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Travis B. wrote:
Dē Graut Bʉr wrote:Bračut! Apan žäk "jäğpitlatin" tamnu böğana. Mäk buhağpit.
Thank you! I like the way you say "birtday". It made me laugh.
tʰɨ̰ŋ ɲó kɐblɛ̰ nɨ̄ ʔɛ́k sæ̤u tʰɨ̰ŋ təŋūn mǣi ŋæ̀ mæ̀.
language POSS.2S CAUS-remember INV 1S OBL language QUALITY-alive real some EGO
Your language reminds me of a number of real-life languages.
Bälig aisunež?
Which languages?
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jal wrote:Api bahsde! Mi di tingk yu go ol pas dis.
Happy birthday! I thought you were older.
ʔɛ́k cʰɑ̄ kɑ̤ ɓɑ̤u lɨ́ sɔ̄m mæ̀.
1S PAST.PFV think also DIST.S CLASS EGO
I thought that too.
Leqip fos tladzaqit.
It seems you were wrong.
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Dē Graut Bʉr wrote:Bračut! Apan žäk "jäğpitlatin" tamnu böğana. Mäk buhağpit.
Thank you! I like the way you say "birtday". It made me laugh.
Wowgrrr grrowrry grrr Bearrr grrowrry grrr "grrmph plop." Mirremgrrmph grrowl Mirremgrrmph groove "grrmph plop" prry.
adult.male.mountain.lion happy PREP bear happy PREP adult.female.mountain.lion drop tigress-adult.female say tigress-adult.female think adult.female.mountain.lion drop disgusting
I'm glad you like (the term) "grrmph plop." My cousin, the tigress, says she thinks it's gross.
Ši je tävig.
She's weird.

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Dē Graut Bʉr wrote:
Travis B. wrote:
Dē Graut Bʉr wrote:Bračut! Apan žäk "jäğpitlatin" tamnu böğana. Mäk buhağpit.
Thank you! I like the way you say "birtday". It made me laugh.
tʰɨ̰ŋ ɲó kɐblɛ̰ nɨ̄ ʔɛ́k sæ̤u tʰɨ̰ŋ təŋūn mǣi ŋæ̀ mæ̀.
language POSS.2S CAUS-remember INV 1S OBL language QUALITY-alive real some EGO
Your language reminds me of a number of real-life languages.
Bälig aisunež?
Which languages?
lɨ́ tæ̀ kɾɛ́ ɾɑ̤ lɐblɑ̰i sɜ̀n cɨsɨlɐwī ʔī cɨmɐɟɐɾī ʔī cɨɾʊmɐnī ʔī cɨtɨɾɨkī kɑ̤.
DIST.S CLASS seem as RESULT-mix POSS.3P LANG-Slavic and LANG-Magyar and LANG-Romanian and LANG-Turkish DED
It seems to be a mixture of Slavic, Magyar, Romanian, and Turkish.
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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ʔɛ́k ɗæ̀im ɾɑ̤ sʊlæ̰i ɾæ̀ ɓo̰k jɛ̀m ɾæ̀ kʰɛ́ɛm hɨ̄m bɑ̰ ʔī jí ɾɑ̤ jo̤o hɨ̄m cík mæ̀ lɛ̰ lǣ ʔɛ́k kɾí ɗæ̀im ɾɑ̤ tɪhǽu mɑ̀ ɡɑ̄ tæ̀.
1S play as peasant or person hill or slave one CLASS and NEG as animal one CLASS if COMP 1S would play as role INST PROX.S CLASS
If I were to roleplay in this language, it would be as a peasant or hill tribesperson or slave not as an animal.
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Aeiougrrr bi bat grrakerrr!
human also/two one animal
A human is an animal, too!

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Naiketileigan nanfuzupitisa falusezei?
Is that the language of furries?

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Travis B. wrote:It seems to be a mixture of Slavic, Magyar, Romanian, and Turkish.
Som ray Balkan lof cayl.
A true Balkan love child.


JAL

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finlay wrote:Naiketileigan nanfuzupitisa falusezei?
Is that the language of furries?
Grrowl? Meow. Grrowl grrowrrr grrowl!
mountain.lion.language NEG mountain.lion.language mountain.lion language
Mountain Lion? No. Mountain Lion is the language of mountain lions!

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Travis B. wrote:
Dē Graut Bʉr wrote:
Travis B. wrote:
Dē Graut Bʉr wrote:Bračut! Apan žäk "jäğpitlatin" tamnu böğana. Mäk buhağpit.
Thank you! I like the way you say "birtday". It made me laugh.
tʰɨ̰ŋ ɲó kɐblɛ̰ nɨ̄ ʔɛ́k sæ̤u tʰɨ̰ŋ təŋūn mǣi ŋæ̀ mæ̀.
language POSS.2S CAUS-remember INV 1S OBL language QUALITY-alive real some EGO
Your language reminds me of a number of real-life languages.
Bälig aisunež?
Which languages?
lɨ́ tæ̀ kɾɛ́ ɾɑ̤ lɐblɑ̰i sɜ̀n cɨsɨlɐwī ʔī cɨmɐɟɐɾī ʔī cɨɾʊmɐnī ʔī cɨtɨɾɨkī kɑ̤.
DIST.S CLASS seem as RESULT-mix POSS.3P LANG-Slavic and LANG-Magyar and LANG-Romanian and LANG-Turkish DED
It seems to be a mixture of Slavic, Magyar, Romanian, and Turkish.
Je jäk čiqökitu buosu.
That's the answer I expected.

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Dē Graut Bʉr wrote:Je jäk čiqökitu buosu.
That's the answer I expected.
wɛ̤ lɨ́ sɔ̄m dɨ́ ɓəɲɛ̀k mæ̀?
INT.YES.NO DIST.S CLASS PAST.IPFV QUALITY-intend EGO
Was that intentional?
Last edited by Travis B. on Fri Mar 23, 2018 4:23 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Travis B. wrote:
Dē Graut Bʉr wrote:Je jäk čiqökitu buosu.
That's the answer I expected.
wɛ̤ lɨ́ sɔ̄m dɨ́ ɓəɲɛ̀k mæ̀?
INT.YES.NO DIST.S CLASS PAST.IPFV QUALITY-intend EGO
Was that intentional?
Bådeǧ semei cadin bame čipedin dana dzedi zaisut aisud, ja jivit büölit budzaqnu mäk žäk čitamitu aisunež.
one.day simply know-PST.1SG how develop-PRES.INF it-ACC from old language-GEN and FUT-PST.3SG become-PST.INF remind-PRES.PRTC 1SG.ACC 2SG.NOM mention-PST.PRTC language-PL-DAT
One day I just knew how to develop it from the proto-language, and then it ended up reminding me of the languages you mentioned.

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Weh har gla: təqitóó:n ga hó təqitóó:n b'oohm lï:.
/wɛ̤ hɑ̀ glɑ́ təʔɪtóon ɡɑ̄ hō təʔɪtóon ɓɔ̤ɔm lɨ́/
INT 2S like QUALITY-write PROX.S than QUALITY-write other DIST.S
Do you like this orthography more than the other orthography?
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Ňa apan dana ňirut jaňa ňindir.
I like it neither more nor less.

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Ňa apan dana ňirut jaňa ňindir.
I like it neither more nor less.

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«ñ» cär lai lêê si:!
"ñ" many EMPH exist DIR
/ɲɑ̄ cæ̀ lɑ̄i lɘ̄ɘ sí/
So many "ñ̈́"s!
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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na'etla nomok
I don't like it.

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Yér e:k thäh kabïd'ot təqitóó:n ga kah?
/jè ʔɛ́k tʰæ̤ kɐbɨɗɔ̄t təʔɪtóon gɑ̄ kɑ̤/
INT.HOW 1S can CAUS-COMP-good QUALITY-write PROX.S DED
How could I improve this orthography?
Last edited by Travis B. on Sun Mar 25, 2018 12:35 am, edited 1 time in total.
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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ya ke peyam ohimya
Take away the diacritics.

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Weh ga diuh biud'ot kah?: «Yeir e:k thaeh kabiud'ot teqitoou:n ga kah?»
/wɛ̤ gɑ̄ dɨ̤ bɨɗɔ̄t kɑ̤ || jè ʔɛ́k tʰæ̤ kɐbɨɗɔ̄t təʔɪtóon gɑ̄ kɑ̤/
INT.YES.NO PROX.S CLASS COMP-good DED INT.HOW 1S can CAUS-COMP-good QUALITY-write PROX.S DED
Is this better?: "How could I improve this orthography?"
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Fix frágʷir fokin fagtr fegréida flupizde. Fantéi wótin węnu wormazde wostnizde.
Vy fraus lipti oss fatt langig oss dē lyfflúting. Zess fannti a witt zwan inn dē warrm wass.
Fie fräčir föčegit dze feǧad lüpiž. Čišentit äči birnutna süta boinaž.
Five women were walking along the river of life. They found a white swan in the warm water.

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Travis B. wrote:Is this better?
tamaha
It is better.

ima na nomo
I like it now.

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Wowgrrr grroove Grrmph pluck Wowgrrr crraw.
adult.male.mountain.lion think/want adult.female.mountain.lion pluck adult.male.mountain.lion claw
I need to cut my claws.

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Vijay wrote:Wowgrrr grroove Grrmph pluck Wowgrrr crraw.
adult.male.mountain.lion think/want adult.female.mountain.lion pluck adult.male.mountain.lion claw
I need to cut my claws.
Weh har yi: kri: toou:n kho ngaer ehium maer?
/wɛ̤ hɑ̀ jí kɾí tóon kʰō ŋæ̀ ʔəhɨ̄m mæ̀/
INT.YES.NO 2S NEG would scratch thing some QUALITY-one EGO
Wouldn't you just scratch something?
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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Travis B. wrote:
Vijay wrote:Wowgrrr grroove Grrmph pluck Wowgrrr crraw.
adult.male.mountain.lion think/want adult.female.mountain.lion pluck adult.male.mountain.lion claw
I need to cut my claws.
Weh har yi: kri: toou:n kho ngaer ehium maer?
/wɛ̤ hɑ̀ jí kɾí tóon kʰō ŋæ̀ ʔəhɨ̄m mæ̀/
INT.YES.NO 2S NEG would scratch thing some QUALITY-one EGO
Wouldn't you just scratch something?
Grrowrrr! Xcrratch xcrratch xcrratch. Tab grroove crraw, prrucked jaixe tweetrrr!
yes scratch scratch scratch then look claw plucked like bird
Yes! I scratch and scratch, then look at my claws, and voila! They're plucked like birds.

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Travis B. wrote:ʔɛ́k ɗæ̀im ɾɑ̤ sʊlæ̰i ɾæ̀ ɓo̰k jɛ̀m ɾæ̀ kʰɛ́ɛm hɨ̄m bɑ̰ ʔī jí ɾɑ̤ jo̤o hɨ̄m cík mæ̀ lɛ̰ lǣ ʔɛ́k kɾí ɗæ̀im ɾɑ̤ tɪhǽu mɑ̀ ɡɑ̄ tæ̀.
1S play as peasant or person hill or slave one CLASS and NEG as animal one CLASS if COMP 1S would play as role INST PROX.S CLASS
If I were to roleplay in this language, it would be as a peasant or hill tribesperson or slave not as an animal.
Ga pha? Zarali lyajdamisha bzhguxesha dzga pheda bgulshi hamash jondurshi khri meli. Bgulshi keda budrashe bunjugru bzhguxe tsuli; lyoshi qam mera tkemash lipshe tsugli tsxamskulu mera dzexa zgu le tsuphe. Jondure zga kharshi bo ju lchare qaskulu. Zarali lada (bishxal az ndures) lyantu lum mampha mazo mera dzga ketsi nduba pacha philya zoduri chuli. Lyajdam dzexalyu bodryuba kliq. Dursha qashxiz jagba goradam henmxaz baratqandri dqeramara pharyazhdamgu gi kebzhgu chuzruq, zdura hi chuqzlus chuborgus chulytsors chublexpshes chushchiras chunjilaxesatqelimchigramzhdiqlis.
[ga pˣa || zaraˈʎi ˈʎadʒdamiʃa ˈbʒɣuxeʃa dzɣa ˈpʰeða bɣuɫˈʃi haˈmaʃ dʒondurˈʃi kʰri meˈʎi || ˈbɣuɫʃi keˈða buðraˈʃe bundʒuˈɣru ˈbʒɣuxe tsuʎi | ʎoˈʃi qã ˈmera ˈtkemaʃ ʎiˈpʃe tsuˈɣʎi tsˣãˈskuɫu ˈmera ˈdzexa zɣu ʎe tsuˈpʰe || dʒoˈndure zɣa kˣarˈʃi bo dʒu ˈɫtʃare qaˈskuɫu || zaraˈʎi ɫaˈda ˈbiʃxaɫ az nduˈres ˈʎantu nũ mãˈpˣa maˈzo ˈmera dzɣa ˈketsi nduˈβa ˈpatʃa ˈpʰiʎa zoˈðuri tʃuˈʎi || ˈʎadʒdam ˈdzexaʎu ˈboðjuβa kʎəʁ || ˈdurʃa qaˈʃxiz ˈdʒaɣba ˈgoraðam ˈhẽnxaz ˈbaratχandji ˈdʁeramara ˈpˣajaʒdãgu gi keˈbʒɣu tʃuˈzruʁ | zduˈra hi tʃuʁˈzɫus tʃuβorˈɣus tʃuʎˈtsors tʃuˈβlexpʃes tʃuˈʃtʃiras tʃuˈndʒiɫaxesatχeɲĩtʃigrãʒdjəʁʎis]
what said? peasant-PL hill-dweller-PL=and slave-PL=and DEM three man-PAR major class-PAR INAN.PL 3.S.TOP=COP || man-PAR most whether=know whether=NEG-do slave 3.L.TOP=be | them=PAR many because most_of_the_time HABIT 3.L.TOP-do 3.L.TOP-HABIT-obey therefore freedom with them 3.L.TOP=think | class-PRE in thing-PAR only this ruler-PRE GER-obey || peasant on_the_other_hand (anyone as_long_as NEG-see-them) will of_them 3.S.TOP-can 3.S.TOP-act_in_accordance_with because DEM opinion NEG-have and_furthermore negligible ability 3.S.TOP-have || hill_tribesman free_man only 3.T.TOP-be-1.ABS || because fucking shit-V>N turd-dweller faggot father-lacking horse-mother laughably_small-penis REL NMLZ-order_around 3.L.TOP-try_to-us OBL_TOPIC we.ERG 3.L.TOP-kill-3.ABS 3.L.TOP-destroy-3.ABS 3.L.TOP-brutally_murder-3.ABS 3.L.TOP-riddle_with_stab_wounds-3.ABS 3.L.TOP-dismember-3.ABS 3.L.TOP-eternal-fire.INS-torture-place-send_to-3.ABS
What? Peasants, hill tribesmen, and slaves are the three main classes in the world. Most people are slaves, whether they know it or not; many of them are so used to doing what they're told that they think they're free. It isn't in their nature to do anything but obey. Peasants can do what they want (as long as they don't bother anyone else) because no one cares and they can't do much anyway. Only hill tribesmen are free. Because we endeavor to communicate that generally undesirable results will obtain as a result of attempting to change this state of affairs.
Siöö jandeng raiglin zåbei tandiüłåd;
nää džunnfin kukuch vklaivei sivei tåd.
Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei. Chei.

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E:k jei:n la'ikho'm maer.
/ʔɛ́k ɟén lɐʔɪkʰɔ̰m mæ̀/
1S love RESULT-explain EGO
That is quite the gloss there.
Dibotahamdn duthma jallni agaynni ra hgitn lakrhmi.
Amuhawr jalla vowa vta hlakrhi hdm duthmi xaja.
Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro. Irdro.

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