Help your conlang fluency (2)

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E mant?
For how long?

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Opilåsekim áhìglëx ùreyäl ëg. Fyáhätuilådyakim kon íreyäl sge irâlådya sge opilåvē áhïxyédelgå rêse.
/enjoy-1s-(Cc)PRS-NEG ALL-school COM-(unspecific time) now.DEIX | wait-1s-CAP-NEG abstract.ART BEN-(uns. time) cs.CNJ say-1s-CAP cs.CNJ enjoy-1s-HAB.PRS ALL-class-abstract.PL-1sPOS CLAR/
I do not enjoy school right now. I can't wait to get to the part when I can say I actually enjoy my classes.
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BEN = benefactive
CAP = "capabilitative"
(Cc)PRS = concurrent present, "happening right now"
CLAR = "clarifier" ("actually")
cs.CNJ = "clause stopper" conjunction

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Sa dhyffagel ang ngodha il i nyengin in.
It's hard to enjoy all your classes.

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I have translated Article 1 of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights.

ʾŠL ḴVL TVNDY YHRKH LV ʾFRQBH ŠY SḪVTR LV HNBL YH. ṖL ẔYVM VD TKYDY LV ḪKGDY LV YHDRM TY SR-RNT ŠY HTʾ ʾY YNHT.

ʾAšol ḵaval tovnedī yahrīka lav ʾīfīraqba šī sḫavtar lav hnūbal ya. Ṗal ẕayvam vīd tokyedī lav ḫakgadī lav yīhdaram tē sēr-ranat šī htaʾ ʾē yanhet.

All human beings are born free and equal in dignity and rights. They are endowed with reason and conscience and should act towards one another in a spirit of brotherhood.
ʾAšol ḵavad pulqam ʾifbižen lav ʾifšimeḻ lit maseḡrad lav lit n͛ubad. ʾUpulasim ṗal sa-panžun lav sa-ḥadṇ lav ṗal šarmaḵeš lit ʾaẏṭ waẏyadanun wižqanam.
- Article 1 of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights.

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Sa iost mivurand sa i fil si VD enevennin mi rebidh MhaM.
This is just a reminder TC threads are encouraged in C&C quickies.

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xox santor, agrexemas ata krolope eris et poxoras posoturuɹs ata denepe
Hello people, I'm creating a new language and decided to post something

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Thry wrote:Sa iost mivurand sa i fil si VD enevennin mi rebidh MhaM.
This is just a reminder TC threads are encouraged in C&C quickies.
Ya'asana ymetu kanlangasinti.
I still love that conlang.
[bɹ̠ˤʷɪs.təɫ]
Nōn quālibet inīquā cupiditāte illectus hoc agō
Yo te pongo en tu lugar...
Taisc mach Daró

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xox santor, agrexemas ata krolope eris et poxoras posoturuɹs ata denepe
Hello people, I'm creating a new language and decided to post something
A mam gwadh?
And how's it going?
Bristel wrote:Ya'asana ymetu kanlangasinti.
I still love that conlang.
'Raith! :mrgreen: Un-ynnin han mi dimmor volth.
Thanks! I haven't used it in a long time.

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Saothou ca hata z tomeo ne sha ca thou ca halesen ha.
[sɑo̯ˈtʰoː kɑ χɑˈtɑ z̩ toˈmø nɛ ˈʃɑ kɑ ˈtʰoː kɑ χɑˈʟɛ.sɛ̃ χɑ]
saothou
education
ca
GEN
hata
time
z
EX
tomeo
completed.thing
ne
PHYS
sha
1
ca
GEN
thou
knowledge
ca
GEN
halesen
house
ha
LOC

The semester is over, at my school.
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Adúljôžal ônal kol ví éža únah kex yaxlr gmlĥ hôga jô ônal kru ansu frú.
Ansu frú ônal savel zaš gmlĥ a vek Adúljôžal vé jaga čaþ kex.
Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh. Ônal zeh.

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Thry wrote:A mam gwadh?
And how's it going?
ŋekemeɹs uka lap sip teko
So far so good (lit: it is good while now)

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Ṟa-sēr haf ūfdatal ma haf yaškik nobdoš... Ẕay lēṟot ja falīnū nivi.
No-one read the my updates on my language... I fear for no help.

Ẕay sēvok:
I speak:
"ʾAhīkyad haf ǧorrok ya, ʾAhīlnad haf valṟovīb ya."
"Knowledge is my blade, Enlightenment my cause."
ʾAšol ḵavad pulqam ʾifbižen lav ʾifšimeḻ lit maseḡrad lav lit n͛ubad. ʾUpulasim ṗal sa-panžun lav sa-ḥadṇ lav ṗal šarmaḵeš lit ʾaẏṭ waẏyadanun wižqanam.
- Article 1 of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights.

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Ṟa-sēr haf ūfdatal ma haf yaškik nobdoš... Ẕay lēṟot ja falīnū nivi.
No-one read the my updates on my language... I fear for no help.
senomaso atse alena, siremas ata demen ileters!
Fear not my friend, for I am here to help!

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unya ke yauamya sahyan
Knowledge is to answer correctly.

pina ke kanyomya sahyan
Wisdom is to ask correctly.

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masako wrote:unya ke yauamya sahyan
Knowledge is to answer correctly.

pina ke kanyomya sahyan
Wisdom is to ask correctly.
ʾā?
Eh?

ʾAhīkyad haf ǧorrok ya, ʾAhīlnad haf valṟovīb ya.
Knowledge is my blade, Enlightenment my cause.
ʾAšol ḵavad pulqam ʾifbižen lav ʾifšimeḻ lit maseḡrad lav lit n͛ubad. ʾUpulasim ṗal sa-panžun lav sa-ḥadṇ lav ṗal šarmaḵeš lit ʾaẏṭ waẏyadanun wižqanam.
- Article 1 of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights.

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Thry wrote:Sa iost mivurand sa i fil si VD enevennin mi rebidh MhaM.
This is just a reminder TC threads are encouraged in C&C quickies.
Hyézilåse kiyë nüv sen tuis orulåni, gíj gálësilåtekim íce: "TC", yug retïnvùlnase? Màzyëlåni ùiziktäyid naëlrávålro sge gasegåse kon si orikxam gíj gyösegåsekim.
Hyézil
feel
å
1s
se
DUR.PRS
kiyë
COMP
nüv
noob
sen
one
tuis
because.CONJ
orul
ask
å
1s
ni,
FUT
gíj
but.CNJ
gálësil
realize
å
1s
te
PST
kim
NEG
í
BEN
ce:
1NOM
"TC",
TC
yug
WH.Q
retïnvùl
translate
na
3s.NOM
se?
DUR.PRS
Màzyël
wager
å
1s
ni
FUT
ú
INS
iziktä
cookie
yid
inorganic.PL
naël
two
multiple
vålro
ten
sge
cs.CNJ
gaseg
know
å
1s
se
DUR.PRS
kon
abstract.ART
si
no direction
orikxam
solution
gíj
but.CNJ
gyöseg
understand
å
1s
se
DUR.PRS
kim.
NEG

I feel like a noob for asking this, but I've been having trouble figuring it out on my own: what does TC stand for? I'll bet 20 cookies that I already kind of know the answer but just I don't realize it.

(Hm. At first I thought the gloss tag would be super useful, but instead it looks a bit cluttered. Maybe it just doesn't look so good when the language being translated is agglutinative)

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Translation Challenge

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Ultimate Ridley wrote:
Thry wrote:Sa iost mivurand sa i fil si VD enevennin mi rebidh MhaM.
This is just a reminder TC threads are encouraged in C&C quickies.
Hyézilåse kiyë nüv sen tuis orulåni, gíj gálësilåtekim íce: "TC", yug retïnvùlnase? Màzyëlåni ùiziktäyid naëlrávålro sge gasegåse kon si orikxam gíj gyösegåsekim.
Hyézil
feel
å
1s
se
DUR.PRS
kiyë
COMP
nüv
noob
sen
one
tuis
because.CONJ
orul
ask
å
1s
ni,
FUT
gíj
but.CNJ
gálësil
realize
å
1s
te
PST
kim
NEG
í
BEN
ce:
1NOM
"TC",
TC
yug
WH.Q
retïnvùl
translate
na
3s.NOM
se?
DUR.PRS
Màzyël
wager
å
1s
ni
FUT
ú
INS
iziktä
cookie
yid
inorganic.PL
naël
two
multiple
vålro
ten
sge
cs.CNJ
gaseg
know
å
1s
se
DUR.PRS
kon
abstract.ART
si
no direction
orikxam
solution
gíj
but.CNJ
gyöseg
understand
å
1s
se
DUR.PRS
kim.
NEG

I feel like a noob for asking this, but I've been having trouble figuring it out on my own: what does TC stand for? I'll bet 20 cookies that I already kind of know the answer but just I don't realize it.

(Hm. At first I thought the gloss tag would be super useful, but instead it looks a bit cluttered. Maybe it just doesn't look so good when the language being translated is agglutinative)
You should put in hyphens to show when things are the same word or a different word.

eg

Hyézil-
feel-
å-
1s-
se
DUR.PRS
kiyë
COMP
nüv
noob
sen
one
tuis
because.CONJ
orul-
ask-
å-
1s-
ni,
FUT

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Theta wrote:Translation Challenge
Pomåte átax çät kon orikxamdel yäl sen, gíj asyërgêlåtekim ùreyäl sáyëvtè (pomåse kon si dájüke ècüma ùreyäl sáyëvtè çät "interpretation challenge"). Ikilåse áløg iziktäyid naëlrávålro.
Pom-
identify-
å-
1s-
te
PST
á-
ALL-
tax
DEM
çät
COP
kon
abstract.ART
orikxam-
solution-
del
abstract.PL
yäl
possible
sen,
one
gíj
but.CNJ
asyërgêl-
witness-
å-
1s-
te-
PST-
kim
NEG
ù-
DUR-
reyäl
unspecific time
sáyëv-
recent-
ADV
(pom-
identify-
å-
1s-
se
DUR.PRS
kon
abstract.ART
si
no direction
dájüke
example
è-
POS-
cüma
Chuma
ù-
DUR-
reyäl
unspecific time
sáyëv-
recent-
ADV
çät
COP
"interpretation challenge").
interpretation challenge
Ikil-
give-
å-
1s-
se
DUR.PRS
á-
ALL-
løg
2sNOM
iziktä-
cookie-
yid
inorganic.PL
naël-
two-
rá-
multiple-
vålro.
ten

That's one of the possible phrases I thought it stood for, but I didn't see it used recently (Chuma's most recent example is called an "interpretation challenge"). You win 20 cookies.
finlay wrote:You should put in hyphens to show when things are the same word or a different word.

eg

Hyézil-
feel-
å-
1s-
se
DUR.PRS
kiyë
COMP
nüv
noob
sen
one
tuis
because.CONJ
orul-
ask-
å-
1s-
ni,
FUT
(Good idea.)

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Seselaitenka, fatauzi zantisa neselaifazanzatuu lalatunse. Salatuntenka, nantisa nantauzi yingetisa neselainannuzatuu lugusalatunsa. Nukuleuzufusate.
せ訳試、は文ざん語ね訳はざんざつうら解せ。さ解試、なん語なん文インゲ語ね訳なんぬざつうろぐさ解さ。ぬ初見さて。
A translation challenge means you translate a text to your language. An interpretation challenge apparently means you translate from someone else's language to English. It's the first time I've seen it.

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Nortaneous wrote:Vʼëng xë zë zi e s ʼEvröp, zi veng... ʼAmsërdam, Hag, Roterdam, Ötrext, Eynhovë, Breda, Gronëngë. ʼA zi vo nöʼ.
[ʔβɪŋ xɪ dʒɪ dʒjes ʔɛβɾʊp, dʒi βɛŋ... ʔamtʃɪɾdam, hǎɣ, ɾɔtɛɾdam, ʊtɾ̥ɛxt, ɛjnɔ̌βɪ, βɾɛda, ɣɾɔnɪŋɪ. ʔa dʒi βɔ nʊʔ]
If Vʼëng were spoken in Europe, it would have... Amsterdam, etc. But it would also look very different.
Es kholdum Ambimgim qhagul, es lyos gruts posts zha mere. Amqole zgu zo...
[ɛs ˈkxoɫdum amˈbiŋgiɴ qχaˈguɫ, ɛlʲlʲos ɣɾuts poʃtʃa mɛˈrɛ. ãˈʁoɫɛ zgu zo]
Looking for words in V'eng, I found this old post. So in Amqoli, they'd be...

Amstrdam, Demhax, Rotrdam, Itrext, Endoba, Breda, Gronimga.
[ãstɾədaɴ, dɛ̃hax, rotɾədaɴ, itɾɛxtə, ɛndoba, bɾɛda, ɣɾoniŋga]
Siöö jandeng raiglin zåbei tandiüłåd;
nää džunnfin kukuch vklaivei sivei tåd.
Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei.

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Nortaneous wrote:Amstrdam, Demhax, Rotrdam, Itrext, Endoba, Breda, Gronimga.
[ãstɾədaɴ, dɛ̃hax, rotɾədaɴ, itɾɛxtə, ɛndoba, bɾɛda, ɣɾoniŋga]
āmsyërtām, dinäg, rótyërtām, øtrëqt, ęndyövin, vrédä, grönyīŋìn
[ɑ̋məsjɛːr͡tʰɑ̋m, dɪnʰɑːg, ɹǒ̞tjɛːr͡tʰɑ̋m, øːtɹɛːk͡xət, ɛɪndjo̞ːvɪn, vɹɛ̌dɑː, gɹo̞ːnjɪ̋ŋɪ̂n]

Jun jálørenya: pomåse áçyacäŋyëgå çät yórükxòg èretïnvùlä sen; fetilørense áqyéçikyëgå çät åri?
[dʒun dʒɑ̌ˈløˌɹɛnjɑ | pʰo̞ˈmɔːsɛ ɑ̌s̪jɑˈtʃɑːŋjɛːˌgɔː s̪ɑːt jǒ̞ˈɹuːkʃô̞g ɛ̂ɹɛˈtʰɪːnvûlɑː sɛn | fɛtʰɪˈløˌɹɛnsɛ ɑ̌k͡xəjɛ̌s̪ɪkjɛˌgɔː s̪ɑːt ɔːɹɪ]
Jun
IMP
jál-
wait-
øren-
2PL-
ya:
IMP
pom-
identify-
å-
1s-
se
DUR.PRS
á-
ALL-
çyacäŋ-
comment-
yë-
DEM-
1s.POS
çät
COP
yórük-
general question-
xòg
test
è-
POS-
retïnvùl-
translate-
ä
GER
sen;
one
fetil-
judge-
øren-
2PL-
se
DUR.PRS
á-
ALL-
qyéçik-
analysis-
yë-
DEM-
1s.POS
çät
COP
åri?
AFF

Wait, this counts as a TC, doesn't it?
Lit. "Wait, all of you: I'm seeing this comment of mine as (conforming to) a translation challenge; do you all judge this analysis of mine to be correct?"

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Sa maes be VB xD.
That's more like a borrowing challenge xD.

MD be: pir, tridhogo "a-avannen hen" mi lemmig.
A TC goes like: guys, translate "I had loved her" into your conlangs.

Mae sano, mam gwadh?
Hey sano, what's up?

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ʾīšī haf jḫūdī ya, Valkūmī Yat-Vṛḵaẕīkam!
You are my son, the King of Vrkhazhi!
ʾAšol ḵavad pulqam ʾifbižen lav ʾifšimeḻ lit maseḡrad lav lit n͛ubad. ʾUpulasim ṗal sa-panžun lav sa-ḥadṇ lav ṗal šarmaḵeš lit ʾaẏṭ waẏyadanun wižqanam.
- Article 1 of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights.

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Ig haptē zy gilift.
1SG.SUBJ have.PST 3SG.FEM.OBJ PERF-love-PERF
I had loved her.

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