po kire fargja goreç sçeloþu. Po pyoržo vo ešto dereç…
OK, I decided to return to conlanging and work on Fargo again. And maybe finally learn it…
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Μει μίρου κάντει πόπρει δέσχου σα κονλάγγαν.
Mí mirú cantí poprí descú sa conlangan.
I wonder how many people learn their conlang.

Ή δεν δήρνου α σκράιβερ ύνον λίβρον.
É den dérnú a shcraiver unon livron.
I also want to write a book.

Μβόνει, ύνος φανφικ, μβασάτος εν σι Ταιπ Μουν υνιβέρσου.
Boní, unos fanfic, basatos en si Type Moon universú.
Well, a fanfic, based in the Type Moon universe.
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Yaufulti nannugui lalakinupuinanteya, susuinaitipalle nasatulnazikakupete.
I can write a bit of Yaufulti, but I usually have to check in the dictionary.

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