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Oy, so much to reply to.
cedh audmanh wrote:
A well-known scriptmaster wrote:I plan to create a few proto-scripts for some of the (base) langs here.
I'm not sure if you had seen it, but two weeks ago Sano announced his intention of creating a script for Akana. I think we should get him involved in the script discussion...
Agree. Given that the Ngauro situation is yet unresolved and that Legion wants it, my suggestion for a good task for Sano (if he wants it) would be to create the Tjakori syllabary borrowed by Adāta. This would give a good base for the later development of a full Dāiadak script family. It would also give him plenty of creative freedom, instead of having to cope with the whole Edastean/Ngauro mess. The one issue there is that little is known of the Tjakori language, so perhaps he should just create the Adāta version directly... but that's getting a bit ahead of ourselves here. Let's see what he wants to do.
cedh audmanh wrote:BTW I've found a rather fascinating word during this research. It means "bird's nest", attested in Forest Miwan as zafwi:ta and in Eastern Miwan as zafwita:. It is clearly related to FMiw kwintas "bird" (from PEI *gwent "to fly", cf. Faraghin ghantač "dragon"), and it shows some unusual sound changes not present in the uncompounded form. Most saliently, there is a lenition of PEV *kw to *fw after a morpheme that might just be related to the PI genitive prefix *as-. In Western Isthmus, any plosive following this prefix lenited in a similar manner. AND: the POA change involved here is parallel to the unusual NT change *gw > *bw! Maybe this word is our first glimpse of Meshi...
AHA! And the Eige-Isthmus Enigma gets more interesting still. That relationship (of zafwita to kwintas) was completely unintended, but I like the mysterious possibilities it offers. Are you thinking the word should have been borrowed into Miwan from Meshi? There is probably not room in for s-cluster lenition in the main Miwan languages (where sibilant-plosive clusters abound) but it could have happened in Meshi. Pending #12's approval, now, since he's staked a claim. Another possibility is that the prefix morpheme was actaully zaf- (or its equivalent) and that the [k] was simply deleted from such clusters. But this solution leaves out the sexy connection to NT gw > bw.

That connection might be hard to establish, though - the timing and locations are difficult. That sound change happened somewhere right around -2000 YP, long after the Meshi and Miw were last in regular contact. It would have to have been recently enough before standard Ndak Ta that it may not have spread to the Western dialects (as neither Adāta nor Ndok Aisô show a labial reflex) and the late occurrance is supported by both internal reconstruction and comparison with Tlaliolz as well. And with location, as implied by the above, the bw change probably originated in the eastern end of the empire while the Meshi were out in the far west.

However, the eastern Ndak would have been in some contact with more local Miw. Perhaps rather than Meshi, it should be some other Miwan language involved... or perhaps not, because another idea occurs to me. What if the POA change in zafwita is actually due to the word's having experienced the bw change in NT itself? That would make it a boomerang borrowing: Miw -> NT -> Miw. Such things are far from unattested on Earth, of course. But I don't know how it would work even then. This solution would appear to require first a voicing of the [k] in kwintas in one language or the other, followed by fronting in NT, followed by devoicing and leniting bw to fw later in a Miwan language. That's a lot of railroading we'd have to do. So I'm not sure this works any better than the Meshi solution.
Corumayas wrote:I've uploaded some more detailed thoughts about Eige-Isthmus morphosyntax. I'm still in extrapolating-from-Faraghin mode, but working toward identifying where there's room to invent things and what those things might look like. I'd appreciate comments, if anyone can muster the patience to read through it...
Well. I'm just reading it now, and I don't really have any huge things to say beyond keep up the good work. But there are various minor things...

- Why is the word for guitar "clearly" head-final? I had conceived zukatun and pa:ntun both to quite directly mean "red fruit" and "red music" (the latter intended as a metaphorical term not unakin to Blues music, at the risk of sounding like a cheap knockoff).

- Later added by cedh: "My guess is that this would have happened before -2000 YP because the strong superstratum influence of Ndak Ta (which is head-initial) would certainly not have encouraged this change." (emphasis mine) -- Just a minor factual correction: Ndak Ta is definitely a strongly VO language, but Dewrad made an error in the Adāta grammar when he said NT's compounds are all head-initial. I explicitedly stated in the original NT grammar that both head-initial and head-final compounds were common. That was intended as one of several traces of a former OV order in the Talo-Edastean history; SOV word order remains in some NT subclauses, for example. But this doesn't really affect the correct statement that Edastean influence is unlikely to cause another language to switch to head-final order.

- The notes for aspect in Faraghin puzzle me: surely -čan isn't more common than -an in the lexicon. So how can it be more productive than the old voice system, which apparently affects every single Faraghin verb via the stem vowel? I'm not sure why the suffix couldn't continue to be analyzable in Faraghin as -č-a-n: lexicalized repetetive aspect, then lexicalized active voice, then inflectional 3SG.

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Well if Sano can work out some script, let it be so - I wanted to derivate my own script for Komejech (which I'm revising and working hard on right now, it's taking shape and I tell you, it will be beautiful), but that's my no mean an emergency.

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Thanks, cedh! That analysis is very helpful... I need to study it for a while now...
Radius Solis wrote:- The notes for aspect in Faraghin puzzle me: surely -čan isn't more common than -an in the lexicon. So how can it be more productive than the old voice system, which apparently affects every single Faraghin verb via the stem vowel? I'm not sure why the suffix couldn't continue to be analyzable in Faraghin as -č-a-n: lexicalized repetetive aspect, then lexicalized active voice, then inflectional 3SG.
I think the less productive affix would be more common in the lexicon, not less... fully productive markings wouldn't show up in the lexicon at all, because they'd be inflectional rather than derivational.

Anyway, the stem vowel in Faraghin is no longer a voice marker, as I see it. The old active marker -a- shows up in every single verb now, except a few very old fossilized words with -e- or -i- instead. The Faraghin causative (which is also derivational now, so not fully productive) is formed with -oi-, showing the pattern -a- + -i- rather than the old -i-; in other words the -a- has been generalized to all voices, not just the active. And the past participle (which is also becoming derivational, in words like českod) may be the only place where the old mediopassive -u- survived. So the changing stem vowel pattern is not really productive in Faraghin anymore.

True, -čan could still be analyzed as you say. But given the time depth involved (at least 2500 years) and the way it's given in the Faraghin lexicon as a unit, I thought it might be more likely to come from an auxiliary.

(Part of the reason, admittedly, is that I looked at the possible outcomes of different consonants in the pre-stem vowel slot, and the results seemed mostly not so interesting to me...)
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I like the idea of zafwita or similar being a Meshi word. It squares with some ideas I've had about the sound changes. Some thoughts:
*Why would the Miw borrow a word like "bird's nest" from a faraway tribe?
*Possibly just the fwita bit is Meshi, and the za is native.
*The kw --> fw change may not be the result of s-lenition. It may be a weird unconditional change in Meshi. But I don't think we should try too hard to link this to NT's gw --> bw.

Are the Miwan languages still supposed to be tonal, or have phonemic breathy voice, or something? I assume the tones will eventually be indicated but haven't been yet. (Meshi likewise may also have a tone system)

I declare that Meshi is indeed head-initial, because the "Me" bit is cognate to "Miw," and the "shi" is some further designation (probably "Upper" or "Upriver" or "Mountain" or "North").


Sano wrote on the wiki that he's gonna do the Tjakori syllabary in the next few weeks. I'm very glad for this, but if there are any constraints on the assignment we better tell him pretty quickly.

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The hardest thing about doing a Tjakori syllabary will probably be the fact that there's no information about the Tjakori language at all, as far as I know.

Radius, I'm somewhat surprised to learn that Talo-Edastean is meant to have had OV order at some earlier stage, since Ndak Ta, Tlaliolz, and proto-Xoronic are all verb-initial. Part of my idea about PEI being head-initial was that this might suggest a very distant connection (genetic or areal, who knows) with the ancestor of Macro-Edastean. I won't be too bothered if it doesn't work out that way, though.


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Corumayas wrote:Radius, I'm somewhat surprised to learn that Talo-Edastean is meant to have had OV order at some earlier stage, since Ndak Ta, Tlaliolz, and proto-Xoronic are all verb-initial.
That's how the cookie crumbles, I guess. That intention of previous-OV goes right back to the earliest days when first deciding what Ndak Ta should be like, and need not have any continued applicability since there's little that hinges on it. Alternatively, we can just decide that both Macro-Edastean branches developed VO independently. It doesn't matter a great deal. :)

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Just thought I'd mention that I'm working on the diachronics of the Nualis-Takuna family. Currently working particularly on Takuna - if anyone wants to do Nualis (or another language of the family) then I can post what I've got so far.
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I've finally posted the beginnings of a culture-sketch of the Moyay that's been sitting around on my computer for a long time. See accompanying thread.


To remind people of the premise: the Moyay are a splinter of the Mohudza who retreated into the mountains to the north. This sketch is at around the time of Adata, iirc. They are overpopulating their degrading environment, and dealing with this through war and slaughter. Eventually, however, continuing soil degradation combined with the establishment of political near-unity (already well under way) (and maybe in company with a general climatic downturn and/or event - which I believe was speculated about earlier) will cause overpopulation to become excessive, and they will move en masse down into the lowlands to the south (and probably to the north as well), bringing pillage, murder and rapine to the civilisations living there.

They won't conquer the world or anything, as there aren't that many of them, but they might be able to topple an empire or two.




EDIT: on a strategic point: I prefer widening and deepening content, rather than lengthening it through time. I think it makes the project more accessible, as people can 'move sideways'. Otherwise it's as though the project's racing ahead and if you're not there 100% you can't get back on board. Moreover, it probably makes the temporal progression make more sense.

EDIT EDIT: for instance, I made some suggestions about the xoron eiel, and then went away for a weekend, and when i came the languages had been worked out two thousand years into the future.....



FAKE EDIT: I've been doing other things. I may have a go at a sketch of Andagg, though, now that we have its mother and two sisters
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Sexy. Is the relation among these people (and their languages) still supposed to be Proto-Talo-Edastean > Andagg > Mohudza > Moyay? (i.e. a simple chain of descent)

I have the Mohudza fucking with the Ndok downriver in the -800s or thereabouts. Hopefully this all pieces together well.

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Meanwhile, I'm still working on Komejech (yes, now with a <j>, because if it's good enough for German and Czech, it's good enough for Komejech).

So, here's a very small preview, or rather, a diachronical overview:

Ndak Ta: Rambe rong laid sompísna i tsis rai mâukna î.

Archaic Komejech: Rabbe ro lɛd soppíšabbe ɛtte-i sik ɛtte-žomak mɔkan i.

Old Komejech: Soppížabbe ettí ne rou lied giek ežóumak mweiγabbe i.

Komejech: Zofižape si ne rou ljes kjech žoumach meigape sach izi.

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boy #12 wrote:Sexy. Is the relation among these people (and their languages) still supposed to be Proto-Talo-Edastean > Andagg > Mohudza > Moyay? (i.e. a simple chain of descent)

I have the Mohudza fucking with the Ndok downriver in the -800s or thereabouts. Hopefully this all pieces together well.
Yes. At around that time my timeline-suggestions are that the "Mohudza" are two different (but probably overlapping and contiguous) groups - for want of a better term, horse-Mohudza and house-Mohudza. The latter are taking up the nomadic ways of their western neighbours and becoming a powerful political force. The former are still settled along the Bwimbai. Either group could well interfere with the Ndok - I suppose it depends what sort of interference you want. Raiding and overlordship are likely from the horse-Mohudza; serious settlement would require the house-Mohudza.

Eventually, the horse-Mohudza help destroy the house-Mohudza, as a political group if not as an ethnicity. The Moyay are a remnant of the house-Mohudza.


The Moyay, incidentally, look well placed to invade Huyfarah at some point.



Questions: do we have Talo-Edastean to Tlaliolz soundchanges? And more importantly, do we have a Talo-Edastean lexicon? I'm working on some Andagg sound-changes. [I know, I can work words out from Ndak Ta - but it's extra effort if it's been done already]

For what it's worth, they'll probably end up being the 'Antagg', and the river they're on will be called the Gimpi.

Some other suggested correspondences (Ndak Ta - Antagg - Early Tlaliolz):

sikadn - igdE: - sikaden (hurricane)
mbontai - ywo:thi - a:pho:ti (seed)
baus - bus - pos (ox)
oslok - Osjok - slok (NT. 'forget', A. 'cancel (an order, debt, etc)')
enanda - kjEna:t - kena:ta (NT. 'feel', A. 'touch')
laid - ljod - lixod (year)
sai - sa: - saxi (NT. 'female', A. 'bloody, dirty')
ingkwi - i:phe - i:qhwi (liver)
a^ka - a:k - aNeka (air)
bwai - ba: - kwi (star)

As you can see, Antagg, being somewhat a more populous language, has changed a bit more rapidly than the backward Early Tlaliolz did. Also a bit more than Ndak Ta - I suspect that the Antagg are closer to being the 'original' Edasteans, while the Ndak were those who migrated away from the homeland. As a small breakaway group, the Ndak were naturally more linguistically conservative, at least until they became powerful by taking over the new lands they found.

I don't think it looks too unrealistic, though. Then again, I realise that the time-gap between the languages is a lot smaller than I thought it would be, so maybe it is unrealistic afterall. Hmm.
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cedh audmanh wrote: There will be a "High Adatan" language, actually: I'm working on a new descendant of Adata that is highly influenced by the Habeo languages, and it will be spoken by the "urban elite" in the diaspora towns along the Eige, mostly Tikhodoze, Meximo, and Eieliatus.
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Absolutely!

Hey! Is that my idea, or did you come up with it independently?

[Hmm, I did want to do that, and had some ideas, but I don't know when, and if, it would ever get done. It would be nice to do an Adata-lang at some point, admittedly, but I can cope without]

Do you have strong con-cultural ideas for this? I thought the idea of a trade-route urban culture surrounded by Habeo rather cool (as I probably said earlier in this thread).
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Incidentally... is there, er... a way to make new pages on that 'wiki' thing you've got?
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Aye... search for the thing you want and click the link that says Create this page, go to http://akana.superlush.co.uk/~akana/ind ... ction=edit or click on one of the red links for pages not yet created but planned. Other ways as well no doubt. You have to be logged in though.
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Salmoneus wrote:
cedh audmanh wrote: There will be a "High Adatan" language, actually: I'm working on a new descendant of Adata that is highly influenced by the Habeo languages, and it will be spoken by the "urban elite" in the diaspora towns along the Eige, mostly Tikhodoze, Meximo, and Eieliatus.
Hey! Is that my idea, or did you come up with it independently?

[Hmm, I did want to do that, and had some ideas, but I don't know when, and if, it would ever get done. It would be nice to do an Adata-lang at some point, admittedly, but I can cope without]

Do you have strong con-cultural ideas for this? I thought the idea of a trade-route urban culture surrounded by Habeo rather cool (as I probably said earlier in this thread).
I remember you talking about trade-route mountain kingdoms, but that's not exactly what I have in mind here. The inspiration came from taking a closer look at the Proto-Xoronic and Habeo grammar sketches, and from the history issue that Athalē would at some point conquer the whole Xōron, but that no Adātan language was yet placed upriver from the Khalanu area. I played around with a few sound changes and got something that phonologically resembled Proto-Habeo rather quickly, and I figured I could even imitate the Habeo classifier system via tatpurusa noun-verb compounds, which native Habeo speakers might be prone to create when speaking Adāta. There is not much more I can currently say about the language though, because the differences between the dialects of the three towns are substantial, and I haven't yet decided which of them to describe in detail. The working title is Kuyʔūn < *koia ax xōron BTW.

I haven't put too much thought into culture yet; I'm envisioning something of a "Wild West" scenario, with the town-dwelling, "civilised" Dāiadak surrounded by the more numerous, partly or fully nomadic Habeo tribes. The most striking difference between this and RL America is that the Xōron would be of only very marginal interest for the civilisations of the Rathedān and the lower Eigə, so there are no new settlers arriving, and the Habeo (some of which have become settled in the towns) are gaining the upper hand in the long run, even though the Dāiadak have more prestige. There would not be much conflict between the two groups, because the Habeo are profiting from civilisation as long as it does not threaten their nomadic way of life, and the Dāiadak are not strong enough to expand their influence far outside the city walls. Accordingly, a mixed culture would develop in the towns, while the plains and mountains remain traditional Habeo.

It would be a good idea to have a trade route to the west develop from here, but it should be discovered late enough that Athalē cannot simply reconquer the Xōron (over most of which it loses nominal control during the 500s). So, not before 800 YP probably. I'd be happy to open this for discussion and collaboration.

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Yeah, definitely had that idea already. I didn't intend to have it replicate Habeo, though (partly as I would find that tacky, partly because I only invented the idea of Habeo as a background to this language, so there wasn't any Habeo to replicate), but rather something that was in keeping with several othe adatan languages, most significantly mavakhalan, with some habeo influences.

I was envisioning a culture with some echoes of wild west china - the habeo as the mongols and turkic groups. The cities would not be at war with them, but their trade caravans would be raided by them, and the cities would become highly paranoid and insular, surrounded by seas of hostile and alien people. Money would come from the trade caravans, so there would also be echoes of Samarkand, Khiva and Bukhara.
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In fact, what I actually said was:

Furthermore, inspired by our conversation with Legion, I'd kind of like to do an Adata-daughter. I know, I know, it's full. However, have you got an Adata-daughter in the high Eiwel Gourun? If not, I'd like to claim it.

[what we've been calling the 'Eiwel Gourun' (etc) seems actually to be a fairly big area, since its western limits aren't shown on most of our maps. I've not seen the final map yet, of course, but, going by the north bank, there's going to be four different areas:

1: the western bank of the Ziphe - Ndok Aiso, Mohudza, Meshi. Good agricultural land, though not so good as Latsomo.

2: straddling the Meshi river (whateveritsnameis) - Meshi, Komeyech (or whatever they will be called), some nomadic Mohudza, probably some Damak (who live in at least some of the mountains north of the valley), probably some Hitatc. Poor agricultural land, except near the river itself.

3: further west, as the valley narrows - "Habeo" (not a unified group), some nomadic Mohudza, probably some Komeyech, maybe some Damak, maybe other people. Very poor agricultural land, mostly fairly barren steppe, but agriculture possible (and prosperous - soil is dry, but fertile) in irrigated riverine areas

4: the plateau in the far west.


According to existing maps, areas 1 and 2 mostly resist Daiadak expansion - probably because they are too populated to conquer easily, but too uncivilised to have anything worth plundering. Area three, however, is conquered - I'm not entirely sure why, but why not? Maybe there's valuable ore up on the plateau or something.

My proposed daughter would be in area 3. My vision of this is that once the Athale empire recedes, what is left is a divided society - a variety of tribal confederations loosely scattered, with 'Daiadak' cities in irrigated areas. Athale probably found it an easy area to subdue, but a hard one to control, with sporadic tribal uprisings. Their successors are effectively beseiged in their cities, although they like to pretend they control the area.
For completeness' sake, I'm planning that the culture on the High Gourun will have been influenced by the existence of a mountain kingdom to the west, probably coming to prominence in the early first millenium YP. This kingdom would be small, but rich due to cross-mountain trade (a 'silk road kingdom'), and depopulated but defensible due to terrain. It would introduce a religion into the Gouron, probably imported from the West, although it could well be native. The inhabitants I'd assumed would be Habeo or related, but they could equally well be Damak (if the Damak aren't related to the Habeo), or unaffiliated, or even from the west, although I think that less likely. And if they're from the west they may or may not be (particularly may not, if the plateau is moved further north) Western.
I would probably combine these points:
a) people on the west, further north than the trading nations, send out explorers who find routes over the mountains, but they are too wild to be a really safe route
b) early first millenium, the mountains and the steppe become more peaceful and ordered, and a trade route begins
c) Athale moves north to cut off this route, and it stagnates
d) Troubles in the west, and possibly with the Xsali, contribute to the dwindling of the southern route and the decline of Athale. Northern Daiadak try to encourage the northern trade route, creating conflict between city-states, hastening the end of the empire
e) as the Empire dwindles, inter-city conflict, combined with continuing troubles elsewhere, minimises down the southern route. the northern route thrives briefly

By 1200, i'm not envisaging this silk road as imperial in any way. It's arduous and dangerous - but it avoids the taxes that the southern countries would put on the goods. Likewise, in our world, Chinese goods could perfectly well travel through India and Iran and the Caliphate - but there were also more direct but arduous routes through the barbarian lands of Central Asia that avoided Indian taxes at the least, and often Iranian and Arab ones as well. The Gourun cities are like Khiva or Bokhara (without the nomad empires they occassionally sported) - phenomenally wealthy cities, but isolated from the rest of the world, and totally dependent on a volatile trade. And without the unity or manpower to be a political threat to others. If the Rathedan is resurgent, no doubt these cities will decay from lack of trade, and then be conquered again. And they live in fear of the barbarians around them rising up (but they don't rise up much, because they're bribed).

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Incidentally, I thought I might make a draft sketch of Akana's climatic zones. I did some for the Aiwa area before, but none since the world map was created. It'll only be a draft, of course, especially since I haven't been doing lots of work on climates recently, so it might take me a bit to get back into the swing of it.
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In case anyone's not noticed, I've put such a map up on the wiki (see 'Recent Changes').

I think that the map re-iterates the importance of not rushin ahead chronologically, and of at least having some idea about the neighbouring spheres.

At the very least, I think we should set dates and natures for the entrance by the East.

- Is Isles culture linked to the Great Eastern culture, if there is one? One possibility here might be the idea that expansion by a settled peoples in the east may have driven the Proto-Isles speakers off their continent and onto the Isles. If a civilisation then arises on the eastern continent that is capable of sustaining fast and secure land-links, and that does not have to war at sea, it seems quite feasible that Eastern sea-technology is not enough to allow them to interfere in the Isles sphere. A later breakdown of this civilisation (either from within via civil wars or from without via barbarian invasions and segmentation from the north) could then force naval competition that accelerates sea-technology, allowing them to turn their attention to the west.

- How does an Eastern culture view the Isles? It seems to me that they could:
----- seek to conquer the Isles, or parts of them
----- view them solely as trading partners
----- plant colonies on the Isles to deal with native overpopulation
----- reduce the Isles to vassal states in a subservient relation
----- annihilate the Isles population and repopulate from home

- How does an Eastern expansion alter the relationship between the Isles and the Aiwa sphere? They could:
----- sell themselves to the East as an important trading link to the Aiwa Sphere
----- compete against the East by seeking to establish their own vassals within the Aiwa Sphere
----- migrate from the Isles into the Aiwa sphere
----- raid the Aiwa sphere for resources to sell to the East
----- do nothing, and act as a buffer between the Aiwa sphere and the East


This assumes, of course, that the East will come West. I think that they will. It's a climate that fosters urbanisation, and it's a huge climate zone for cross-fertilisation of ideas and species. A culture doing well on one part of that shoreline is likely to spread itself all along it from east to west, I believe (although it may not do so under a unified polity).
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Take in count that at least one of the isle cultures, the Thokyunam(old name)/Sošunami(new name), which I created, and which occupies the main body of nearest eastern Islands (those labelled "Ik'im" and "Wihe" in the oldest map), is a strongly military culture, some kind of blender bewteen Ancient Greece/Sparta and Feodal Japan. They do not show much internal unity (much like the early Radethan, it's more or less a confederation of city-states), and besides a few small oversea colonies (including one on the Daegem islands), they do not have much expansionist will.

However, they are strongly territorial and quite militarily advanced. While this does not imply that they can't be conquered, that would seriously hinder any perspective of profit from colonization, as they would be a particularily troublesome people to rule over for a foreign leader.

Additionally, and contrastively, they are relatively open to commerce with foreign powers.

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Well, if the proto-Isles people were kicked out of their Eastern homeland, perhaps it wouldn't be surprising if some of the refugees developed a strongly militaristic culture.... moreover, the presence of that culture could in turn be one motivator for the continued migration of the other Isles peoples to the north, into areas which will (even were we to adopt the proposed alterations) not exactly be wonderfully fertile and liveable.


In terms of attention from the East, it could work either way - slowing Eastern interest, or accelerating it (is it going to be a threat that the East thinks best to ignore, or one the East wants to take out?).

Even if there's no military conquest, it may be that there is a political one - even proud countries can become vassals through a mixture of political, military and economic pressure. Particularly if there is no internal unity.

Alternatively, the presence of that threat might make it easier to conquer other Isles peoples who want defence against yours.
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Corumayas wrote:The hardest thing about doing a Tjakori syllabary will probably be the fact that there's no information about the Tjakori language at all, as far as I know.
This calls for a pretty big mea culpa! I worked out the sound changes for Tjakori about a year ago, right after Dewrad posted P-W. After that, I pretty much entirely forgot about it. Lately, I've been working in fits and starts on Gezoro, and I've got most of the phonology and morphology finished. Hopefully the end of the year will get me working madly on both languages. I'm setting a goal of posting Gezoro by November's end and Tjakori by December's. Hopefully I'll actually make these deadlines for once!

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Now that I can see the zbb again, I thought I'd bring this discussion over here. I'm in favor of most of what Sal suggested there and here... I just want to respond to this bit:
- I don't think it should be moved further south. At the moment the valley is in the 30-45 bracket, I think, which is around Northern China. Northern China did fairly well for itself historically. Don't forget, for most of history Northern China was the populated and prosperous part of China. In Qin China, population density in some northern areas reached 25 times higher than in the south. It was only with the replacement of foxtail millet and wheat with rice cultivation that the south outpaced it. We're also on a par with Turkey (one of the oldest agricultural areas on Earth) and Greece (the most populated place in the world at one point (and perhaps we could see the shift from Ndak to mountain Daiadak as analogous with the shift from the middle east to mountainous pastoral Greece)).
I think there are two good reasons for moving the Aiwa a little to the south:

1. Radius has said that he imagined the Aiwa valley (and especially Kasca) as more like the Ganges than northern China, and his description of Kasca reflects this.

2. Regions north of the Aiwa are also civilized (Huyfarah and Siixtaguna). This makes more sense to me if they're around the latitude of northern China (rather than Manchuria or even Kamchatka).

Recently I've been thinking of the Yangtze valley as a pretty good earthly analogue for the Aiwa. (From my reading, it seems that the Yangtze was just as important in early China as the Huang, and rice agriculture there may have started about as early as millet in the north. If it was overtaken by the north around Qin times, the Aiwa valley is similarly overtaken by Huyfarah in our classical period.) That would make Xshalad more like southeast Asia or India rather than southern China, which I think is fine.

(I'm not convinced that Greece and Turkey are very useful as climate comparisons for the Aiwa valley; the Mediterranean is just too different from eastern continental climates.)


On a different subject, for what it's worth: the Proto-Isles lexicon clearly shows them as farmers/herders from a Mediterranean/middle eastern climate. They don't seem to have been civilized; the only term I can find related to larger social organization is míntzuq 'clan'. They could be pushed out to sea by expanding urban states, or they could start exploring the oceans for some other reason (do we know what prompted the Austronesian expansion?)... in any case, there might well be other groups in that family that stayed home in the eastern continent.
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kodé wrote:
Corumayas wrote:The hardest thing about doing a Tjakori syllabary will probably be the fact that there's no information about the Tjakori language at all, as far as I know.
This calls for a pretty big mea culpa! I worked out the sound changes for Tjakori about a year ago, right after Dewrad posted P-W. After that, I pretty much entirely forgot about it. Lately, I've been working in fits and starts on Gezoro, and I've got most of the phonology and morphology finished. Hopefully the end of the year will get me working madly on both languages. I'm setting a goal of posting Gezoro by November's end and Tjakori by December's. Hopefully I'll actually make these deadlines for once!
Better let Sano in on what you've got going on -- lest he produce some marvellous script, and you say "Ah! This does not fit my phonology!"

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Corumayas wrote: I think there are two good reasons for moving the Aiwa a little to the south:

1. Radius has said that he imagined the Aiwa valley (and especially Kasca) as more like the Ganges than northern China, and his description of Kasca reflects this.
I admit to not remembering the details of his description. But does he mean the bulk of the Ganges or the Ganges delta? If he means the ganges generally, then Kasca as it is is wetter than the ganges and about as warm (well, it's colder, but within the same category). Moving it further south will just make it even wetter and less ganges-like. If he means the delta, then that's unachievable climatically unless you move the Aiwa twenty or thirty degrees south. The mouth of the ganges is basically savannah.
As it is we've got a delta (like the ganges), we've got summer wet and winter dry (like the ganges), we've got a temperature range about the same as most of the ganges.

Also remember that although it's a similar latitutde to northern china, I've actually put the delta as wetter than northern china, more like middle china. I'm not entirely sure how defensible this is, and it may be that it should just be steppe like the upper Aiwa. It's a moot point anyway. As you go down the river the summers will get wetter, and you'll start getting hurricanes. Whether this will technically take it over the border into a humid continental climate I don't know. doubt it matters that much.
2. Regions north of the Aiwa are also civilized (Huyfarah and Siixtaguna). This makes more sense to me if they're around the latitude of northern China (rather than Manchuria or even Kamchatka).
This is a better point, but not irresoluble. Firstly, Huyfarah is not that far north. It's more like, say, Korea. Secondlay, isn't Siixtaguna settled from the Isles in any case? Siixtaguna's climate is certainly not impossible for civilisation (think northern New England, I guess), and if that civilisation arose elsewhere I don't think that it's an issue at all.

Recently I've been thinking of the Yangtze valley as a pretty good earthly analogue for the Aiwa. (From my reading, it seems that the Yangtze was just as important in early China as the Huang, and rice agriculture there may have started about as early as millet in the north. If it was overtaken by the north around Qin times, the Aiwa valley is similarly overtaken by Huyfarah in our classical period.)
Other way around. In ancient times, the yellow river was always the richer of the two. The yangtze only surpassed it in the Han period. The peopling of China by the Han was from the north; the early Chinese states were all in the north. Although rice cultivation is known from ancient times, really efficient rice cultivation requires extensive landscaping and irrigation, which only became possible later on. Additionally, the invasion of millet-eating northern chinese meant that millet was the main crop even in places where rice would have been more productive.

In any case, if you're talking about yangtze vs yellow river, it's no longer south china vs north china, but rather middle china vs north china, the yangtze being the dividing line.
That would make Xshalad more like southeast Asia or India rather than southern China, which I think is fine.
I though Radius had described it in more a Mississipi way than a hacking-trhough-the-jungle way. It wouldn't make it like the savannah of India, it would make it like the jungles of Indochina or the jungles of Guatamala.

(I'm not convinced that Greece and Turkey are very useful as climate comparisons for the Aiwa valley; the Mediterranean is just too different from eastern continental climates.)
True, but it should indicate that temperature alone isn't a major problem. And northern china, korea, the east coast of north america and the river plate area all did relatively well at development historically speaking.

On a different subject, for what it's worth: the Proto-Isles lexicon clearly shows them as farmers/herders from a Mediterranean/middle eastern climate. They don't seem to have been civilized; the only term I can find related to larger social organization is míntzuq 'clan'. They could be pushed out to sea by expanding urban states, or they could start exploring the oceans for some other reason (do we know what prompted the Austronesian expansion?)... in any case, there might well be other groups in that family that stayed home in the eastern continent.
Well, the mediterranean climate fits with the eastern continent.

I think one theory is that the austronesian expansion began when the chinese invaded china, pushing out the austronesians onto taiwan. From then on, expansion can be explained as the natural result of overpopulation and environment-degredation on small and constrained islands.








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