Help your conlang fluency (2)

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Nate wrote:Νωιύρομανυ κων λιτερι Χελενικι ετ μορτι σιπρεκκυ, ασετ κοίτω κο χο απεττυ ετ βωνιμ.
Nòiúromanu còn literi Helenici et morti sipreccu, aset koítò ko ho apettu et bònim.
ノユロミヌ コン リテリ ヘレニキ エト モルティ シプレック、アセト コーイト コ ホ アペットゥ エト ボニム。
Newroman with Greek letters is really simple, but I think it looks cool.

And in katakana, it's just ridiculous.
Suka, naikatakanatakenta yalfannaite. Yingetisa lisifipapenaiyu latatazufupete. Yi patakenta gusanau lusepa. Naikilaganatakenta lafannaite. Yi naikanzitakenta (naitinatakentaful suntukakute?) lekeusufannaite.
すか、ないカタカナ字やる好ないて。インゲ語り痛ぺないゆら続見ぺて。いぱ字姿同ろせぱ。ないきらがな字ら好ないて。いないかんじ字(ない漢字字、ないチナ字話すん言筈て?)れ嫌好ないて。
I don't like katakana anyway. I constantly see it ruining English. And all the characters look the same. I like hiragana. And I have a love-hate relationship with kanji (or should I say "chinese characters" in yaufulti?).

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Ναι! Ναι! Αν! Αν ραιάσης λ'ασπίριτο!
Ως ποτήσης υζά λας λήρτας γρέκας α κοπιήσης τοίας πάρβας ρήλας η διφθώνγους λυς γρέκο.
Αυ Ζευς άβους φλαγελά.

nai! nai! an! an raiásis l'aspírito!
os potísis yzá las lírtas grékas a kopiísis toías párbas rílas i diphthóngoys lys gréko.
ay Zeus áboys phlagelá.


No! No! Don't! Don't destroy the spirit!
You may only use Greek letters if you copy all the dumb rules and diphthongs of Greek!
Or Zeus will smite you.
Nate wrote:Εσι, ετ ωνυ πεννανυ σαθι ωμμυ, ασετ με αμαθωρ χο απεττο. ^^]
Yeah, it's a pretty obvious idea, but I like the way it looks. ^^;

Πρυ οθ μινυ, πρανω ατ φακω ωνο φαττυκριττο κο ενι δι Κανανίο. Ιλα λιννία, Νωιύρομανυ, ετ ισερε δικιθυ ιν ωνο μωδο αρτο ινκο χι Κανανί ινκήι χο Βερυκαναρομασεκυδο, σετυ Ρομα σωπρευάθ.
I kind of plan to make a conscript based on Phoenician. This language, Newroman (name pending), is supposed to be spoken in an alternate universe where the Carthiginians won the Second Punic War, but Rome survived.

(so far, longest text in this language. might have made a mistake)
Κρήδω εγάλη.
krído egáli
I think the same.

Ις σόνα βην! Βοίλω βηδήλλο.
is sóna bin! boílo bidíllo
That sounds nice! I wanna see it.

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Ρι μιγγ ταἁνυᾶγγ σα Ἀιερι τελβᾶνιε Ἑλας ναιναι.
Ρι μιγ̇ ταχανυᾶγ̇ σα Αιερι τελβᾶνιε Χελας ναιναι.
Ri ming tahanvāng sa Ayeri telbānye Helas naynay.
INSTT can write-2SG.A P=Ayeri sign-PL.T Greek as.well.
You can write Ayeri with Greek letters as well.

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finlay wrote:
Nate wrote:Νωιύρομανυ κων λιτερι Χελενικι ετ μορτι σιπρεκκυ, ασετ κοίτω κο χο απεττυ ετ βωνιμ.
Nòiúromanu còn literi Helenici et morti sipreccu, aset koítò ko ho apettu et bònim.
ノユロミヌ コン リテリ ヘレニキ エト モルティ シプレック、アセト コーイト コ ホ アペットゥ エト ボニム。
Newroman with Greek letters is really simple, but I think it looks cool.

And in katakana, it's just ridiculous.
Suka, naikatakanatakenta yalfannaite. Yingetisa lisifipapenaiyu latatazufupete. Yi patakenta gusanau lusepa. Naikilaganatakenta lafannaite. Yi naikanzitakenta (naitinatakentaful suntukakute?) lekeusufannaite.
すか、ないカタカナ字やる好ないて。インゲ語り痛ぺないゆら続見ぺて。いぱ字姿同ろせぱ。ないきらがな字ら好ないて。いないかんじ字(ない漢字字、ないチナ字話すん言筈て?)れ嫌好ないて。
I don't like katakana anyway. I constantly see it ruining English. And all the characters look the same. I like hiragana. And I have a love-hate relationship with kanji (or should I say "chinese characters" in yaufulti?).
Σο κυροσυ δα φατταλιννιά, Φινλαιύ. Ετ-νι ρειάθα ατ Ιαπανικυ, οθ σιπρεκκαμενε φακιθ χο αρφαβεθο λίο;
I'm curious about your conlang, Finlay. Is it related to Japanese, or does it simple use its writing system?
Κρήδω εγάλη.
krído egáli
I think the same.

Ις σόνα βην! Βοίλω βηδήλλο.
is sóna bin! boílo bidíllo
That sounds nice! I wanna see it.
Νε σο χο οττιμυ ατ φακινυ φαττυκριττι, ασετ ολω ατ τενδα, ατ μινο.
I'm not the best at making conscripts, but I want to try, at least.
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Oμ αλαχιρτελ oλ αλαχιθ
I don't speak Alahithian.
It was about time I changed this.

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P'ăh çem Lusitanik ăn kăk'ur ăk'ar tătîp mă awar qa p'ăh nung ăn k'ar tătîp. K'ar xahî ăqimsang xî ălusitanik'a wik har.
1s REFL to-be-lusitanic REL people 3s.speech PROG.work SENT PERF.cease because 1s to-be-new REL language PROG.work. Language TOP.this 3s.word-order 4s 3s.to-be-lusitanic.speech-of a-lot be-different.

I have stopped working on the language of the Lusitanic people, because I am working on a new language. As for this language, its word order is very different from that of Lusitanic.

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Nate wrote:
finlay wrote:
Nate wrote:Νωιύρομανυ κων λιτερι Χελενικι ετ μορτι σιπρεκκυ, ασετ κοίτω κο χο απεττυ ετ βωνιμ.
Nòiúromanu còn literi Helenici et morti sipreccu, aset koítò ko ho apettu et bònim.
ノユロミヌ コン リテリ ヘレニキ エト モルティ シプレック、アセト コーイト コ ホ アペットゥ エト ボニム。
Newroman with Greek letters is really simple, but I think it looks cool.

And in katakana, it's just ridiculous.
Suka, naikatakanatakenta yalfannaite. Yingetisa lisifipapenaiyu latatazufupete. Yi patakenta gusanau lusepa. Naikilaganatakenta lafannaite. Yi naikanzitakenta (naitinatakentaful suntukakute?) lekeusufannaite.
すか、ないカタカナ字やる好ないて。インゲ語り痛ぺないゆら続見ぺて。いぱ字姿同ろせぱ。ないきらがな字ら好ないて。いないかんじ字(ない漢字字、ないチナ字話すん言筈て?)れ嫌好ないて。
I don't like katakana anyway. I constantly see it ruining English. And all the characters look the same. I like hiragana. And I have a love-hate relationship with kanji (or should I say "chinese characters" in yaufulti?).
Σο κυροσυ δα φατταλιννιά, Φινλαιύ. Ετ-νι ρειάθα ατ Ιαπανικυ, οθ σιπρεκκαμενε φακιθ χο αρφαβεθο λίο;
I'm curious about your conlang, Finlay. Is it related to Japanese, or does it simple use its writing system?
Yalusepe. (...)
It's not. I was just trying it for my own amusement, partly because I realised that it was a fairly good fit and that Japanese has almost enough symbols to accommodate it (with the exception of i vs. yi - although i is only used for diphthongs and doesn't occur in its own right, you can get a distinction between nei and neyi, for example).

If I wrote a gloss it would be fairly obvious that although the rough syntax is similar to Japanese, the nominal morphology especially is very different, as Yaufulti has determiners and polypersonal agreement.

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na kaua itsa
I love coffee.

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FearfulJesuit wrote:P'ăh çem Lusitanik ăn kăk'ur ăk'ar tătîp mă awar qa p'ăh nung ăn k'ar tătîp. K'ar xahî ăqimsang xî ălusitanik'a wik har.
1s REFL to-be-lusitanic REL people 3s.speech PROG.work SENT PERF.cease because 1s to-be-new REL language PROG.work. Language TOP.this 3s.word-order 4s 3s.to-be-lusitanic.speech-of a-lot be-different.

I have stopped working on the language of the Lusitanic people, because I am working on a new language. As for this language, its word order is very different from that of Lusitanic.
Fazafalsuinainakeyu ku falusefa?
What's the new word order?

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masako wrote:na kaua itsa
I love coffee.
Kuahi imaatahimu tta.
kuahi i-maatahi-mu tta
coffee 3s.INAN-loved.platonically-1s.MASC also
"I love coffee too.
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Aim ont perís na dalmons nuus.
I have a pair of new underpants.
Un llapis mai dibuixa sense una mà.

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Izambri wrote:Aim ont perís na dalmons nuus.
I have a pair of new underpants.
Èh, saloit per aver compartaitlo. Que san-el el tò bragetat noav stampat de caràterei cartunei?
Uh, thank you for sharing that. Do your new underpants have cartoon characters printed on them?
Some useful Dravian links: Grammar - Lexicon - Ask a Dravian
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Και η λωστήσση φυία μοι...
kai i lostíssi phyía moi...
[ce i los.ˈti.si ˈfy.a my]
Let the answer be 'no'...

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Dewrad wrote:
Izambri wrote:Aim ont perís na dalmons nuus.
I have a pair of new underpants.
Èh, saloit per aver compartaitlo. Que san-el el tò bragetat noav stampat de caràterei cartunei?
Uh, thank you for sharing that. Do your new underpants have cartoon characters printed on them?
Ris·mà!
LOL no!
Un llapis mai dibuixa sense una mà.

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Izambri wrote:
Dewrad wrote:
Izambri wrote:Aim ont perís na dalmons nuus.
I have a pair of new underpants.
Èh, saloit per aver compartaitlo. Que san-el el tò bragetat noav stampat de caràterei cartunei?
Uh, thank you for sharing that. Do your new underpants have cartoon characters printed on them?
Ris·mà!
LOL no!
Fèh, tant peai. Lei mai ènd san stampat!
Bah, fail. Mine do!
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Imralu wrote:Kuahi imaatahimu tta.
kuahi i-maatahi-mu tta
coffee 3s.INAN-loved.platonically-1s.MASC also
"I love coffee too.
uatla teye niha
That sentence is cute.

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Mazhanji taxle na temdze. Penchi taxle na temdze. Bguli dari penchis nuxor; kiltis txor sha mlihi tim jema pshezhus tkashas.
Fuck underpants. Fuck pants. Real men don't wear pants; they wear kilts and feel the wind around their dongs.
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Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei.

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Nortaneous wrote:Mazhanji taxle na temdze. Penchi taxle na temdze. Bguli dari penchis nuxor; kiltis txor sha mlihi tim jema pshezhus tkashas.
Fuck underpants. Fuck pants. Real men don't wear pants; they wear kilts and feel the wind around their dongs.
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And, depending what you're into, it could be easy access!
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Δίζες ις κη όβα συ τώκαν ναι λο σόλο, ταλ εκκί ν'αστίβω.
dízes is ki óba sy tókan nai lo sólo, tal ekkí n'astíbo.
You say that because your nuts don't reach the ground, like here in summer.

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Thry wrote:Δίζες ις κη όβα συ τώκαν ναι λο σόλο, ταλ εκκί ν'αστίβω.
dízes is ki óba sy tókan nai lo sólo, tal ekkí n'astíbo.
You say that because your nuts don't reach the ground, like here in summer.
Δικι φαρσο, μαννυ δομνυ. Σο δι Τεξασο. Χι χιβρενι νωτρι σων χι οθωνι. Ακκη χε ετταθε νωτρε σων ετταθε δοπρε.
You are very wrong, dear sir. I am from Texas. Our winters are falls. And our summers are double summers.

Χαώ φισε ιν Σπανα δυρανυ χα ετταθε (ιν Σαλαμανκα). Ιρα καρυ, ασετ νε λ'ετ υμιδιθα. Ατ με, ιρα παραδισυ.
I've been in Spain during the summer (in Salamanca). It was hot, but there was no humidity. It was paradise to me.
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Zapanle sekelkasakasazii seyesitiinutiinuzi kase. Tegapetuu lanteugu fazauku lusepe (kika, Yeulupale lusepetuu lanteu).
In Japan there are hot humid summers and cold dry winters. This is the opposite to how it should be (ie, how it is in Europe).

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Διζεία α Νορτανειώσο, μαις βην, Σαλαμάγκα ήσμι αισσί παραδίσος... Σης Νόρτε! Ρης ταλ ο καλώ λυς Σύδις!
dizeía a Nortaneióso, mais bin, Salamánka ísmi aissí paradísos... sis nórte! ris tal o kaló lys sýdis!
I was talking to Nort, but well, Salamanca is paradise for me too... It's in the north! Nothing like the heat of the south.

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Thry ha bèn rasun: si jèu ne'm vestès ren de bragetat, lei mèi coglunei se scavara pel pamant, e çò scorrara de quant na cagna. Asài c'è mai igénic: necoin ne vlaja na sudatèta de davant le braque depòs d'aver mezoit.
Thry has it exactly right: if I don't wear underpants then my bollocks scrape along the ground and they chafe like hell. Also it's more hygenic: nobody wants the inevitable wet spot on the front of your trousers after pissing.
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Nortaneous wrote:Mazhanji taxle na temdze. Penchi taxle na temdze. Bguli dari penchis nuxor; kiltis txor sha mlihi tim jema pshezhus tkashas.
Fuck underpants. Fuck pants. Real men don't wear pants; they wear kilts and feel the wind around their dongs.
Kilts è tosfords, zhà! Saniu s'esterne!
Kilts and ball weights, yeah! Feel the tug!
Un llapis mai dibuixa sense una mà.

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Thry wrote:Διζεία α Νορτανειώσο, μαις βην, Σαλαμάγκα ήσμι αισσί παραδίσος... Σης Νόρτε! Ρης ταλ ο καλώ λυς Σύδις!
dizeía a Nortaneióso, mais bin, Salamánka ísmi aissí paradísos... sis nórte! ris tal o kaló lys sýdis!
I was talking to Nort, but well, Salamanca is paradise for me too... It's in the north! Nothing like the heat of the south.
Χαώ φισε ατ Σεβιιά κης Γραναδα διμάι, ακκη με αμαύθωρ νυν χο αττακελυ αθιμ. Ολω κο ιδω χο αττακελο ιν Σπανα...
I've been to Seville and Granada as well, and I still loved the weather there. I miss the weather in Spain...
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