Help your conlang fluency (2)

[GrinningManiac]

Seo bist mo’sontalfta
Heil, Ea bin Saschl Feiganweiradansson Ingancin, Grafad Stwpe Sieneane. Bisseaibh, Ea bin schainn cac mo’cata nobha. Ea bin Dirieaith morr! Ea cachainn ceaith mor, hvái mo’vodr tofachainn, hvát Ceazghai Stwdanach bidhr trotsotlfachainn ee, hvái ea bin nobhr. Ea bidhr cachainn air stwp sieneamh, pair tvwieamh. Mo’ceazgh bist Onn Baschtwtadr, Albscin awi It Scar Dhoscischee.
This is my record
Hello, I am Sashal Ironforgerson, Kin of Ingr, Miner of Stoop Seven. Today I start to work my new job. I am very excited. I will work very hard because my father saids that the Chiefs of the Stoops will be watching me because I am new. I will be working on Stoop seven, Second Team. My chief is Ong Shieldbreaker, a kin of Albi from the Burning Mountain.

[Nannalu]

뗄ᄆ 칼 켈ᄐ랑엩 옹옽 카웅늨 팤 에. 치우 까. 필요 팥 엘ᄑ랑엩옄 알 에!
tselm- kal kelt-langet ongot kaungneuq pak e. nyiu qa. pilyo pat elp-langet-yak al e!
Germ- and celt-langs are starting to get on my nerves. Too many. We need some more elf-langs in this place!

[ol bofosh]

Agede seste ai sedesc dou tarset nosardant, man eus, màbols tursanys è ont sau patuc.
This afternoon has been very autumn-like, with wind, passing clouds and a shy sun.

Sukifis sifurp vawerin gotweth davon!
water flow-PST yesterday night at
It rained last night!

God, that's a terribly long-winded translation.

[Thry]

뗄ᄆ 칼 켈ᄐ랑엩 옹옽 카웅늨 팤 에. 치우 까. 필요 팥 엘ᄑ랑엩옄 알 에!
tselm- kal kelt-langet ongot kaungneuq pak e. nyiu qa. pilyo pat elp-langet-yak al e!
Germ- and celt-langs are starting to get on my nerves. Too many. We need some more elf-langs in this place!

El Sindarin es una lenga celto-élfica.
Sindarin is a celt-elf-lang.

[Grimalkin]

šōŋək kurəttejes ō mīməɬjul ɣamnijaksəjč čenjakɨttɨ ɣojmˤ
once fay-DIM-DAT INST Nairutin.ERG 1S-language.ERG speak-IRR-3S.DAT try
An elf once tried to speak my language, Nairutin

cəi ʁustən məgɨlotātˤ ʁošumbɨkūqet ol čəuŋˤ šūdruxlɨ
but all-ERG.PL REL-be_glottalised-3P.ABS consonant-PART-ERG.PL 3S.ABS INCHO CAUS-3S.ERG-AOR-cry-3S.ABS
But all the glottalised consonants made her cry

[Nannalu]

뗄ᄆ 칼 켈ᄐ랑엩 옹옽 카웅늨 팤 에. 치우 까. 필요 팥 엘ᄑ랑엩옄 알 에!
tselm- kal kelt-langet ongot kaungneuq pak e. nyiu qa. pilyo pat elp-langet-yak al e!
Germ- and celt-langs are starting to get on my nerves. Too many. We need some more elf-langs in this place!

El Sindarin es una lenga celto-élfica.
Sindarin is a celt-elf-lang.

뚀코 신타린샄 옹, 수이란! 이하이수 옹 피사우 하이 훈핲사 옹.
tsyoko sintalinsak ong, suilan! ihai-su ong pisau hai hunhap-sa ong.
But Sindarin is cool, though! It's understandable why he mixed the two.

타이콩 토훌 옹 일까 칼 무 람 잇타 파.
taikong kohul ong ilqa kal mu lam ista pa.
Work is boring today and I have nothing to do.

[GrinningManiac]

Ea bin atlachainn, hvát Sindarin bist Vilsch?
I thought Sindarin was Welsh?

Ea navenn dha'eigan trodac Ailfai, hvát omh ea cha dh'atlachan. Alir beigh Mairi-Swa il draidwnai
I've never seen elves that I liked. They're all Mary-Sues or bastards.

[Izambri]

Agede seste ai sedesc dou tarset nosardant, man eus, màbols tursanys è ont sau patuc.
This afternoon has been very autumn-like, with wind, passing clouds and a shy sun.

Illa pintura de tua firma se videt multo bene (et de facto vadit bene cum illo postem tam bene). ¿De de unde illam tomasti?
The painting in your sig is very beautiful (and goes pretty well with your post too). Where did you take it from?

Èu brec n'onde saniseve tir Lawrence Alma-Tadema, anamedatz Ont molemards.
It's part of a painting by Lawrence Alma-Tadema, titled An Oleander.

[GrinningManiac]

Seo bist wlitigr morr!
It is very beautiful!

[Nortaneous]

Sukifis sifurp vawerin gotweth davon!
water flow-PST yesterday night at
It rained last night!

God, that's a terribly long-winded translation.

could be worse

Tegnar hvadun jäntyd y merst kjan mäst.
[ˈtsɛŋɐ ˈxʷaðʊ̃ɲ ˈjeə̯r̥ʏ̌ ˈmɛʂ cɐ̃ ˈmæç]
PST-3S rain give LOC over_there 0 night

however

Kʼeññasʼa.
kʼe-ñ-ña-sʼa
night-SENS.PAST-C11.A-rain

Arve is pretty much the least concise message, mostly since it requires auxiliaries and isn't pro-drop, and will add unstressed filler words to keep the stress pattern. Miar, however, is even more concise than Kannow (which requires about 2/3 the space of English, generally) because... well, I'm not really sure, I guess the affixes are shorter or something.

[Nannalu]

아아, 뚀코렅 알페샄 옹, 아이테 파 콘랑 옹추 잇타.
Aaaa, tsyoko-lat alpesak ong, ai-te pa kon-lang ong-nyu ista.
Aw, Arve is so awesome, I'd love t have a conlang like it.

[Izambri]

Agede seste ai sedesc dou tarset nosardant, man eus, màbols tursanys è ont sau patuc.
This afternoon has been very autumn-like, with wind, passing clouds and a shy sun.

Sukifis sifurp vawerin gotweth davon!
water flow-PST yesterday night at
It rained last night!

God, that's a terribly long-winded translation.

Oàs! Èu dou saig i hel·leu:
Wow! It's shorter in Hellesan:

Tornall bressat.
past-night rain-PST.3S

[Thry]

Tornall bressat.
past-night rain-PST.3S

Let's make this a TC.
Anoct ploveu/pluieu/plou.
Gloss is as yours.

Com es "plou", el present, en Hellei?
How is "it rains", the present, in Hellesan?

[Izambri]

Tornall bressat.
past-night rain-PST.3S

Let's make this a TC.
Anoct ploveu/pluieu/plou.
Gloss is as yours.

Com es "plou", el present, en Hellei?
How is "it rains", the present, in Hellesan?

In marís n'epistareu "present indicative" is brèsse "it rains" (with accent, because bresse "rain". Also, in some dialects, bres).
In marís perisauri n'epistareu "periphrastical present indicative" is ès bressany "it's raining".

[Leliel]

Kesasine, sotankaht tayka.
this-place previous.night rain
It rained here last night.

(Masah kerevet. Teti teverei vekuna isah paokahla.)
PST true-ADVR point first during time large-GEN
(It really did. First time in a while.)

[Kereb]

chapa`ab basha` eshete`ip bul
i've just lost my job

pel i tsulshol ya le chawatskīm i yimkwapa`īk
the boss says our company is out of money

`o ya le lū`īk i mā` shalap sāshsu` tseh -- e la kwaka`ab`iwin
and we can wait indefinitely to be payed, with interest

`o tem kēl`awak yimkwap, ba tayata`ī shalap, `an kin yan tseh
or accept company stock in place of our pay for now

`o tewebeshete`ān tseh.
or be laid off.

tesilti ish tsulsholo`ip le lū`īyoh shalapa`ip paya,
not trusting that my boss will be able to pay me any time soon,

`o temochti ish `uku nak kēl`awak yimkwap e te`amanti chot,
and not liking the idea of stock in a company that's not making any money,

sewesh bul ya tewebeshet.
I chose the layoff.

... tsutsu`ī soh i chē`ī tsulsholo`ip i shalapa`ip `an shoyo` e chapak
... this means my boss will have to pay me for the work i've already done

tsawah, chalāp ewe bul.
but, I'm finished now.

[masako]

chapa`ab basha` eshete`ip bul :(
i've just lost my job :(

ya tsaya
Damn, son.

na koya
I'm sorry.

[Boşkoventi]

Tornall bressat.
past-night rain-PST.3S

Let's make this a TC.

Cunak.
Done.

chapa`ab basha` eshete`ip bul
i've just lost my job

ya tsaya
Damn, son.

na koya
I'm sorry.

Pai ci.
Me too.

[Jipí]

i've just lost my job :(

Simalyang.
I'm sorry.

[Thry]

chapa`ab basha` eshete`ip bul
i've just lost my job

Lamento mult! Aspero i troves alc.
I'm very sorry! I hope you find something.

Una (astúpida) rhyma infantil ad hoc a practiquer las vocals nel dialect del sud de meia lenga:
A (stupid) ad hoc nursery rhyme to practice vowels in my conlang's Southern dialect:

Y és au y es?
Il ha de aga,
I el ou y es,
Il eu al ou.

/i ɛs ɐ i es | il a (d)ə ag | i əl ow i es | il ew ɐl ow/
[i ɛ ɐ i e | y a ə ɑ | i o u i e | y ø ɔ u]

Are you there or is it there?
He has some water,
and the egg is there,
he went for the egg.

[Imralu]

chapa`ab basha` eshete`ip bul
i've just lost my job

pel i tsulshol ya le chawatskīm i yimkwapa`īk
the boss says our company is out of money

Daliau.
dali-a-u
sorry.for-OBL-2s
"I'm sorry (to hear that).

Na i li cima qi e cu hu zi ainsun.
na i li cim-a qi e cu u zi ain-sun
1s PRED PRF through/experience-OBL event ATTR same ADV TEMP year-before
"I went through the same thing last year."

I fa!
PRED dirty/disgusting
"It's fucked!"

Uá i tsu za?
uá i tsu za
2s PRED work what
"What do/did you do?" / "What was your job?"

[Kereb]

Uá i tsu za?
uá i tsu za
2s PRED work what
"What do/did you do?" / "What was your job?"

kahashte`ek
animator

Daliau.
dali-a-u
sorry.for-OBL-2s
"I'm sorry (to hear that).

moch bul ya kē`hōl e `umul
I like your root-word for "sorry"

[GrinningManiac]

Hveneginn, diea asta it drann sontlschee, hvát pimh mo'tafodach fabreonach il schiteonach, och nabhenn ea nan fatachainn tofac hvat.
Sometimes I get the urge to write in my languages, constructed or natural, but I never know what to say.

[clawgrip]

Aadang luang ork gmar.
that.is.why thread this exist
That's why we have this thread.

[Nannalu]

타이콩랕 일 옹! ᄁ라 음꾸 파.
Taikong-lat il ong! Qla eumqu pa.
Work is boring! I'm drinking tea.