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Some rough draft floor plans for typical Terpish rowhouses, one with about 2000 square feet and the other more compact. The thing in the right and center of each floor is a ladder and the space around it something of a landing or hallway. Apart from the doors outside, the house uses sliding doors to save space, though I didn't bother to draw them yet. I tried to make the harmonious in their arrangement and follow something of a subtle grid. Space constraints required me to stretch and squish some rooms, though. All lengths are approximate, of course, since the Terps obviously don't use customary units or build all houses precisely the same size.

Undoubtedly I will have to revise some things. I think it may follow Western models too closely for realism. At the same time, though, I couldn't actually find many floor plans of real terraced houses (all my searches turned up real estate websites trying to sell me a house). So I don't know what the interior of one would typically look like. I based this arrangement on ensuring the bedrooms had windows and at least 150 square feet and making sure rooms weren't unwittingly walled off from the hallway.

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What do you mean by WC here? Do you mean to say a room which contains a toilet and which is seperated from the bathroom by a small door? Why then are your WC's so big? I also think your landings are based on the size of a stairwell landing. I'd argue they are too big and waste space. You could easily open the ladder to a small hallway.
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What do you mean by WC here? Do you mean to say a room which contains a toilet and which is seperated from the bathroom by a small door? Why then are your WC's so big?
More or less. I imagined that the Terps used separate rooms for the bath and toilet, because they considered the former for getting clean and the latter dirty. I made them big because I wasn't sure what else to do with the space.
I also think your landings are based on the size of a stairwell landing. I'd argue they are too big and waste space. You could easily open the ladder to a small hallway.
Hmm, ok. Again, I wasn't sure what to do with the space and didn't want to make the area too small since you couldn't climb out of the ladder section.
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Also, I don't know about Terps but it seems climbing a ladder up three floors would be highly annoying and inefficient. A spiral or squared-off staircase would take up the same amount of space and be far more efficient. Just look at servant's stairs in Victorian homes. They were built to eat up as little space as possible.
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Also, I don't know about Terps but it seems climbing a ladder up three floors would be highly annoying and inefficient. A spiral or squared-off staircase would take up the same amount of space and be far more efficient. Just look at servant's stairs in Victorian homes. They were built to eat up as little space as possible.
Make sense, though I kind of figured that going around in circles would be just as annoying. Although it would allow you to carry something while moving between floors which the ladder makes more difficult.

I am also wondering about how to improve the hallways on the second and third floors, their space usage anyway. It seems rather unnerving somehow to enter a large closed-off space with no windows and nothing but doors. I try picturing it and it just feels eery. It also seems like quite a waste of space for something that really only needs three or four feet across. Most of the space in the hallways wouldn't really fit into other rooms, though, without making them unnecessarily large. They seem too much like dead space to me overall.

It'd be interesting and enlightening to see some floor plans of non-Western houses. I wonder, for instance, what those Malaysian shophouses have on the inside, particularly as they resemble my vision for some Terpish housing. Though given the difficulty I've had in finding relevant ones for Western houses, I don't have high hopes.
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Eddy wrote:I am also wondering about how to improve the hallways on the second and third floors, their space usage anyway. It seems rather unnerving somehow to enter a large closed-off space with no windows and nothing but doors. I try picturing it and it just feels eery.
Loads of houses in the UK have this, especially terraced houses. My old house did, on two floors, and it wasn't eery at all.

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Of course, it has also occurred to me that these floor plans resemble Western models rather closely. To some extent that seems hard to avoid, since it doesn't make sense to put the kitchen and living room on the top floor for example. Convergent evolution leads to similar solutions. after all. I do wonder, though, what other arrangements could exist. It would hardly do for me to limit the possibilities of my conworld unduly.

And by the way, a revised version of the smaller terraced house, with stairs instead of a ladder and some rooms resized:

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(In American): My Canadian uncle's house has a garage and another massive room on the first floor, which is used as a messy room for the kids, and the second floor is where all the rooms except the bedrooms are. The front door is also on the second floor.

You could have messy day-to-day stuff happen all on the first floor, and reserve the third floor for family bedrooms, leaving the second floor as a tidy and clean place to receive guests or something. Or you could mix up the messy, guest-receiving, and bedroom-floors in any order.

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Floor plan for a Terpish communal house, an idea I was considering for an alternative to separate houses that could emerge in Terpish society. Each wing or floor would house one family or whatever other household unit that individuals felt appropriate. All inhabitants of the building, though, would share baths, the kitchen, and a living room or lounge. There could also be a garden or something along those lines in the back. Wikipedia describes something similar in contemporary society.

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Can you create a good enough American visa and mail it my way? :D
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vampireshark wrote:More Telèmor stuff: this time, a revised, smaller residence permit.
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My initial guess would be "gender".

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bulbaquil wrote:
vampireshark wrote:More Telèmor stuff: this time, a revised, smaller residence permit.
What does the "BIOLOGU" mean?
Biologu means "sex" (as in the anatomical sex). Generally, the two for this category are "BAR", short for barbațe (male), and "DAM", short for damina (female). Whimemsz is correct.
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I tried translating Victor Hugo's "Clair de Lune" into English — this was the result:

The moon was calm and play'd upon the tides
The window, free at last, op'd to the breeze
The sultana gaz'd 'cross the breaking seas
Where waves embroider'd th' islets' silver sides.

Her lively fingers play'd upon the lute
But then she heard queer distant, dull echoes.
Was it a Turkish vessel sail'd from Cos?
'Gainst Greek isles with oars of Tartars brute?

Are these the birds who plunge, hour after hour
Who strike the waves, who roll pearls 'cross their wings?
Is there a djinn who whistles—whilst he flings—
Through rustling reeds—the crenels of the tow'r?

What troubles so the seas near the serail?
Not cormorants, 'pon the waves as they roll,
Not timbers' creak, neither the heavy toll
Of the vessel whose dull oars draw it nigh.

These are the sacks whence flow the tears she hides!
She glimps'd, sounding the sea whence vessels go
Amidst their flanks, one like a man—but no!
The moon was calm and played upon the tides!

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The original metre and rhyme scheme were rather difficult to retain, I must admit, and I think it may have suffered for it. I also probably got some of the vocabulary wrong. The original (French) may be found here. I tried referencing some other translations to check, but I could not find a good one for comparison.
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Finished the Mebharan weights and measures and currency pages.
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Just started working on this:

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TomHChappell wrote:
Skomakar'n wrote:Just started working on this:

http://i375.photobucket.com/albums/oo19 ... melxcf.png
So, who's behind the shade, and why is it in such bad shape? Did their air-conditioner window-unit bust it before they had to get rid of it? Is their landlord too cheap to fix anything?
And why aren't there any lights on in any of the other apartments in that building?
I can't even see any other windows.
You make up the story! I'm sure we'll see some interesting plot twists as I come closer to the final image.
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Slowly turning this into a game...

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Wow, I adore your line work! :)
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Viktor77 wrote:Wow, I adore your line work! :)
Thanks! Yeah. I think I've finally found my pixel style.

Here's the bottle and the crate without the antialias that they get since they're rotated in the game screenshot:

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