Help your conlang fluency (2)

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gwakiqo.
partially
Partially.
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Wunman tywéwentì dywé tyà Ṇîwàn wá pù syi u twà. Gaten tywè wa gè tyi yágá nye kwû, wun hetì kyè mún nán gwûgwâ kè.
Wunmq chotwznchyp jot chap Zzyxwqnp wqt pvp xi wv tqp. Gatzn chop wq gzp chi yatgat jje kux, wun hzchyp kep mt nat guxgqx kzp.
I've made a new orthography for Zzyxwqnp. It looks more normal than the current one, but the analysis is a little weird.

(the name of the Zzxzzyx Empire would be Zêṇî, which is maybe a little boring)

edit: 운뫈퉤〮원티〯뒈〮탸〯니완〯와〮프〯싀으톼〯. 가턴퉤〯와거〯틔야〮가〮네쿠〯운허티〯케〯믄〮난〮구과커〯.
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nää džunnfin kukuch vklaivei sivei tåd.
Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei.

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Travis B. wrote:Wê ad'òp d'ìum ẽe b'iuhaei càe hí mà ciujôp càing sí?
INT sound same DAT word many REL INST LANG-cat mountain DIR
[wɛ̤ ʔɐɗɔ̀p ɗɨ̀m ʔɛ̰ɛ ɓɨˈhǣi cæ̀ hí mɑ̀ cɨˈɟɔ̤p cɑ̀iŋ sí]
Are many words homophones in mountain lion?
Grrm, Wowgrrr meow grroove. "Grrowrrr" grrr "grrr." Rrekin bat grrowl oogrry makrrab.
hm adult.male.mountain.lion NEG think grrowrrr CONJ grrr but one word many meaning
Hmm, I don't think so. "Grrowrrr" and "grrr." But each word has many meanings (i.e. there's a lot of ambiguity).

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Nortaneous wrote:Wunman tywéwentì dywé tyà Ṇîwàn wá pù syi u twà. Gaten tywè wa gè tyi yágá nye kwû, wun hetì kyè mún nán gwûgwâ kè.
Wunmq chotwznchyp jot chap Zzyxwqnp wqt pvp xi wv tqp. Gatzn chop wq gzp chi yatgat jje kux, wun hzchyp kep mt nat guxgqx kzp.
I've made a new orthography for Zzyxwqnp. It looks more normal than the current one, but the analysis is a little weird.

(the name of the Zzxzzyx Empire would be Zêṇî, which is maybe a little boring)

edit: 운뫈퉤〮원티〯뒈〮탸〯니완〯와〮프〯싀으톼〯. 가턴퉤〯와거〯틔야〮가〮네쿠〯운허티〯케〯믄〮난〮구과커〯.
Líu báeng kré biu'ihâp sí né mikáae wanĩ ngá jàm ũ nã gêe jén ék gõuk mikáae raa nyóu màe.
DIST.S CLASS seem COMP-sane DIR but symbol tone equal part POSS.3S REL.NOM CLASS love 1S topic symbol right POSS.2S EGO
[lɨ́ bǽŋ kɾɛ́ ˌbɨʔɪˈhɑ̤p sí nɛ́ mɪˈkǽæ wɐˈnḭ ŋɑ́ ɟæ̀m ʔṵ nɑ̰ gɛ̤ɛ ɟɛ́n ʔɛ́k go̰k mɪˈkǽæ ɾɑ̄ɑ ɲó mæ̀]
It looks more sane, but tone letters are part of what I love about your orthographies.
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Mi luk nof skweya leta, an fyu Koriyan leta-dem.
I see a lot of square characters, and some Korean characters.


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Ék cha jae mikáae kuriyou phâk mà aláa hí ẽe b'õuk d'í sí né jae mikáae kuriyou su i malẽik càe sí.
1S PAST.PFV see symbol Korea only INST AGT-do REL DAT human POSS.1S DIR but see symbol Korea few and box many DIR
[ʔɛ́k cʰɑ̄ ɟǣ mɪˈkǽæ ˌkuɾɪˈjō pʰɑ̤k mɑ̀ ʔɐlɑ́ɑ hí ʔɛ̰ɛ ɓo̰k ɗí sí nɛ́ ɟǣ mɪˈkǽæ ˌkuɾɪˈjō sū ʔī mɐˈlḛk cæ̀ sí]
I saw just Korean characters on my own machine but here see a few Korean characters and lots of boxes.
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Ék hâe màe lae ék glá mikáae raa pâe.
1S believe EGO COMP 1S like symbol right both
[ʔɛ́k hæ̤ mæ̀ lǣ ʔɛ́k glɑ́ mɪˈkǽæ ɾɑ̄ɑ pæ̤]
I think I like both orthographies.
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Á b'õuk ngàe ukhèe kho ngàe!
VOC person some post thing some
[ɑ́ ɓo̰k ŋæ̀ ʔʊˈkʰɛ̀ɛ kʰɔ̄ ŋæ̀]
Someone post something!
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Wowgrrr meow grroove kya grrowl aeiougrrr grrowrrr-grrowrrr xcrratching ke barre men.
adult.male.mountain.lion NEG know what say human cub-cub writing POSS about(?) LOC
I don't know what to say about Nort's new orthography.

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Qobraž qeqal qeinana qöknu, qås qöysip.
Seeing a bearded ghost, the cow might vomit.

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Hà díu kêu phâk jéo ⟨q⟩ ouk càe khù kâ.
2S PST.IPFV want only use ⟨q⟩ times many CLASS DED
[hɑ̀ dɨ́ kɘ̤ pʰɑ̤k ɟɜ́ kɑ̄ ʔōk cæ̀ kʰù kɑ̤]
You just wanted to use ⟨q⟩ a bunch of times.
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Jardan leqpin.
So it would seem.

Nu qökin mäk tlašrevit: bal šin "qöyspin", ňa "qöysip".
I just saw I made a mistake: it should be "qöyspin", not "qöysip".

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Ék ab'âi têeo karaa sahãp d'í màe.
1S simple go_back CAUS-right mistake POSS.1S EGO
[ʔɛ́k ʔɐˈɓɑ̤i tɜ̤ɜ kɐˈɾɑ̄ɑ sɐˈhɑ̰p ɗí mæ̀]
I just go back and correct my mistakes.
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Travis B. wrote:I just go back and correct my mistakes.
Yu a taym swabla?
Are you a time traveller?


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Qås da šin, bana Büöriqöyke "qeqfräči" čitamar.
Maybe he's what Bearlandic people call a "bearded woman". (i.e. a witch)

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Ék jéo miunyêen niróot ab'âi màe.
1S use PAT-push ACT-change simple EGO
[ʔɛ́k ɟɜ́ mɨˈɲɛ̤ɛn nɪˈɾɔ́ɔt ʔɐˈɓɑ̤i mæ̀]
I simply use the edit button.
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Travis B. wrote:I simply use the edit button.
Yu af majik tahn botm? Fi tahn yu pas rong rong? Dis a kul fo so! Yu mosa obya man!
You have a magic edit button? For editing your past mistakes? That's so cool! You must be a magic man!


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"Yu" kaun hai?
Yu who is
Who is "Yu"?

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ʔeˀir meˀüħ dü no. noˀur deˀaħeük. ne jtoˀa puˀpuˀ
[ʔḛil mø̰yħ || dy no || no̰ur dɛ̰æhøyk || ne ɕto̰a pṵpṵ]
time fake. NEG real. it EMPH four-corner. you PASS-educate stupid
time is fake. it isn't real. it's a cube. you are educated stupid
Siöö jandeng raiglin zåbei tandiüłåd;
nää džunnfin kukuch vklaivei sivei tåd.
Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei.

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Ubâ nô díu leeu màe júk lae ék cha thè ninẽot malẽik ubâ.
time much PST.IPFV exist EGO before COMP 1S PST.PFV hear ACT-refer box time.
[ʔʊˈbɑ̤ nɔ̤ dɨ́ lɘ̄ɘ mæ̀ ɟúk lǣ ʔɛ́k cʰɑ̄ tʰɛ̀ nɪˈnɜ̰t mɐˈlḛk ʔʊˈbɑ̤]
It's been a while since I've heard a Time Cube reference.
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Ga som mà niblẽ ũ Jin Raei.
PROX.S CLASS INST ACT-remember POSS.3S Gene Ray
[gɑ̄ sɔ̄m mɑ̀ nɪˈblɛ̰ ʔṵ ɟīn ɾǣi]
This is in memory of Gene Ray.
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Vijay wrote:Who is "Yu"?
Min in se bo wo yu tok.
I don't know what you're talking about.


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Nu wés cailai ni parhunduntai flódímis.
PART 1Pl-NOM all-M.PL.NOM NEG understand-PRTC.PRES.ACT.M.PL.NOM talk-PRES.ACT.1PL
We all talk without understanding.

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Mi cende ray.
I understand fine.


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jal wrote:
Vijay wrote:Who is "Yu"?
Min in se bo wo yu tok.
I don't know what you're talking about.


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jal wrote:Yu must be a magic man!


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Yeh! :P
This! ;)

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