Help your conlang fluency (2)

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Cresyo que dixim ia que fast los deyos morent!
/'kɾe.ʃjo kə di.'ʃim ʝa kə fast ləs 'de.jəs 'mɔ.ɾen(t)/
I think we established already that even gods die!

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Kan kaki kazali ki maja kaitsiet-eren dage. Nurakith ker ki magnos kazalkirei desruktoge, ar on ka nurakith kaki ki kazali zalion hurgage. Falu tar varoi virui ke ka dorfusneg ki maja kilenion endosge.
[kan ˈka.ki ˈka.zal.i ki ˈma.d͡ʒa ˈkait͡s.jɛt ˈɛːɹɾɛn ˈda.ge ‖ ˈnuːɹɾ.a.kiθ kɛːɹɾ ki ˈmag.nos ka.zalˈkiɹɾ.ɛ.i des.ɹɾukˈto.ge | aːɹɾ on ka ˈnuːɹɾ.a.kiθ ˈka.ki ki ˈka.zal.i ˈzal.i.on ˈhuɹɢ.a.ge ‖ ˈfal.u taːɹɾ ˈvaːɹɾ.o.i ˈviɹɾ.u.i ke ka ˈdoːɹɾ.fus.nɛg ki ˈma.d͡ʒa kil.ɛnˈi.on ˈɛn.dos.ge]
for 3P.NEUTER.POSSESSIVE-DETERMINER.PLURAL god.PLURAL the maja war hold.PAST all of the great god-house.PLURAL destroy.PAST and around 3P.NEUTER.SINGULAR all 3P.NEUTER.POSSESSIVE-DETERMINER.PLURAL the god.PLURAL kill.IMPERFECTIVE speak.PAST however on this.PLURAL viru.PLURAL now 3P.NEUTER.SINGULAR idiot.CONCEPT the maja know.IMPERFECTIVE be.PAST
The maja made war about their gods. All of the great temples were destroyed, and with them it was said that the gods killed eachother. But nowadays the maja know that was all stupidity.
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Adúljôžal ônal kol ví éža únah kex yaxlr gmlĥ hôga jô ônal kru ansu frú.
Ansu frú ônal savel zaš gmlĥ a vek Adúljôžal vé jaga čaþ kex.
Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh.

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The maja made war about their gods. All of the great temples were destroyed, and with them it was said that the gods killed eachother. But nowadays the maja know that was all stupidity.
1. Tam samyah! Madjás tasyány așvŗbhyáś caigyaiś cájiņaranta, sádhá ńayante kam?
[təɴ səɴ.jəɦ mə.ʤas təs.jan.jəʂ.ʋɻ.bʰ.jaʃ cɑɪ.ɡjɑɪʃ ca.ɟɪ.ɳə.rən.tɐ sadʰ.a ɲə.jən.te kəm?]
2. Tasyáni șańjánir utam bavam átevau vairya jhayantiś cayo 'șvar!
[təs.ja.nɪ ʂəɲ.ɟa.nɪ.rʊ.təm bə.ʋəm a.tɛ.ʋaʊ ʋɑɪ.rjə ɟʰə.jən.tiʃ cə.joʂ.ʋər]
3. Ca ya bavam bavám ḑarati vina ușțharvau ryavajayedhyá lavatíva.
[cə jʌ bə.ʋəm bə.ʋaɴ ɖə.r.tɪ ʋɪ.na ʊʂ.ʈʰər.ʋaʊ rjə.ʋə.ɟedʰ.ja.lə.ʋə.ti.və]

1.That.nom(n) absolute.sbj(m)! Maja.nom(m.pl) 3sg.gen god.dat(r.pl) temple.dat(f.pl) and-non-pres.fight.3pl(past), that.abl(n) non-pres.delude.3sg(past) question?
2. 3sg.nom, it.sbj craziness pst.be.3sg :> now know-3pl :> thank-god.
3. And yes, craziness.nom(n) craziness.acc(n) expand.3sg but good-way.sbj(m) past-errors.abl(n.pl) go.3sg-certainly.

1. That is epic! The Maja warred over their gods and temples, then deluded themselves?
2. Thank god the descendants now know it was stupidity indeed.
3. And yes, stupidity does breed stupidity but goodness definitely comes from the errors of the past.
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Talāṃ leya kalakena rāmah, saktalām peha leya bhūmena ca.
See a world in a grain of sand, and a heaven in a wild flower.
Omkāṃs tava sutvantayam pharo, 'naiṃ le' jeś ca.
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand, and eternity in an hour.

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N'erant que deyos sanganhelants e voleyant sacrifiçes humans.
They were bloodthirsty gods and they wanted human sacrifices.

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abaddamn wrote:That is epic! The Maja warred over their gods and temples, then deluded themselves?
Thank god the descendants now know it was stupidity indeed.
Yolna kos kazali nil endosge. Kan nil kemu nurakith kaki kai kaitsoge. Zu kilo kazalhavlok kai nil dage.
[ˈjol.na kos ˈkaz.al.i nil ˈɛn.dos.ge ‖ kan nil ˈkɛ.mu ˈnuːɹɾ.a.kiθ ˈka.ki kai ˈkait͡s.o.ge ‖ zu ˈkil.o kaz.alˈhav.lok kai nil ˈda.ge]
there some god.PLURAL not be.PAST | for not thing all 3P.NEUTER.POSSESSIVE-DETERMINER.PLURAL 3P.NEUTER.PLURAL fight.PAST | from with religion 3P.NEUTER.PLURAL not hold.PAST
There never were any gods. They fought eachother for nothing. They haven't touched religion since.

Falu.. On ki selzanado ker kos kemu scon kar kazalhavlok ker ki maja zu ki jokirion ker Hale, th1 Monar ker Akson ra kanta karen. Cal-eren magnos kinos ker kaki deruznukitozil vo endos.
[ˈfal.u ‖ on ki sel.zanˈa.do kɛːɹɾ kos ˈkɛ.mu ʃon kaːɹɾ kaz.alˈhav.lok kɛːɹɾ ki ˈma.d͡ʒa zu ki d͡ʒo.kiɹɾˈi.on kɛːɹɾ ˈhal.e | ˈθa.vas ˈmon.aːɹɾ kɛːɹɾ ˈak.son ɹɾa ˈkan.ta ˈkaːɹɾ.ɛn ‖ t͡ʃal ˈɛːɹ.ɛn ˈmag.nos ˈkin.os kɛːɹɾ ˈka.ki dɛːɹɾ.uzˈnuk.i.toz.il vo ɛn.dos]
however | around the possible.NOUN of some thing close at religion of the maja from the wonder.GERUND of Hale CARDINAL.one ruler of Axon 1P.SINGULAR OPTATIVE float | most great hero of 3P.NEUTER.POSSESSIVE-DETERMINER.PLURAL culture 3P.MASCULINE.SINGULAR be
Though.. I suppose that there is the possibility of there being something close to religion for the maja in the veneration of Hale, 1st Emperor of Axon. He is their greatest culture hero.
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Adúljôžal ônal kol ví éža únah kex yaxlr gmlĥ hôga jô ônal kru ansu frú.
Ansu frú ônal savel zaš gmlĥ a vek Adúljôžal vé jaga čaþ kex.
Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh.

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Tmeenntaa dkiach gchoaskaom bgaiy tek gdaa tonnoh ler hwai tek sianggyort teuopyjaot jart dua jung sgaon.
recently daughter bathe IMPERF and hear footstep belong 1 and believe thief come PERF become be.frightened
Recently, when my daughter was in the bath, she heard my footsteps and thought it was a robber, and got scared.

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Ке вониес ями! Ак мунте ю нухелэн сто индидян. Дема, логе Тексаси ми, ал ем самям грос мунтива...
Kye voniyes yami! Ak muntye yu nuchyelen sto indidyan. Dyema, logye Teksasi mi, al yem samyam gros muntivu...
Standard pronunciation: [kʲe vonijɛs jami. ak muntʲɛ ju nʊxʲelɛn stɔ ɪndidʲan. dʲema logʲɛ tɛksasɪ mi al jem samʲam gros mʊntiva]
Sotoish pronunciation: [keː voniːe aːmi. ak muntʃeː uː nuheːlen sto indiːdaːn. zeːma goleː teksasi mi al eːm samaːm gro muntiva]
3-S-INT-PRON better-INT now! ARTICLE-INDEF-S-M jacket-ACC in hold-1-S-FUT-SUB REL hope-1-S-PRE-IND. alas, place-INT-DEM Texas-INT be-3-S-PRE-IND, so the-S-F cold-ERG long last-3-S-FUT--IND-NEG...

Finally! It's getting colder! I hope I can wear a jacket soon. Though, this being Texas, the cold won't last long...
I am nerd, hear me /ɹoʊɹ/!

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There never were any gods. They fought eachother for nothing. They haven't touched religion since.
Tam bujhyo 'tíva. Cevah súbaro bhupáro bhavam aiśváram ati.
That certainly is understandable. Religion always is an extremely touchy subject matter.
Finally! It's getting colder! I hope I can wear a jacket soon. Though, this being Texas, the cold won't last long...
O kasá! Aryam texastalavid ajhayam senáti kana..,
Oh nice! The cold in Texas seems unheard of though...
Talāṃ leya kalakena rāmah, saktalām peha leya bhūmena ca.
See a world in a grain of sand, and a heaven in a wild flower.
Omkāṃs tava sutvantayam pharo, 'naiṃ le' jeś ca.
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand, and eternity in an hour.

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Horte trah bgaiy keuu beym ing geut. Pteuong logeuu ayt?
Horta kill IMPERF person be.many be.very.much EMPH | be.next who Q
The Horta is killing so many people! Who will be next!

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Κι ης λ'Όρτα η κως ράβε;
/ki is loɾ.ta i kos ɾa.ve/
[ci is 'loɾ.ta i kos 'ɾa.ve]
Who is the Horta and who is he killing?

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clawgrip wrote:Image
Horte trah bgaiy keuu beym ing geut. Pteuong logeuu ayt?
Horta kill IMPERF person be.many be.very.much EMPH | be.next who Q
The Horta is killing so many people! Who will be next!
Ingóón dibizé nimizi go'obéén Star Trek-é (Lakang'estelangíí) llaagó?
Are you talking about the creature from Star Trek?
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Yo te pongo en tu lugar...
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Bristel wrote:
clawgrip wrote:Image
Horte trah bgaiy keuu beym ing geut. Pteuong logeuu ayt?
Horta kill IMPERF person be.many be.very.much EMPH | be.next who Q
The Horta is killing so many people! Who will be next!
Ingóón dibizé nimizi go'obéén Star Trek-é (Lakang'estelangíí) llaagó?
Are you talking about the creature from Star Trek?
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Jaa aa.
degree be
That's correct.

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Ivalguq tüpar mätruuna evtocöno, qäw qunukrino - wänukrino.
['ivɑlgux 'typɑr mæ'truːnɑ 'evtoxøno 'xæv 'xunukrino 'vænukrino]
PREP.in-here almost always ADJ.heat but when ADJ.cold very ADJ.cold
It's almost always hot here, but when it is cold - it's very cold.
Overwhelming hopelessness in the eyes of burned faces.

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Bömöbe ponij sixhu phasa.
INDEF-weather-PRES pleasant here today
The weather is nice here today.

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Magun tèpayèn.
I'm staying inside.

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Ef i noth iwin.
Here the night has already come.

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客此已經變日。
kaehts igin pian niet
It's day now.
axhiuk.

看蝦米

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Hui be cher, sidh nunc Lun 'wen med nuif.
Today is like yesterday, but now the moon comes with clouds.

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Üçómeu fót töl öüm.
[yˌtɬoːmɛu ɸoːʔˈtœlœym]
üçóma-eu fót töl öüm
last_night-LOC wind strong COP.PST

Last night was very windy.

EDIT: fail at tense
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疏我啲英文同語言學一樣咁屎!
[sɔː˥ ŋɔː˩˧ tiː˥ jɪŋ˥mɐn˧˥ tʰʊŋ˩ jyː˩˧jiːn˩hɔk̚˨ jɐt̚˥jœːŋ˧ kɐm˧ siː˧˥]
sor(ry) 1.SG POSS English and linguistics same DEM.ADJ shit

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Chik aajung aon tualiam goy leut. Ork keun pchooh naul dat gjeh pat.
topic be repeat weather EMPH EMPH | here TPC daytime be.cool be.somewhat night be.cold
So the topic is weather again, is it? Here, the daytime is somewhat cool and the night is cold.
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Ōrod kērir wandyāk, lō' na-ngē'ar sīanir mryandyāk ēlei.
I've started over on Vanga, so I have to write in Kozea now.
/ˈɔːrɔd ˈt͡ʃɛːrɪr ˈwand͡ʒaːq lɔː naˈŋjaːr ˈʃaːnɪr ˈmrjand͡ʒaːq ˈɛːlɛɪ̯/

Doing it in classical as well, just for the sake of it:

Ōrod kērir wandyāk, lōgo na-ngēhar sīanir mryandyāk ēlei.
/ˈoːrɔd ˈkʲɛːrɪr ˈwandjaːq ˈloːɣɔ naˈŋɛːhar ˈsʲiː.anɪr ˈmrjandjaːq ˈɛːlɛ.ɪ/
Online dictionary for my conlang Vanga: http://royalrailway.com/tungumaalMiin/Vanga/

#undef FEMALE

I'd love for you to try my game out! Here's the forum thread about it:
http://zbb.spinnwebe.com/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=36688

Of an Ernst'ian one.

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ma na ke henam te kala mulamye
I have also started to redo parts of Kala.

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Sko, quant mudas i a cos? A vaia la proto-lenga?
Skomakar'n, how much are you changing and why? So that the proto-language works?

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Ean wrote:Sko, quant mudas i a cos? A vaia la proto-lenga?
Skomakar'n, how much are you changing and why? So that the proto-language works?
Mīza. Kōzeām ermāi toremrēármyi. Koldod me-mreōzêrizair nôizîmāk wandyā.
No. There is/was no problem with the proto-language. I just wasn't entirely pleased with the sound of Vanga.
/ˈmiːza/ – /ˈkɔːʒaːm ˈɛrmaɪ̯ tɔrɛˈmrjarmjɪ/ – /ˈkɔldɔd mɛˌmrjɔːzˈɛrɪzaɪ̯r ˈnɔɪ̯zˈiːmaːq ˈwand͡ʒaː/
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Online dictionary for my conlang Vanga: http://royalrailway.com/tungumaalMiin/Vanga/

#undef FEMALE

I'd love for you to try my game out! Here's the forum thread about it:
http://zbb.spinnwebe.com/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=36688

Of an Ernst'ian one.

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Ah, vesyo.
Oh, I see.

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