Help your conlang fluency (2)

[Travis B.]

ɕejɐllæ mentsʰeɾi-hɐ lɐxbinlæ
I like to plan my changes.

[Travis B.]

De-hə keže-zə došeyšundo-lo došeyyod-zə såxrəyə-zə yårdə-no ġáyə.
This is the first thing written in the new orthography.

[Travis B.]

Gitem lahimləla-lo sa zåká šalə k'ildo-no duz-lo huyen zə rowdo-hə ləxbinla.
I like how the ablaut has turned out better than in my previous languages.

[HazelFiver]

Bafesez kjen zam gu mran ksi kjen zax.
EXP-be-PRS-3s.PROX-ABS dog GEN.ALIEN=1s ESS big TERM4 dog GEN.ALIEN=2s
My dog is bigger than your dog.

Baswepesur welal fy žobal łis, tîz es tîz. O leik so ne sbîfunaz es depygor zvë tsor ev si, gkëłatus si.
EXP-extinguish-PST-IMPRS light-OBV in eye-PL-OBV GEN.INAL=3s.PROX, small on small. and time REL NEG believe-PST-1p.EXCL-ABS on be.able-become-INF-IMPRS more bad at 3s.PROX, EVID*-kill-PST-3s.PROX 3s.PROX
The light in her eyes went out, bit by bit. And when we thought she could go no further, she took her own life**.

*"unknown source".
**These are Ivanova's actual words. They're not what the Sparrowgrass says (it wouldn't be idiomatic), but I don't want to misquote her.

Fer gu tsor es mi, Dave. Fer es mi oven so ne depem los.
be-PRS-IMPRS ESS bad on 1s, Dave. be-PRS-IMPRS on 1s fear REL NEG be.able-PRS-1s DEM.DIST-PROX.
I'm sorry, Dave. I'm afraid I can't do that.

[jal]

A bit of the Hobbit:
Nes ten tu dwohf—no Torin, im mata pas dis an kip tok pon Gandaf—jom op, an ip op olda ting tol. A wok dem lef wok, no ste fi kari plet, balans towa ota plet, olda wan af bokl pon topsay, yus wan an, wen obit ya ron afta dem mos mos kwil ina feh: “bek yu les isi!” an “bek yu, no mayn! Mi ebl.” Oba dem dwohf soso sta sing:


JAL

[Travis B.]

Håbet-hə suždə-k'ə-zə k'istə-k'ə tš'umtəwə.
In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit.

[Travis B.]

Gəhsunmu ka-no səgawwəwo.
I need some quotes.

[kusuri]

ダヽ木家　ちぎひ　アちぎひん小
Chacchinka tilihi atilihinni.
Swift little birds come out of the forest.

大糸むい　無川圧ぱあれ
Rahumui ichunmipaar
Fly far off for no reason.

玉玉ヽ計計
Sisissunsun.
Bye-bye, bye-bye.



This lang has about 60 words and I'm probably never doing anything with it again. RIP.

[Travis B.]

Lekə došeytsewə-no rəhošri...
I could write poetry...

Lekə došeytsewə rowri-no šu wəgori.
I don't know how to write poetry.

[kusuri]

Susa pois caal poipi
<us>sa pois caal poipi
<ABL>DEF-LOC silence suddenly cry
From silence, the sudden cry

la vanivaatata, soipi
l-a vani-vaatata snore
HUM-NOM my.little-virgin.girl snore
of my baby girl, sleeping,

a sikkwaalpapa, tiloisci.
MOD <HESTMANE>quietly <NEGALL>lament
trying not to make any noise.

Allin crillaas uttun craasli.
<ill>a-n <ill>craas <ttu>u-n craasli
<GPST>IND-POL <~>fight <PRSFUT>Q-POL survive
Having fought, will she survive?

Apro prallaanl pilaipi.
pra-o pra-laanl <il>paipi
FIX-OBJ FIX-bottle <NEGALL>drop
I mustn't drop the medicine bottle.


I need more words.

[Travis B.]

Sa tolyim-zə xenlə dzatsexå-no låġġešri.
You should make more words.

[Travis B.]

Lahem duz-no duz-lo-zə došeyguh-tša hək'senayde ġáyen.
This language is tiring to write in.

[Travis B.]

Gåm-hə lakər-lo došeyguh-tša k'ålye-zə lakər såxrərid došeytseri-no gəwori.
I must first write in Proto-Laqar (lit. Ancient Laqar) in order to write in (Old) Laqar.

[HazelFiver]

Łmiwošemet var The Hobbit, o isbum si. Voifës gu swerelzak ul var Babylon 5. To šuisbem li, thav šalbraidem xyližot zvë gu li gus vasoz gkaž.
read-PFV-PRS-1s-NOM ART The Hobbit, and like-PST-1s 3s.PROX. EPIS-be-PRS2*-3s.PROX ESS depressing TERM2 ART Babylon 5. NEG2 EPIS-like-PRS-1s 3s.OBV, but SJV-need-PRS-1s look/see-DUR-INF-NOM more PTV 3s.OBV for know.facts-INF-ABS real.
I've read The Hobbit, and I liked it. (I think) it's less depressing than Babylon 5. I don't think I like [Babylon 5], but I would need to watch more of it to really know.

*"atemporal", used to refer to aspects of a work of fiction among other things. I don't think there's a real abbreviation for this.

Kaxyližošeret se li?
INT-look/see-DUR-PFV-PRS-IMPRS-NOM here 3s.OBV
Has anyone [else] here watched it?

Sedzusut fe Talia dtso fëln, thav valulut si. Hygus kat zas gu elz dtše. Leiklo valusut fe kjen fëln, o hygus fsu znôs gu łnyž wał.
[sɛdˈzusʊt fe ˈtʰaːlia ˌtsʼo ˈfœln | ˌθavːaˈlulʊt ˌsiː ‖ ˈhygʊs ˈkʰat z̥as g̊u ˈɛlz̥ ˈtʃʼeː ‖ ˈlɛɪklo vaˈlusʊt fe ˈcçʰɛn ˈfœln | o ˈhygʊs ˌfsu ˈznoːs g̊u ˈɬnʏʒ ˌwaɬ]
sit-PST-3s.PROX-NOM NOM Talia onto mushroom, but eat-PST-3s.OBV-NOM 3s.PROX. become-PST-3s.PROX cat GEN.ALIEN=3s.PROX ESS sad very. then eat-PST-3s.PROX-NOM NOM dog mushroom, and become-PST-3s.PROX all thing ESS good again.
Talia sat down on the mushroom, but it ate her. Her cat became very sad. Then the dog ate the mushroom, and everything was fine again.

[jal]

Has anyone [else] here watched it?

Babilon fay? Ye, wen taym it ja pon tv, pas tu-ten ye pas. Mi in tingk mi luk pon it optu finis.
Babylon five? Yes, when it was on tv, over twenty years ago. I don't think I watched it till the end.


JAL

[Boşkoventi]

Łmiwošemet var The Hobbit, o isbum si. Voifës gu swerelzak ul var Babylon 5. To šuisbem li, thav šalbraidem xyližot zvë gu li gus vasoz gkaž.
read-PFV-PRS-1s-NOM ART The Hobbit, and like-PST-1s 3s.PROX. EPIS-be-PRS2*-3s.PROX ESS depressing TERM2 ART Babylon 5. NEG2 EPIS-like-PRS-1s 3s.OBV, but SJV-need-PRS-1s look/see-DUR-INF-NOM more PTV 3s.OBV for know.facts-INF-ABS real.
I've read The Hobbit, and I liked it. (I think) it's less depressing than Babylon 5. I don't think I like [Babylon 5], but I would need to watch more of it to really know.

Babilon Fid uk min nittiosé! Ke ... mig un arohto. Soteu na min kos shofan ves. Koro anar ham teàvi na. Sagra na.
['papiron fíː uk min niccóseː || ke ... miŋ un aróːto || sóteu̯ ná min kos ʃófan vés || kór(w) ánar hã te.ávi na || sáɣra na]

Babilon Fid  uk  min   nik-tios-é!        Ke ...   mig un   aroh-to.     
Babylon five NEG COP2b sad-ADJV-ADJ2b.2!  Well ... can COP5 time-ly/wise.
Babylon 5 isn't sad/depressing! Well ... maybe sometimes.

Soteu (a)na min   kos   shof-an    ves.         Koro anar   ham  te-avi    (a)na.  Sag-ra   (a)na.
But   3P2b  COP2b still great-ADJ2 story/show.  2PS  should AUX2 watch-see 3P2b.   All-MOD2 3P2b.
But it's still a great show. You should watch it. All of it.

[din]

ダヽ木家　ちぎひ　アちぎひん小
Chacchinka tilihi atilihinni.
Swift little birds come out of the forest.

大糸むい　無川圧ぱあれ
Rahumui ichunmipaar
Fly far off for no reason.

玉玉ヽ計計
Sisissunsun.
Bye-bye, bye-bye.

This lang has about 60 words and I'm probably never doing anything with it again. RIP.

(in Tormiott):

Î cin nôm plêdaior! Iritt no antar saunigir.
/ɪj kin noʊm ˈpləːðɪjəɹ| ˈiɾɪt no ˈɛntaɹ ˈsoʊnɪʕɪɹ/
that there so waste<PERF>-3s! see-1s COMPL make.sound-3s be.pleasant-3s.
That's a shame! I think it sounds nice.

[Travis B.]

ダヽ木家　ちぎひ　アちぎひん小
Chacchinka tilihi atilihinni.
Swift little birds come out of the forest.

大糸むい　無川圧ぱあれ
Rahumui ichunmipaar
Fly far off for no reason.

玉玉ヽ計計
Sisissunsun.
Bye-bye, bye-bye.

This lang has about 60 words and I'm probably never doing anything with it again. RIP.

(in Tormiott):

Î cin nôm plêdaior! Iritt no antar saunigir.
/ɪj kin noʊm ˈpləːðɪjəɹ| ˈiɾɪt no ˈɛntaɹ ˈsoʊnɪʕɪɹ/
that there so waste<PERF>-3s! see-1s COMPL make.sound-3s be.pleasant-3s.
That's a shame! I think it sounds nice.

Ts'i-lo ts'aknəyo - de mey šåwə.
I agree - that does sound nice.

[Soap]

ぎ li

Banambo.
I like that.

[masako]

어야 나 기묘 녀 어타 노목
/ɛːja na kiːmʲo ɲe eːt͡ɬa noːmok/
eya na kimyo nye etla nomok
perhaps 1s be.weird because P.4s like-NEG
Maybe I'm weird, because I don't like it.

[Travis B.]

Lenni k'əpsandə süwbəwə-k'ə k'inwə.
There is a mosquito outside the window.

[Travis B.]

Tolsayə millə süwbə-k'ə zayowə.
I see more bugs outside.

[Travis B.]

Millə šå han nanri-k'ə k'inwə.
There are no bugs in here.

[Travis B.]

Tulyə-zə mul ts'aktsə ləxbowə.
I like polypersonal agreement.

[Travis B.]

Yår zikə mul šayə kuywə-pə naywə-nə?
Will anyone say anything?