Nah, it's still better than anything I had to read in high school English class. But that's not saying much.Jar Jar Binks wrote:Even without the pathetically obvious plagiarism, this would still easily be the worst piece of so-called poetry ever written by anybody ever. I hope you're proud.
Creativity of the day
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Re: Creativity of the day
Siöö jandeng raiglin zåbei tandiüłåd;
nää džunnfin kukuch vklaivei sivei tåd.
Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei.
nää džunnfin kukuch vklaivei sivei tåd.
Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei.
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It's like T.S. Elliot crossed with e e cummings. You're free to interpret that as a compliment. I sure as fuck don't.
"It will not come by waiting for it. It will not be said, 'Here it is,' or 'There it is.' Rather, the Kingdom of the Father is spread out upon the earth, and men do not see it."
– The Gospel of Thomas
– The Gospel of Thomas
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'Tis a love poem, I might end up doin' some annotations at some point. Dewrad: I do have friends, they're just a little odd. Patiku: That's all I wrote. That's the finished poem, at least at the moment, and I don't forsee it being continued.bulbaquil wrote:...dhokarena56 wrote: *snip*
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*brain explodes*
Judging by the reactions of others, I would guess your brain did not explode because it couldn't handle such profundity. If anybody has constructive criticism, throw it at me.
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Learn the difference between art and insanity?dhokarena56 wrote:If anybody has constructive criticism, throw it at me.
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God, don't say things like that. He's just the sort of person who relishes being called "insane". You know, the kind who likes to think of himself as "kooky" and "unique", the one who bounces around declaring "Look how utterly bonkers I can be! Look, a spork! Aren't I cool and interesting? PAY ATTENTION TO ME!", in a desperate hope that his self-declared "insanity" masks the depressing, humdrum tedium of his personality.Astraios wrote:Learn the difference between art and insanity?dhokarena56 wrote:If anybody has constructive criticism, throw it at me.
Salmoneus wrote:(NB Dewrad is behaving like an adult - a petty, sarcastic and uncharitable adult, admittedly, but none the less note the infinitely higher quality of flame)
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To change the subject, I'll paste mine own creativity of the day. I made a little song thing:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/19419654/danza.mp3
Criticism (of the constructive sort) desired.
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/19419654/danza.mp3
Criticism (of the constructive sort) desired.
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stop writing foreverdhokarena56 wrote:If anybody has constructive criticism, throw it at me.
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I criticized constructively. You just have to decode the fragments~
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tezcatlip0ca
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Who is Rachel, dhokarena56?
EDIT: I was confusing you with Dampantingaya AND dunomapuka.
EDIT: I was confusing you with Dampantingaya AND dunomapuka.
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Re: Creativity of the day
I've not used that nick in a while.Canepari wrote:Dampantingaya
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My exceedingly adorabe, intelligent and bookish history teacher, out of whose class I switched because it was getting so bad I was writing Bob Dylan lyrics on my assignmentsCanepari wrote:Who is Rachel, dhokarena56?
EDIT: I was confusing you with Dampantingaya AND dunomapuka.
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My (or rather my girlsfriend's) creativity of the week:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Azi-Dwe69R4
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Azi-Dwe69R4
"Khal malenol akher venkhasa!"
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An, dhun, dhin. Dhin, dhun, an. And the devil came and sweeped up all our cookies. Reh2kele!dhokarena56 wrote:My exceedingly adorabe, intelligent and bookish history teacher, out of whose class I switched because it was getting so bad I was writing Bob Dylan lyrics on my assignmentsCanepari wrote:Who is Rachel, dhokarena56?
EDIT: I was confusing you with Dampantingaya AND dunomapuka.
See, I can do all that too.
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TomHChappell
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Sal thinks this is offensive.
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Yes, it's her! She is a MUA and a mask maker. This video is her first shot as a director and a producer. Must say it's the first time I've instantaneously liked a script/storyboard. I think she captured the spirit of my song beautifully.TomHChappell wrote:Nice!The Count wrote:My (or rather my girlsfriend's) creativity of the week:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Azi-Dwe69R4
Is Shara listed as a MUA on ModelMayhem?
Is this her home page?
If this is her portfolio, it's got even more creativity in it.
(I know about modelmayhem because my god-daughter is a model.)
"Khal malenol akher venkhasa!"
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This must be my unlucky day: I confused all five of dhokarena56, Dampantingaya, dunomapuka, Delalyra and Daistallia, not to mention Nortaneous and Salmoneus and a few more pairs...
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Re: Creativity of the day
Zoris and Zaris and Xonen and Xeon and Xeroderma Pigmentosum???
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I've made a guitar (pic courtesy of Wikipedia) my avatar now. I hope that's less confusing then.
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Sal thinks this is offensive.
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tezcatlip0ca
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I don't think so. I didn't even know there was a Zaris, and I would never confuse zeds with exes, much less Xeroderma Pigmentosum with her eight syllables. Xonen and Xeon, maaaaaybe.Zoris wrote:Zoris and Zaris and Xonen and Xeon and Xeroderma Pigmentosum???
Off topic, Zoris, do you still have the conscripts you created for everybody?
Off the off-topic, I say "zee", not "zed".
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I occasionally start thinking that two entirely different members are the same person for no good reason, and I have to intentionally break the association in my brain. Most recently (ie within the last month or so), I've thought of Zoris and Erde as the same person for some reason. 
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Canepari, the thread was pruned so I lost some requests, but I've also had many requests by PM. I've been busy lately but I promise to get to at least some of the requests I've had in the next month or so.
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There’s also another Shm, but I haven’t seen him around for a while.
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I'm only one of 2 people who's username begins with an "L" and is truely two words (unless I missed someone), though the other has only 2 non-pruned posts. (And their "l" isn't capitalized...)
Zain pazitovcor, sio? Sio, tovcor.
You can't read that, right? Yes, it says that.
You can't read that, right? Yes, it says that.
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