Help your conlang fluency (2)

[Lyra]

auta k·ixelani·
my country is not great.

~Lyra

[masako]

auta k·ixelani·
my country is not great.

nye hanya tayo mala ka
Why is your country bad?

[ol bofosh]

auta k·ixelani·
my country is not great.

~Lyra

Ux ong bacaw?
ux oŋ baʈʂaw
INT 3s live.violently
It's bad?

[Lyra]

auta k·ixelani·
my country is not great.

~Lyra

Ux ong bacaw?
ux oŋ baʈʂaw
INT 3s live.violently
It's bad?

tromubha!
horrible.

Nä nerä áljaron hwola sálajranad nôz.
And I can't say that in my new lang.

~Lyra

[Thry]

Nä nerä áljaron hwola sálajranad nôz.
And I can't say that in my new lang.

Pods nais lo dire ascor.
/pows nES i di.4@ 6s.'ko4/
You can't say it yet.

[ol bofosh]

Onong dekirp xak, ol lira.
You'll have to invent it, Lyra.

(I'm not saying anything really, it's just an excuse to use an unused modal adverb)

[Nortaneous]

auta k·ixelani·
my country is not great.

~Lyra

Ux ong bacaw?
ux oŋ baʈʂaw
INT 3s live.violently
It's bad?

tromubha!
horrible.

aréy, áias ekkém
[ɐˈɾɵɥ ʌjs xkem]
eh, mine too

[Skomakar'n]

Hlímiúnumsaji gyndmsæunzi iuwlńs júwuldufiaunzi.
hlí‹›m-jú‹›nw-Ø‹›m-ˤh-z-ˤ‹j›i gy‹›nd-Ø‹›m-ˤh-z-ˤ‹ʷn-z›i iw-w‹l›ń-ˤh-z jú‹›w-(ʷ)‹l›dd-ʷf-j-ˤ‹ʷn-z›i
I upgraded my computer's operating system today.
be_metallic-to_think-COM-3P-INAN-OBJ<1P> to_control-COM-3P-OBJ<4P-INAN> now-to_dawn<PAST>-3P-INAN be_new-CAUS<PAST>-TRA-1P-OBJ<4P-INAN>
[ˈl̥iːmɪ̯ʊːnʊ̃m̥t͡s̻ˌɑɪ̯jɯ̯ ˈɰˠʏ̃n̥ːm̥t͡s̻ˌæʊ̯̃nz̻ɯ̯ ˈjʊwln̩ɕːˈʊːwʊldʊ̤̯ɸɪ̯ˌɑʊ̯̃nz̻ɯ̯]

[masako]

Hlímiúnumsaji gyndmsæunzi iuwlńs júwuldufiaunzi.
hlí‹›m-jú‹›nw-Ø‹›m-ˤh-z-ˤ‹j›i gy‹›nd-Ø‹›m-ˤh-z-ˤ‹ʷn-z›i iw-w‹l›ń-ˤh-z jú‹›w-(ʷ)‹l›dd-ʷf-j-ˤ‹ʷn-z›i
I upgraded my computer's operating system today.
be_metallic-to_think-COM-3P-INAN-OBJ<1P> to_control-COM-3P-OBJ<4P-INAN> now-to_dawn<PAST>-3P-INAN be_new-CAUS<PAST>-TRA-1P-OBJ<4P-INAN>
[ˈl̥iːmɪ̯ʊːnʊ̃m̥t͡s̻ˌɑɪ̯jɯ̯ ˈɰˠʏn̥ːm̥t͡s̻ˌæʊ̃nz̻ɯ̯ ˈjʊwln̩ɕːˈʊːwʊldʊ̤̯ɸɪ̯ˌɑʊ̯nz̻ɯ̯]

to uatla emyaye ka
How did that go?

[Skomakar'n]

Hlímiúnumsaji gyndmsæunzi iuwlńs júwuldufiaunzi.
hlí‹›m-jú‹›nw-Ø‹›m-ˤh-z-ˤ‹j›i gy‹›nd-Ø‹›m-ˤh-z-ˤ‹ʷn-z›i iw-w‹l›ń-ˤh-z jú‹›w-(ʷ)‹l›dd-ʷf-j-ˤ‹ʷn-z›i
I upgraded my computer's operating system today.
be_metallic-to_think-COM-3P-INAN-OBJ<1P> to_control-COM-3P-OBJ<4P-INAN> now-to_dawn<PAST>-3P-INAN be_new-CAUS<PAST>-TRA-1P-OBJ<4P-INAN>
[ˈl̥iːmɪ̯ʊːnʊ̃m̥t͡s̻ˌɑɪ̯jɯ̯ ˈɰˠʏ̃n̥ːm̥t͡s̻ˌæʊ̯̃nz̻ɯ̯ ˈjʊwln̩ɕːˈʊːwʊldʊ̤̯ɸɪ̯ˌɑʊ̯̃nz̻ɯ̯]

to uatla emyaye ka
How did that go?

Iukuwsódu.
iw-kú‹›w-ˤh-z-ʷ´ˤdʷ
It's all good (now too).
now-be_good-3P-INAN-CONJ
[ˈɪ̯ʊˌɡʊws̻ˌɔːðʊ̯]

[masako]

ya tama
Oh, good.

[Skomakar'n]

Íjæh! Ís mindyfiæuzi. Kúkuwsæisæs.
í‹›Ø-ˤh – í‹›Ø-ˤh-z mi‹›nd-ʷf-j-ˤ‹w-z›i – kú~kú‹›w-sǽ‹›s-ˤh-z
It's raining! I adore rain. It smells so good.
to_rain-3P – to_rain-3P-INAN to_love-TRA-1P-OBJ<3P-INAN> – be_good~be_great-to_blow-3P-INAN
[ˈiːjæħ] – [ˈiːs̻ ˈtm̥ɯ̃nːœ̤̯ɸɪ̯ˌæʊ̯z̻ɯ̯] – [ˈkʊːɡʊws̻æɪ̯s̻æs̻]

[masako]

ta ke sahyak muya
You're doing it wrong...

[Skomakar'n]

Iusahmimausti?
iw-sa‹›hm-m-ˤ‹w-z-t›i
What do you mean by that?
now-to_say/mean-2P-OBJ<3P-INAN-INT>
[ˈɪ̯ʊˌs̻ɑ̃hpm̥ɯ̯̃mˌɑʊ̯s̻tɯ̯]

[masako]

nye ta ke pana "ampuye" ka
Why were you "smelling" rain?

[Lyra]

khazet lolobani· rau huneni.
Rain has smell as well as sound.

~Lyra

[Skomakar'n]

nye ta ke pana "ampuye" ka
Why were you "smelling" rain?

khazet lolobani· rau huneni.
Rain has smell as well as sound.

~Lyra

Mams Lýlæh doqah.
ma‹›m-ˤh-z lý‹›l-ˤh do‹›q-ˤh
Lyra is correct.
be_called-3P-INAN be_Lyra-3P be_right-3P
[ˈmɑ̃m̥t͡s̻ ˈtl̥yːɾæħ ˈθɔɢɑħ]

Ís iudunnsæissæls.
í‹›Ø-ˤh-z iw-du‹›nn-sǽ‹›s-sæ‹›lg-ˤh-z
Rain does smell a lot.
to_rain-3P-INAN now-be_big-to_blow-to_find/feel-3P-INAN
[ˈiːs̻ ˈɪ̯ʊˌðʊ̃ŋ̊qs̻æɪ̯ɕæl̥t͡s̻]

[ol bofosh]

Thesirt sana yate umor sifis erisij ha.
/'ʈe.siɾt 'sa.ɳa 'ja.te 'um.oɾ 'si.fis e.'ɾi.siɖʐ ha/
smell-PRS good other give water plant-PL BEN
Watering the plants smells nice too.

So this is new. Yate, as part of an NP means "other". But adapting it to adverbial use it becomes "too".

[Lyra]

tialobet xixeletani' re.
['tialobet ɣiɣela'taniʔ re]
many-smell-NOM.INA VERB*-good-NOM.INA-HAB is*.
Many smells are good.

*no idea what these would be called, they reverbalize a nominalized verb, maybe it's the 'to be', but 're' is the root for the relative marker too.

~Lyra

[Thry]

Onong dekirp xak, ol lira.
You'll have to invent it, Lyra.

(I'm not saying anything really, it's just an excuse to use an unused modal adverb)

A "ol" seia una particla vocativa, toncs per que y es en teu nicknom?
If "ol" is a vocative particle, then why is it in your nickname?

La pluia fed nun mal mod. Al mens neias cividads.
Rain stinks like hell. At least in cities.

sano you no longer sano?
sano ja n'és mais sano?

[ol bofosh]

A "ol" seia una particla vocativa, toncs per que y es en teu nicknom?
If "ol" is a vocative particle, then why is it in your nickname?

It's a proper noun particle too.

[Nortaneous]

Cerrais dialect:
Nián ntiálnn celárr mfákra.
[ɲæn ndʒæʰɫ̥n̥ tsɪˈɫɑʰʃ ˈɱfʌgɾɐ]
né=an ne=et-ḩál-nn celár-r m-fák-ra
1S=TOP 1S=FUT-go_to-GER family-1S.POSS PST-force-PFV.PASS

Border dialect:
Nián ne etḩálann celár néu ḩafákra.
[ˈnjæn nɪˈtʰalɐʰn̥ tsɪˈlaɾ ˈnʏɥ hɐˈfakʂɐ]
né=an ne=et-ḩál-nn celár néu ḩa-fák-ra
1S=TOP 1S=FUT-go_to-GER family 1S.REFL PST-force-PFV.PASS

Standard:
Nián etálnn celárer ḩafákra.
[ˈnjæn ɪˈtʌɫ̥n̥ tsɪˈɫʌɾɪɾ hɐˈfʌkɾɐ]
né=an et-ḩál-nn celár-er ḩa-fák-ra
1S=TOP FUT-go_to-GER family-1S.POSS PST-force-PFV.PASS

I have to go visit my family today.

[Skomakar'n]

La pluia fed nun mal mod. Al mens neias cividads.
Rain stinks like hell. At least in cities.

Kuwsæisæsæji iulódunnjæisaujóhj.
kú‹›w-sǽ‹›s-ˤh-z-ˤ‹j›i iw-lʷ´ˤ-du‹›nn-jǽ‹›Ø-sa‹›w-jó‹›h-j
It smells good here, and I live in a city.
be_good-to_blow-3P-INAN-OBJ<1P> now-TOP-be_big-be_together-be_home-to_live-1P
[ˈkʊws̻æɪ̯s̻æs̻ˌæɪ̯jɯ̯ ˈjʊˌɾɔːˈðʊŋːæɪ̯s̻ɑʊ̯jɔːç]

[Thry]

La pluia fed nun mal mod. Al mens neias cividads.
Rain stinks like hell. At least in cities.

Kuwsæisæsæji iulódunnjæisaujóhj.
kú‹›w-sǽ‹›s-ˤh-z-ˤ‹j›i iw-lʷ´ˤ-du‹›nn-jǽ‹›Ø-sa‹›w-jó‹›h-j
It smells good here, and I live in a city.
be_good-to_blow-3P-INAN-OBJ<1P> now-TOP-be_big-be_together-be_home-to_live-1P
[ˈkʊws̻æɪ̯s̻æs̻ˌæɪ̯jɯ̯ ˈjʊˌɾɔːˈðʊŋːæɪ̯s̻ɑʊ̯jɔːç]

Perque tu, nórdic, veus nun pai mais pur de que io.
Because you Northern live in a purer country than me.

[Skomakar'n]

La pluia fed nun mal mod. Al mens neias cividads.
Rain stinks like hell. At least in cities.

Kuwsæisæsæji iulódunnjæisaujóhj.
kú‹›w-sǽ‹›s-ˤh-z-ˤ‹j›i iw-lʷ´ˤ-du‹›nn-jǽ‹›Ø-sa‹›w-jó‹›h-j
It smells good here, and I live in a city.
be_good-to_blow-3P-INAN-OBJ<1P> now-TOP-be_big-be_together-be_home-to_live-1P
[ˈkʊws̻æɪ̯s̻æs̻ˌæɪ̯jɯ̯ ˈjʊˌɾɔːˈðʊŋːæɪ̯s̻ɑʊ̯jɔːç]

Perque tu, nórdic, veus nun pai mais pur de que io.
Because you Northern live in a purer country than me.

Hóhqultnah iunz lainufahhaunzi.
hó‹›h-q-ʷ‹›lt-n-ˤh í‹›Ø-ʷn-z lá‹›j-n-ʷf-ˤh-ˤ‹ʷn-z›i
There are many trees to hold on to the rainwater.
to_reach-all-SEM-PL-3P to_rain-4P-INAN to_bear-PL-TRA-3P-OBJ<4P-INAN>
[ˈhɔːhqʊl̥tn̥ɑ̃ħ ˈɪ̯ʊ̃nz̻ ˈlɑɪ̯nʊ̤̯ɸɑħːˌɑʊ̯̃nz̻ɯ̯]