Help your conlang fluency (2)

[KathTheDragon]

I'd say <N!ɨ> is cognate to <nyst>.

[Nortaneous]

I'll bite- ɕeñ is cognate to kes, and s!a is cognate to san?

Kes zigger zed zäl al eig.
[çʌi̯jɐ tseh tsaɫ ʊw ʌi̯h]
It's not any of those four.

I'd say <N!ɨ> is cognate to <nyst>.

Ary.
[ɐry]
Right.

[KathTheDragon]

Ai bieyam sieying duwentie-sigyth hurndilhroudyie Bouritish. Ai laikam, how it lukys. Dü yülh laikâlh?
I'm trying out 26th Century Future English (derived from British English). I like how it looks. Do you guys?

[KathTheDragon]

I'm tempted to say that <!ə!hɨɨy> is cognate to <astel>, but I'm not sure about that.

[Nortaneous]

I'm tempted to say that <!ə!hɨɨy>

yes

is cognate to <astel>

no

[Dē Graut Bʉr]

Who speaks Bearlandic? Are they bears?

No, mar bʉrs heppt a roll in dē kulltur.
No, but bears do play a role in the culture though.

That's interesting! Have you made a proto-language?

A fagg sgiss.
A vague sketch.

[KathTheDragon]

I'm tempted to say that <!ə!hɨɨy>

yes

is cognate to <astel>

no

Cognate to <hvang>, then?

[hwhatting]

No, mar bʉrs heppt a roll in dē kulltur.
No, but bears do play a role in the culture though.

Munní tus orxus solliten, al ni conten, wit ni mochoris?
think-PRES.ACT.1SG ART-M.PL.ACC bear-PL.ACC dance-INF, but NEG sing-INF, PRT NEG can-PRES.ACT.3PL
I assume the bears dance, but don't sing, as they're not able to?

[Chagen]

Ker Heocguyo wedhyeg.
[ker xɛtʃujo wedʰjeg]
now heocg-INSTR talk-POT.PRES
(I) can now speak in Heocg.

....Yųð hyht, dwett....
[juːθ xyxt, dwetː]
....not much, but...
...not much, though...

(It's getting there...perhaps I should make a scratchpad)

[KathTheDragon]

Ai laikam, hau yü moidâ dhie soupietshilh raitingym (outhografiem) siem.
I like how you made the orthography look.

[Nortaneous]

I'm tempted to say that <!ə!hɨɨy>

yes

is cognate to <astel>

no

Cognate to <hvang>, then?

no, it's koug

[KathTheDragon]

I knew I should've gone for koug. Oh well, I got the other cognate.

[Chagen]

Ai laikam, hau yü moidâ dhie soupietshilh raitingym (outhografiem) siem.
I like how you made the orthography look.

(Thanks. It's inspired by both Old English with /x θ/ <h ð>, Sanskrit with <bh dh gh> for the aspirated stops, and ogoneks for length because why the fuck not?)

Fęgcuan.
[feːdʒuan]
honor-PASS
Thank you (lit. " am honored).

[KathTheDragon]

Neu wyrrieying.
You're welcome

[CatDoom]

That's interesting! Have you made a proto-language?

A fagg sgiss.
A vague sketch.

(This is a tricky one; not sure I've got it quite right, but here goes...)

Hintitanwilalu gari hifzu, hamu tuknivahagniztika Riktas Rammay tuhatikruk hanatakru riktastakru gata Nihungu Hurbi huksi. Hikfilmawilalu tuhatik himmi.

/hin<ti>ta-n-wila=lu gaɾi hifd͡zu, hamu tukni-vahag-ni-zti-ka ɾiktas ɾammaj tu=hatik-ɾuk hana-tak-ɾu ɾiktas-tak-ɾu gata nihuŋu huɾbi huksi/
think<CONT>-MPASS-CONT.PERF=I thus little.while, such.that HYP-divide-MPASS-PFV-INFER Riktas Rammay its=sister-COM mother-LOC-ABL speech-LOC-ABL as.if Japanese middle.time in.past

/hik-filma-wila=lu tu=hatik himmi/
NEG-make-CONT.PERF=I its=sister yet

For a little while I've been thinking that Riktas Rammay and its sister languages have branched from a proto-language with a time-depth similar to Middle Japanese. I'm working on the sister languages but haven't finished making them yet.

Edit: Slight correction; Riktas nouns that do not have inherently locative meanings need to be inflected for the locative case before they can take the ablative inflection.

[VerbalDescription]

Lolo izdYetog--gildœz! ZikelWùwoforum lod veÉlùTrùdrù. GálkEwoconlangE«Làzdet» lo ve.

Hello, friends! I’m writing on this forum for the first time. I call this conlang “Làzdet”.

[Pazmivaniye]

Lolo izdYetog--gildœz! ZikelWùwoforum lod veÉlùTrùdrù. GálkEwoconlangE«Làzdet» lo ve.

Hello, friends! I’m writing on this forum for the first time. I call this conlang “Làzdet”.

Boja a vediu de ZBB! La guariedue íe viko ABD a oluso e jano iliaté.
[boˈʒa a βeˈdʒu de ˈʃi ˈbe ˈbe || ˈla gu̯aɹi̯eˈdu̯e i βiˈko ˈa ˈbe ˈde a oluˈso e ˈʒano iʎaˈte]
Hello and welcome to the ZBB! I would be interested to see the IPA and gloss for what you wrote.

Bósi, la tuoniabiese fisio soliasi eú Kuano-Anumao-Sékoi (no bema tisi) de kua e nosa kinosi. No nieka luesteri!
[ˈboʃi | la tu̯oɲaˈbi̯ese ɸiˈʃo soʎaˈʃi e̯u ˈku̯ano anuˈmao̯ ˈsekoi̯ | ˈno ˈbema tʃiˈʃi | de ˈku̯a e ˈnosa kinoˈʃi || ˈno ˈɲeka lu̯eʃteˈɹi]
Today, I started making the changes from Proto-Southern-Annumahan (it needs a name) to one of its children. It has infixes!

Da sekis ta, nalot la faheji. (luextér haskojyde)
[dɑ sɛˈkis tɑ | nɑˈɫɔt ɫɑ fɑχɛˈji || ɫuwɛsˈtɛχ χaskɔjʌˈdɛ]
This is it, in which I am writing. (infix underlined)

[VerbalDescription]

Boja a vediu de ZBB! La guariedue íe viko ABD a oluso e jano iliaté.
[boˈʒa a βeˈdʒu de ˈʃi ˈbe ˈbe || ˈla gu̯aɹi̯eˈdu̯e i βiˈko ˈa ˈbe ˈde a oluˈso e ˈʒano iʎaˈte]
Hello and welcome to the ZBB! I would be interested to see the IPA and gloss for what you wrote.

Teld! Lolo kálàrEtyele:
teɭɖ! ɭoɭo keɪʈɑɻ-əcə
thanks. cause.2p.sing-ownership-of.sample
Thanks! Have a sample:

KetùlàÀVádegEBivùsit--vorzetizh,ZedEùzedùthelGelevdwù,Àebrezàd-- lozdip Lù.
kəʈuɭɑ-vəɪɖeg-əbɪvuzɪʈ voɻzəʈɪʒ zəɖ-əuzəɖuðel-geɭevdwu-ɑəbɻeɑzɑɖ ɭozdɪp ɭu
Obscuration-by.dust-of.Tower-cylindrical-eye-of.watching-judging-God-cause.eventneg.p.3-it
The dust does not obscure the Tower, the cylindrical eye of a watchful, judging God.

Note: My IPA might be wrong; I'm very rusty. Also because Lazdet has a huge number of cases, I prefer just using prepositions rather than case names in my glosses.

[Pazmivaniye]

Rosie jano giasi li siu ABD, la beme notelo: semi mafo giasi li iliatua ki sa puadui?
[ɹoˈse ˈʒano gi̯aˈʃi li ʃu ˈa ˈbe ˈde | ˈla beˈme noteˈlo | seˈmi maˈɸo gi̯aˈʃi li iʎaˈtu̯a ˈki sa pu̯aˈdu̯i]
Because of the spaces in your IPA, I have to ask: what don't you like about using spaces in orthography?

[KathTheDragon]

Ai supeulham, dhat gapys bieyâlh not niedin, wen yü yülhâ yrpyrkoisym atie evrie wyrdlhylh sitâtym.
I suppose that spaces are redundant when you use capital letters at the start of every word.

[Dē Graut Bʉr]

Miess maksgryfing heppt gyn grautleter.
My conscript doesn't have capital letters.

[VerbalDescription]

Vo«Kàtù» tyi vo«Ol» lo idà. Dà loel geletvœkit. Zedzàg--ve loel àthùjádeld.
exist.event-and-exist.cause-cause.3p.plur.pres-themselves. They-cause.3p-plur.pres-clustering-of.themselves. Ugly, I-cause.1p-sing-pres-knowledge.
There are "Events" and "Causes". They cluster. Ugly, I know. :/

_{OK I guess I should elaborate. I have one verb, o, and it roughly means "causes". It's essentially a placeholder for tense and so on. Then there is the "event", the object of the sentence, and the "cause", the subject of the sentence. It's an elaborate game of passive voice, and I'm not particularly pleased with it. It's getting better as I work on it, though.}

[Jipí]

Le saragoyreng tarela yaman siyam ang eryava telbānyeley kāryo kong narānjya …
PT explain-NEG-3SG.INAN still reason.T REL-(P)-DAT AT use-2SG.T letter-PL-P.INAN big inside word-PL-LOC.
That still doesn't explain why you use capital letters inside of words …

[VerbalDescription]

[Sorry, I don't have a lot of time now so this will be in English.]
I wanted each part of the sentence--the kálàr and the ol--to be obviously connected. It isn't completely unreadable, but I'm thinking about changing it. Maybe it will get ridiculous once I work out more complexities of my syntax, which will make longer sentences and maybe elaboration on the event-cause thing.
I don't do this in every orthography.

Jipí--orthographyEbù lodel Iàyezog.
Jipí, orthography-of.you-cause.sing.pres-personal-magnificence
Jipí, your orthography is magnificent.

[abaddamn]

Thai-hathems Tibet-hathemsh cha labunta yana?
Thai and Tibetan put together maybe?